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~philosopher~ vs 9th Degree
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6 - 12 Lines 3-0 is a k.o. No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topical Battle: Being framed for murdering your wife good luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 10-13-04 at 11:21 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 09:55 PM.
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~philosopher~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 09:56 PM.
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Standin' in court, hands folded at my waist Watchin' false testimonies shape the outcome of my case Blank look on my face, one of her colleagues at the stand I knew she was fuckin' him, he prolly did it, damn! It's gettin' hot, I'm sweatin', nervous, I didn't do this shit I feel like Harrison Ford in the beginning of The Fugitive I ain't used to this, dishonor of bein' framed Although a .45 with my prints laid next to where she was slain And I was passed out on the floor, empty vodka bottle in my hand Goddamn! All this planned just 'cuz she already had a man Her fam givin' me cold stares, make me wish that they killed me Verdict's in, 'fore judge opened his mouth I know I'm guilty Damn... |
Me and my boys are at the bar, we get into a little fight/
I get roughed up a bit, but everybody else is allright/ As night subsides and dusk arrives I deside to pack it up and go home/ Alas, I arrive to a wide open door, and realise that I am not alone/ I recall hearing a loud sound "Freeze sir! Get on the Ground!"/ As I look around I see my wifes dead body, was she shot down?/ "Officer, this is my wife, I wouldn't do this, I swear i'm innocent"/ He replies with a chauckle "If only I had a buck everytime I heard this"/ I get thrown in jail with no bail, destined to live a morbid life in my empty-cell, it's earth in hell/ But thats the least of my problems, they think I killed my wife, my life is like an empty-shell/ I remember, while drunk I had a fight on that horrifick night with my beloved wife/ *Reaches in pocket, pulls out bloody nife* It can't be!,*The man ends his life*/ |
Ok uppin this...........................................
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Word, let's get the voting started already!!!...50
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Damn ya'll dont sleep on this uppin...............
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Vote on this already, I wanna close some battles so I can do more battles lol yay for battles I need a beer...
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Uppin come on you damn sleepers ! :) vote on this.
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Damn bitches vote, ps. This battle dedicated to almo, my friend who died of the ugly desiese.... just playin wit you
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Fuck it y'all, vote on this shit already goddamnit
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Voted For: 9th Degree
these we both pretty good but i like 9th's spit better just because it flwos better when ur reading it and its a little easier to follow n i can see some ish like that holla at ya boy http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=155562 |
uppin this........................................
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This was feedback posted for ~philosopher~
good battle we have here, good luck fam
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Voted For: ~philosopher~
checkin polls n shit, nice verse........................ Removed. |
This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
honestly this was a real close...............both had very good imagery, creativity..........i really liked how the philoshopher ended his....same with 9th degree.......this was a real close battle but ima go with 9th degree for have a better structure and slightly better flow...both had good verses but 9th takes this
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This was feedback posted for ~philosopher~
i can't vote.............................................. ..wtf!
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ok crew vote doesn't count, other guy didn't have enough posts so his don't count it's 1-0 9th Degree uppin this |
ok 1-0 lets get the votes going
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Yo, uppin' this shit for some votes already y'all...
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Uppin' this shit again for no votin' lazy motherfuckers...
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Fuck, uppin' this shit man, now I'ma go get me some muffins...
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Uppin, wake up ya damn sleepers
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Fuckin uppin this sleepers come on vote
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Voted For: 9th Degree
philosher: man that wa splan weak you had weak stucture and weak punches hwat can i say some metas but weak...weak vocab man that was weak hella weak i cant say to much but that was weak lol............................................... .............................................3/10 bad stucture and bad flow whats up with that dawg... 9th Degree: nice good stucture good punches not bad came ahrd nice vocab in most parts no real out standing multis but it was a hot verse with soem good stucture and flow...a bit wordplay not bad dawg.............................................. .................................................. .8/10 one sided battle i think you'll out rule this return the favour here: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156958 |
Omg, your not serious, fucking fagget, i'm not in a good mood either, but wha ever, i'll let this count since i'm not a bitch, but he said I had no punches lmao, WHO HAS PUNCHES IN A TOPICAL BATTLE DUMBASS.... Damn! uppin this, give 9 one more so he can get his k.o and end this slept on battle.
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Damn, uppin' this shit again for some real votes, I'll get that Xclusive vote dq'd if you want bro...
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uppin this......
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uppin this peeps let's get the votes in.
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Uppin this ya'll
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uppitty up up up!
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uppin this damn it
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damn, can someone just drop a fucking vote please?
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uppin this peeps
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uppin peeps, drop an honest vote plz
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uppin this people, damn don't sleep
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uppin this, and come to council for godes sake
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no let it go, personally I think I lost this battle, I was just in a bad mood that day, and he said somthin bout punches, there are no punches in topical battles, but we'll let the vote slide, you'll win either way and I got other shit to do, so ya I need this battle closed |
Voted For: ~philosopher~
my vote goes to the philosopher in this very close battle..in the end i voted on which verse made me see and feel the verse more an i pick P so nice battle guyz |
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