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Myth 10-14-04 04:47 PM

Myth vs Ice Pick
 
Battle Rules:

16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R
*Explained Votes Only*

Minimum posts to vote: 125

Check in by: 10-14-04 at 07:47 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

System 10-14-04 04:48 PM

Myth has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 04:48 PM.

System 10-14-04 05:19 PM

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 05:19 PM.

Ice Pick 10-14-04 05:37 PM

Myth i'll attack-ya-SENTENCE..noose ya' nouns and victimize-ya-verbs
subjugate ya' subjects..pulverized predicates you gonna die disturbed
all ya' lies-is-deferred with cries unheard as Pick tests-ya-nerves
liquify ya' rapz thru I-V'z so "Myth" can digest-his-words
your paperweight artillery can't go against my satanic torture tactics,
or mic grapplin, you ain't got shit on me....you a verson of Aaron Carter battlin
You can shrink the faunt all you want and your shit still looks like fucked lines
Called me out , well the first 2 battles you ducked missed ya own check time
Stop Stunting...Dumb Prick...Wit One Cent ..Worth of Rap Flow?
Ask Who's Better Between Me And You?...I Get Picked Like a Afro
I slay emcees for the hell of it, and the death of you, is my next agenda
its a good thing this is only one round/ I don't wanna be a repeat sex offender
My Tactics Flip You Backwards Until Your Stutterin From Loss~Of~Words...
Being Alergic To Oregano And Eatin Pizza Was The Last Time I Lost~To~Herbs...
Think you hot it took fluidmoons chorus to help you make a name , consider that a gift
From what i've read your bull shit and wack, Ya Skills like ya name, Just a fucking Myth...

Myth 10-14-04 05:42 PM

u fucked up, cause now ya skating on thin ice like penguins
no food, starve u of a w, so ya wins won't grow like a gremlin
battling me why? kid ain't u stationed in the wrong hemisphere? *
fag? if we battled face to face he would show up in tennis gear
here's some advice and tips for ya, fear me like ya fear god son
pick run around in speedo's, masks and capes like batman and robin
u a bitch prissy with ya rhymes but they do seem a bit tacky
kid complains this ain't "fare" so he's trying to switch "taxi's"
u've been battling for years and years so u could gain experience *
ya purchased ya rhymes from value city when they went on clearance
receiving roses from men? ice pick the gay version of the bacehlor
punches are my ingredients to putting slits in ya body like a spatula
i'll do u a favor and open ya casket for ya like tales from the crypt *
str8, debatable? if u got a girl then my semens being mailed to her tit
dad? rumor is ya 24 yrs old so in that case i'm jacking, i'll rob ya son *
kid ya rhymes ain't accepted like white leagues rejected jackie robinson



*ice is normally in antartica
*a record like that takes a few years
*his old avy was the crypt keeper
from tales of the crypt
*i heard a rumor that he was 24

Myth 10-14-04 05:44 PM

good shit pick, good shit, lol

Myth 10-14-04 05:45 PM

oh yea we uppin for this shit...

Kawn Flixx 10-14-04 06:10 PM

Voted For: Myth

ok
this vote
was brought to you in part by:
"B.L.A.'s open MIC!!!!!!!!!!!!
if you aint crit then your career's finished"

ok leme break the vote down...

Ice Pick ur very very sick at multis
it flowed great also
but the multis did less dissing and more flowing
the meta4's that were done
were to busy being smart and not being orignal lol

its sad cuz all of punches against myth have been played
espacial the last line

Myth
u versewas funny
tho the structure cn be fixed
your flow was ILL but Pick cauht you
on meta's but you did more punches
so you take this for dissing him

please don't call me a herb
for my vote cuz everybody duz
that and its annoying

I voted honestly

pc

Implicit 10-14-04 06:10 PM

Voted For: Ice Pick

damn nice battle. one of the best i seen on here.

myth: u had some nice personals and punches in there. ur flow was on point and so was your structure. it didnt hurt u any but u didnt really have any multis.

fav lines:
battling me why? kid ain't u stationed in the wrong hemisphere? *
fag? if we battled face to face he would show up in tennis gear
THAT LINE MADE ME LAUGH
u a bitch prissy with ya rhymes but they do seem a bit tacky
kid complains this ain't "fare" so he's trying to switch "taxi's"
VERY CLEVER. ANOTHER FUNNY ONE.

