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:::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..::: vs yte grl
Battle Rules:
10 - 15 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-17-04 at 02:50 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
yte grl has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 02:50 PM.
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:::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..::: has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 05:34 AM.
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fuck lyrics, this girl need a right hand..
your texts spark a pop up sayin ''unknown command!''.. i shouldnt even need to flow against this ho.. she payin rappers money so i cyber fuck her like deuce bigalow!... matter fact, fuck that, i wouldnt touch this chick.. the new millenium yeti with a fuckin dick.. no tits or ass an like ya rhymes, you got a flatline.. if only you was r.kelly u could turn back the hands of time.. i can feel ya rhymes are sendin off a sign.. you dont wanna battle, you wanna fuck.. which is just as well cause like a lollipop, slut, you fuckin suck! i dont even know if your a man or a lady.. ya verse? HA! its the fact u got a dick bigger than mine that fades-me..! fuckin tranny, bitch wants to be slim shady... testicles in a thong like miss man the gym lady... explanations..... when ya type in somthin thats wrong usually it'll say ''unknown command''..yall should work the openin bar out.. the new millenium yeti with a fuckin dick.. ^^^ has yte in her name, yall know what a yeti is right? testicles in a thong like miss man the gym lady... ^^^ Scary movie, miss man, has like some panties on an the testicles comin out of them, yall know what part im talkin bout right? |
I thought I had “shottaboy” but turns out I shot a bitch…
A.I. is gay… That’s why Dopeman is On their dicks… Kid… You couldn’t be dope if you rejoined P.S.A… The Council has spoken… Even Da Vinci say he is gay… You spit acid and proclaimed yourself Prince of the south… It's Cuz You sucked off R. Kelly… and he pissed in your mouth… Let’s take votes… 5 to 0 Dopeman October’s Best Fag… I’ve always smoked Dope… that line just made The Q Mad… Dope…Your reputation is worse than the town slut in a church… Plus U got history with Empire… he fucked you up the butt in the first… Everybody look... He's blowin' smoke when I step up to His face... They call me kamikazee Jay... cuz I blew up this place... |
Voted For: yte grl
yte grl: k nice verse needs work but who dosent needs work...but nice punches attepts at the begaining but towords the end you came fuckin hard had the punches on lock you were sayin shit abotu diffrent crews n shit its was hella tight...try using vocab it makes people think what the word means its what i do.. DopeMan: um that was hella weak lol stuctue was way off...but it flowed not realy hard punches but need to act with vocab but nether did yte girl...she came way harder man you need some stucture to win a battle lol...maybe vocab to but thats not jsut me lol...good try :laugh: VOTE: Yte Grl |
Voted For: yte grl
aight this battle was kinda one sided... i expected dopeman to take this one... ive definatly seen better from you hommie... YTE got this one pretty much all the way around with better structure, flow, punches and personals.... aight and that opener.... I thought I had “shottaboy” but turns out I shot a bitch… A.I. is gay… That’s why Dopeman is On their dicks… ^^^^^^^^^ that shit was TIGHT AS FUCK! i was diggin that shit BIG TIME! good battle for YTE but i was kinda disapointed with Dopes lyrics... ive definatly seen u come harder... no hate tho but YTE takes this one pretty easy Good battle VOTE- YTE Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: yte grl
Aigh.. im thinkin yte grl got this.. right off the bat with some nice wordplay.. hahah funny ass lines.. and dope personals.. overall id give yte's verse an 8... Dope.. your verse had some aight punches.. structure was pretty even by both.. personals werent showing.. overall i think yte got this.. period.. no hate.. peace.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: yte grl
personals u owned em no doubt all ur punches hit him hard he came half ass and paid for it no dobt structure u his sucked ass ualso came more complex much wittier punches u won it hands down dope u had ok personals ur verse was really choppy simple and pretty played work on vocab multis personals and structure good battle elevate dope Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
dope won diz hiz verse wuz humouress n i dint kno wut da chik wuz talkin bout so dope got diz dat miss man line wuz nice an da flow wuz tight 2 he had bettr punchez but da other chik had nice personals but itz always punchez over personals so dope wins Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
fuck lyrics, this girl need a right hand.. your texts spark a pop up sayin ''unknown command!''.. i shouldnt even need to flow against this ho.. she payin rappers money so i cyber fuck her like deuce bigalow!... nice puns n nice opener matter fact, fuck that, i wouldnt touch this chick.. the new millenium yeti with a fuckin dick.. ya tore diz chick up wid dat line no tits or ass an like ya rhymes, you got a flatline.. if only you was r.kelly u could turn back the hands of time.. not az hot kinda weak you dont wanna battle, you wanna fuck.. which is just as well cause like a lollipop, slut, you fuckin suck! i dont even know if your a man or a lady.. ya verse? HA! its the fact u got a dick bigger than mine that fades-me..! fuckin tranny, bitch wants to be slim shady... testicles in a thong like miss man the gym lady... dat wuz lovely da girl got daughterd IP: I thought I had “shottaboy” but turns out I shot a bitch… A.I. is gay… That’s why Dopeman is On their dicks… dat wuz a terrible opener Kid… You couldn’t be dope if you rejoined P.S.A… The Council has spoken… Even Da Vinci say he is gay… dat wuz nice even doh i dont know wut da council or da vinci iz da wordplay wuz tight You spit acid and proclaimed yourself Prince of the south… It's Cuz You sucked off R. Kelly… and he pissed in your mouth… dat wuz okay da r kelly line wuz a lil corny n gay doh but ok personal diss 7/10 Let’s take votes… 5 to 0 Dopeman October’s Best Fag… I’ve always smoked Dope… that line just made The Q Mad… Dope…Your reputation is worse than the town slut in a church… Plus U got history with Empire… he fucked you up the butt in the first… Everybody look... He's blowin' smoke when I step up to His face... They call me kamikazee Jay... cuz I blew up this place... it started off whack wid dat q mad bar but da rezt wuz dope dopeman had da better puns n da personalz in dis battle but dat chick had da better presentation 2 da verse n da better vocab but puns wins battles so dope gets dis Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
I thought dopemans verse was alot better and I felt his verse more. I liked it he had some nice punches in there that really took this and I just prefered this verse more. Had more multies punches word play and structure. The other verse was okay but not as good. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
hottness, you aint banned yet?