but from there u kinda went downhill i think. u jus closed the battle softer than u started and that made the verse kinda weak



ice pick: sick verse overall. some really good punches. u had some personals. really clever lines though. good structure and flow. definitely harder punches than myth and u had good personals about him missin his check in time.

fav lines:
You can shrink the faunt all you want and your shit still looks like fucked lines
Called me out , well the first 2 battles you ducked missed ya own check time
GOOD PERSONAL
My Tactics Flip You Backwards Until Your Stutterin From Loss~Of~Words...
Being Alergic To Oregano And Eatin Pizza Was The Last Time I Lost~To~Herbs...
VERY FUNNY

and u finished hard which helped u out too


overall a really good battle but my vote goes to ice pick because of harder punches and personals

Ice Pick 10-14-04 06:50 PM

Ok how the fuck could all my punchews ben played when he is new and has 2 battles

get the fuck out of here

let me guess he voted for you in one of your battles

Ice Pick 10-14-04 06:54 PM

ALso the tennis gear and other lines seemed real fillerish,

I have never seen some one use the Myth Line to Myth Befor,

B L A

You are too much

Kawn Flixx 10-14-04 06:58 PM

1st of all man
i aint even been in a battle in RV
in 3 weeks
and he aint vote on any of em
and i told you
not to get pissed over my vote

damn it why would ppl vote on
ur battles if you get pissed if it aint for you
i told you i voted honestly
damn it
ask one man band
that closer was soo played man
so many ppl have used it against myth it aint
even funny

I aint gonna vote on any of ur battles again
i u gonna bitch about votes all da time

PEACE

Ice Pick 10-14-04 07:01 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.L.A.
1st of all man
i aint even been in a battle in RV
in 3 weeks
and he aint vote on any of em
and i told you
not to get pissed over my vote

damn it why would ppl vote on
ur battles if you get pissed if it aint for you
i told you i voted honestly
damn it
ask one man band
that closer was soo played man
so many ppl have used it against myth it aint
even funny

I aint gonna vote on any of ur battles again
i u gonna bitch about votes all da time

PEACE



Myth is New and has 3 battles, You truly are a fucking retard.

So how could that be used so many times against him......

I just dont get what you are saying....

SOme one who has 3 battles and i read all of em and never saw that line....

ANd ya know what, i dont like when Meat STciks vote on shit they have no clue about

Red Stroke 10-14-04 07:01 PM

This was feedback posted for Myth
 
aye yo both yall verses was tight mayn yall both came hard good punches mayn decent structure i couldnt decide on this one so now im checkin polls but both yall was good

Myth 10-14-04 07:05 PM

actually ice pick look in my sig and u would see my real record, 15-6 and yea that myth line has been thrown at me a million times, i got proof if u need it

Ice Pick 10-14-04 07:07 PM

Show me the proof then, and why isnt your name under the battle stats

if you changed your name from somthing else to this, how was that line used....

SHOW ME PROOF

Myth 10-14-04 07:10 PM

u want proof i'm going to get it right now, i'll brb, i don't see why u bitching, u can't even take one vote against u, damn shame

streetryda 10-15-04 12:38 AM

Voted For: Myth

aight ima break it down

u fucked up, cause now ya skating on thin ice like penguins
no food, starve u of a w, so ya wins won't grow like a gremlin
^^aight nice oppener and nice personal 7/10
battling me why? kid ain't u stationed in the wrong hemisphere? *
fag? if we battled face to face he would show up in tennis gear
here's some advice and tips for ya, fear me like ya fear god son
pick run around in speedo's, masks and capes like batman and robin
u a bitch prissy with ya rhymes but they do seem a bit tacky
kid complains this ain't "fare" so he's trying to switch "taxi's"
^^ aight i liked the over all flow and creativeness in these lines..nice punches 8/10
u've been battling for years and years so u could gain experience *
ya purchased ya rhymes from value city when they went on clearance
receiving roses from men? ice pick the gay version of the bacehlor
punches are my ingredients to putting slits in ya body like a spatula
i'll do u a favor and open ya casket for ya like tales from the crypt *
str8, debatable? if u got a girl then my semens being mailed to her tit
^^aight this was okay nice flow but umm seems like u just tryed to rhyme tit with crypt it didnt make much sense but i get the personals..nice 6/10
dad? rumor is ya 24 yrs old so in that case i'm jacking, i'll rob ya son *
kid ya rhymes ain't accepted like white leagues rejected jackie robinson
^^nice closer ot feeling the personal too much but the fact u put it in there and punch was nice...7/10