damn, thats a suprize the rest yall i appreciate the votes uppin folks |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
this was a tight battle.... 2 say the least. dopeman, ya shit is pretty tight baby, keep it up. that cyber fuck line was pretty hot. good work yte girl, im still confused if u a guy or girl myself. hot drop though. aight metas, nice job. my vote goes 2 dopeman cause he had a much better vocab and his flow was a lil easier 2 understand Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yte grls a female and i think dope got some d/r lol
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Voted For: yte grl
lmao..this was a good battle.. dopeman: lol, yo dope, is this really your best? cuz u let a girl wit a rec of 2-12 kill you..lmao.. you really got to work on personals, cuz she really kiilled you wit em..lmao score: flow: 6/10 your flow was alrite man, but really work on the good syllables <if dats how u spell it :) structure: 7/10 damn, this is so easy to do, y can't u make it look good? punches: 4/10, really, you could do better i think, lets just say your structures better then ur punches..lol vocab:4/10, yes work on them, that makes the verse sound better... total:21/40 (thats called an F where i live lol) Grl: damn, i've never seen you before, but you came out of no where, you pretty good, i really wanna battle you :)... your personals basiclly killed him.. score: punch: 7/10, they were alrite, but it didn't matter in dis battle..you'll see why... flow: 8/10 very good flow, i never had to stop the whole time.. personals: 9/10..damn these cracked me up, finally someone uses a personal, n the person dat uses it is someone i never seen wow..lol.. structure: 8/10 its okay structure, atleast it flowed well.. total: 32/40( thats a B where I live i belive :)) vote: grl |
lol thats no girl
its ''zig zag'' pretendin to be a girl |
i know for a fact its not zig zag lol
just take ur loss homie |
n i aint hatin u came half ass and u paid for it
dont underestimate ppl cause u know all good emcees elevate |
lol, it is zig zag
dont be so fuckin stupid u dumb fuck check the record i lose all the time i never complain but.. its fuckin zig zag! an i'm 4-2 up, why yall so concerned anyway? why ay stickin up for zig zag? why vote on ONLY THIS Battle in all of the battle i ever had? yall some cheats OR SOMTHIN, i dunno whats goin on all i know is zig zag likes to pretend to be a girl an yall were gonna vote for him no matter how the verses were i admit zig zag dropped a nice verse, if i knew it was zig zag, maybe i would have used personals |
i bet u all my rapperz money its not zig zag cause i know who it is
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Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
DopeMan: k you had wack stucture but you had nice punches and flow i liked your dope punches and i kow its zig zap lol hes just wishing he was a gurl:laugh: so he can enjoy that fat pussy he wont take car eof haha..but no ahte but yes dopeman you came harder you had nice ass punches and vocabulary you ahd nice shit man..8/10 coulda been better Zig Zag aka Yte Grl..: k whats with that k um nice punches not as good as dopemans but yes you did have dope fuckin stucture and lines nice way of sayin shit about crews n shit...its was nice..i wouldent give you the nicest shit ever but ive seen better from you...yoru flow was aight alot better then dopes but he just had hot punches...7.8/10 VOTE: DopeMan |
upping for votes.
Let's finish this battle fairly |
This was feedback posted for yte grl
just checkin.............nuff said.......................................
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uppin' for votes.....................................
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Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
yte was aight her hits were not to hard but i liked how she had some personals in there, and i really liked the line about a slut in church mad tight. dop came harder than yte the first line was tight, starting with a good first liner is always important and then killin it at the end and dop did that to or atleast harder than yte . i like a few of dops llines here is one to show for it: "your texts spark a pop up sayin ''unknown command!''.." that was tight one line i didnt like though was: "you dont wanna battle, you wanna fuck.. which is just as well cause like a lollipop, slut, you fuckin suck!" i understand it was a diss but it was to plain and im sure you knew that but hell you gonna win anyways. |
notice the only ppl that vote for u are new or suck ass lol
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uppin get this shit closed...........................................
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Voted For: yte grl
yte grl took this one...punches were hard and landed, the structure was in place, the vocab was aight, and the persona's were good, overall u had a decent drop though Dopeman..ur punches could've been a little harder though, some of them hardly landed though, but overall u came less hard in this battle though |
uppin this it hasnt been voted on in months lol
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