over all verse 28/40

ok on to ice pick

Myth i'll attack-ya-SENTENCE..noose ya' nouns and victimize-ya-verbs
subjugate ya' subjects..pulverized predicates you gonna die disturbed
all ya' lies-is-deferred with cries unheard as Pick tests-ya-nerves
liquify ya' rapz thru I-V'z so "Myth" can digest-his-words
^^ great opener nice flow and def feelin the wordplay but the subjugate ya' subjects just eh wasnt feeling that part nice personal 7/10
your paperweight artillery can't go against my satanic torture tactics,
or mic grapplin, you ain't got shit on me....you a verson of Aaron Carter battlin
You can shrink the faunt all you want and your shit still looks like fucked lines
Called me out , well the first 2 battles you ducked missed ya own check time
Stop Stunting...Dumb Prick...Wit One Cent ..Worth of Rap Flow?
Ask Who's Better Between Me And You?...I Get Picked Like a Afro
^^once again nice wordplay but tactics and battlin dont rhyme too good so it kinda made me not feel it as much umm personal wasnt that great but credit for it being in there 6/10
I slay emcees for the hell of it, and the death of you, is my next agenda
its a good thing this is only one round/ I don't wanna be a repeat sex offender
My Tactics Flip You Backwards Until Your Stutterin From Loss~Of~Words...
Being Alergic To Oregano And Eatin Pizza Was The Last Time I Lost~To~Herbs...
^^aight it was okay wasnt feling it all that much too much self glorifying to me but nice flow and there wasnt really any direct punches 5/10
Think you hot it took fluidmoons chorus to help you make a name , consider that a gift
From what i've read your bull shit and wack, Ya Skills like ya name, Just a fucking Myth...
^^okay awesome closer i liked the personals a lot and but punches werent that hard hitting but personals made it nice 8/10
overall 26/40

nice battle was close but myth had more personals
pick had the wordplay

return the favor in my sig

BkBrawla 10-15-04 12:46 AM

Voted For: Myth

Myth i'll attack-ya-SENTENCE..noose ya' nouns and victimize-ya-verbs
subjugate ya' subjects..pulverized predicates you gonna die disturbed
all ya' lies-is-deferred with cries unheard as Pick tests-ya-nerves
liquify ya' rapz thru I-V'z so "Myth" can digest-his-words
your paperweight artillery can't go against my satanic torture tactics,
or mic grapplin, you ain't got shit on me....you a verson of Aaron Carter battlin
You can shrink the faunt all you want and your shit still looks like fucked lines
Called me out , well the first 2 battles you ducked missed ya own check time
Stop Stunting...Dumb Prick...Wit One Cent ..Worth of Rap Flow?
Ask Who's Better Between Me And You?...I Get Picked Like a Afro
I slay emcees for the hell of it, and the death of you, is my next agenda
its a good thing this is only one round/ I don't wanna be a repeat sex offender
My Tactics Flip You Backwards Until Your Stutterin From Loss~Of~Words...
Being Alergic To Oregano And Eatin Pizza Was The Last Time I Lost~To~Herbs...
Think you hot it took fluidmoons chorus to help you make a name , consider that a gift
From what i've read your bull shit and wack, Ya Skills like ya name, Just a fucking Myth...

^^^^^^^^^^^ WHOOOO NICE VERSE GOOD SHIT ISH NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES AND MULTI'Z


u fucked up, cause now ya skating on thin ice like penguins
no food, starve u of a w, so ya wins won't grow like a gremlin
battling me why? kid ain't u stationed in the wrong hemisphere? *
fag? if we battled face to face he would show up in tennis gear
here's some advice and tips for ya, fear me like ya fear god son
pick run around in speedo's, masks and capes like batman and robin
u a bitch prissy with ya rhymes but they do seem a bit tacky
kid complains this ain't "fare" so he's trying to switch "taxi's"
u've been battling for years and years so u could gain experience *
ya purchased ya rhymes from value city when they went on clearance
receiving roses from men? ice pick the gay version of the bacehlor
punches are my ingredients to putting slits in ya body like a spatula
i'll do u a favor and open ya casket for ya like tales from the crypt *
str8, debatable? if u got a girl then my semens being mailed to her tit
dad? rumor is ya 24 yrs old so in that case i'm jacking, i'll rob ya son *
kid ya rhymes ain't accepted like white leagues rejected jackie robinson
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE~!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOOD VERSE NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES (DECENT)


V-MYTH CAUSE HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

ICE-PICK- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE~!!!!!!! PERSONALS AND PUNCHES WERE GOOD BUT MYTH EDGE IT WITH DEM PUNCHES AND PERSONALS
YO STRUTURE IS KINDA "OK" DONT USE DAT - SHIT "OK"

MYTH-IN MY EYES U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PERONALS AND PUNCHES AND FLOW DA PUNCHES IS WAT EDGE IT

V-MYTH CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS

CLOSE BATTLE BUT MYTH TOOK IT WIT DEM PERSONALS AND PUNCHES (HARDER)

~PEACE~

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Myth 10-15-04 11:22 AM

uppin for voted peeps, let's go

Myth 10-16-04 04:30 PM

uppin for votes in this battle, let's go peeps, explained votes only

eXpLiCiT CoNtEnT 10-16-04 04:52 PM

Voted For: Ice Pick

ice you ripped him apart you out matched him with ya first two lines i liked your verse alot, it made myths verse sound like a newbies... your multies were fuckin great and ya punches were unbilievable...

myth... your verse was good but you were outmatched try battlin some one with the same skill you got potential...

no hate nice battle... return the favour links in the sig peace \\//.

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Houdini 10-16-04 06:06 PM

This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
 
Myth i'll attack-ya-SENTENCE..noose ya' nouns and victimize-ya-verbs
subjugate ya' subjects..pulverized predicates you gonna die disturbed
all ya' lies-is-deferred with cries unheard as Pick tests-ya-nerves
liquify ya' rapz thru I-V'z so "Myth" can digest-his-words
your paperweight artillery can't go against my satanic torture tactics,


HAHA NICE

Ice Pick 10-18-04 09:37 AM

Uppn for votes------------------------------------

Capital Punishment 10-18-04 07:31 PM

This was feedback posted for Myth
 
uppin for this shit peeps come on and vote

Capital Punishment 10-18-04 10:45 PM

come on people, we uppin for this peeps

Ice Pick 10-20-04 11:52 AM

upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
0000000000000000000000000000000

Psyco 10-20-04 12:22 PM

Voted For: Ice Pick

ok i feel that ice pick won this because he hit a little harder then myth

breakdown

opener-tie (both were good)
flow-ice pick
metas-ice pick
punches-tie (both had a few)
personals-myth
closer-myth
easy to read-ice pick

so i really think that ice pick won this battle

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Psyco 10-20-04 12:24 PM

return the favor yall linkz in siggy hollaholla

JackOfAllTradez 10-20-04 12:24 PM

Voted For: Myth

Emcee:Myth

Verse:
u fucked up, cause now ya skating on thin ice like penguins
no food, starve u of a w, so ya wins won't grow like a gremlin
battling me why? kid ain't u stationed in the wrong hemisphere? *
fag? if we battled face to face he would show up in tennis gear
here's some advice and tips for ya, fear me like ya fear god son
pick run around in speedo's, masks and capes like batman and robin
u a bitch prissy with ya rhymes but they do seem a bit tacky
kid complains this ain't "fare" so he's trying to switch "taxi's"
u've been battling for years and years so u could gain experience *
ya purchased ya rhymes from value city when they went on clearance
receiving roses from men? ice pick the gay version of the bacehlor
punches are my ingredients to putting slits in ya body like a spatula
i'll do u a favor and open ya casket for ya like tales from the crypt *
str8, debatable? if u got a girl then my semens being mailed to her tit
dad? rumor is ya 24 yrs old so in that case i'm jacking, i'll rob ya son *
kid ya rhymes ain't accepted like white leagues rejected jackie robinson
Comments:well i think that you took this barely...i think that because your punches and metaphors were a lil better than that of ice picks

Marks:
Wordplay - 5/10
Metas - 7/10
Vocabulary - 6/10
Structure - 8/10
Punches - 7/10
Opener - 7/10
Closer – 8/10
Personals – 8/10
Enjoyment – 6/10
Creativity - 7/10
Overall – 69/100
----------69%

Emcee: Ice Pick

Verse:

Myth i'll attack-ya-SENTENCE..noose ya' nouns and victimize-ya-verbs
subjugate ya' subjects..pulverized predicates you gonna die disturbed
all ya' lies-is-deferred with cries unheard as Pick tests-ya-nerves
liquify ya' rapz thru I-V'z so "Myth" can digest-his-words
your paperweight artillery can't go against my satanic torture tactics,
or mic grapplin, you ain't got shit on me....you a verson of Aaron Carter battlin
You can shrink the faunt all you want and your shit still looks like fucked lines
Called me out , well the first 2 battles you ducked missed ya own check time
Stop Stunting...Dumb Prick...Wit One Cent ..Worth of Rap Flow?
Ask Who's Better Between Me And You?...I Get Picked Like a Afro
I slay emcees for the hell of it, and the death of you, is my next agenda
its a good thing this is only one round/ I don't wanna be a repeat sex offender
My Tactics Flip You Backwards Until Your Stutterin From Loss~Of~Words...
Being Alergic To Oregano And Eatin Pizza Was The Last Time I Lost~To~Herbs...
Think you hot it took fluidmoons chorus to help you make a name , consider that a gift
From what i've read your bull shit and wack, Ya Skills like ya name, Just a fucking Myth...

Comments: I just wasn’t feelin ya verse…it had some nice punches but I think you need to fix ya structure…then I would of thought you would of won…along with some harder metas…

Marks:
Wordplay – 7/10
Metas – 5/10
Vocabulary -7/10
Structure – 5/10
Punches – 6/10
Opener – 6/10
Closer – 8/10
Personals – 6/10
Enjoyment – 5/10
Creativity – 6/10
Overall – 61/100
----------61%

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JackOfAllTradez 10-20-04 12:27 PM

return the favor in the siggy..................... :evilgrin:

Ice Pick 10-22-04 02:42 PM

Uppn For Sum Voets-\---
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Capital Punishment 10-23-04 01:43 PM

uppin for more votes peeps, let's get some honest votes

Capital Punishment 10-24-04 11:50 AM

uppin for more honest votes peeps

intensify effect 10-24-04 01:28 PM

Voted For: Ice Pick

here is a full brake down..... PLUS PLEZ VOTE ON MY BATTLE WITH http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157065
me vs dajokah666

myth verse...

u fucked up, cause now ya skating on thin ice like penguins
no food, starve u of a w, so ya wins won't grow like a gremlin
nice flow punch decent...

battling me why? kid ain't u stationed in the wrong hemisphere? *
fag? if we battled face to face he would show up in tennis gear
1st line good the follow up wasnt a strong hit sorda fell off...

here's some advice and tips for ya, fear me like ya fear god son
pick run around in speedo's, masks and capes like batman and robin
eeeh, flow ok, batman N robin line NOOO ok diss but sorda weak...

u a bitch prissy with ya rhymes but they do seem a bit tacky
kid complains this ain't "fare" so he's trying to switch "taxi's"
ha nice wordplay here feeling this.....

u've been battling for years and years so u could gain experience *
ya purchased ya rhymes from value city when they went on clearance
decent punch/ diss

receiving roses from men? ice pick the gay version of the bacehlor
punches are my ingredients to putting slits in ya body like a spatula
preety good....

i'll do u a favor and open ya casket for ya like tales from the crypt *
str8, debatable? if u got a girl then my semens being mailed to her tit
good flow, N hit feeling this as-well....

dad? rumor is ya 24 yrs old so in that case i'm jacking, i'll rob ya son *
kid ya rhymes ain't accepted like white leagues rejected jackie robinson
decent ending...

all around a few good punches but u slacked at times but then picked it up again N kept it going good flow, some good wordplay there and all around good drop... 7.5

next...

ice-pick verse...

Myth i'll attack-ya-SENTENCE..noose ya' nouns and victimize-ya-verbs
subjugate ya' subjects..pulverized predicates you gonna die disturbed
danm nice word-play multis N hit..... * great opener *

all ya' lies-is-deferred with cries unheard as Pick tests-ya-nerves
liquify ya' rapz thru I-V'z so "Myth" can digest-his-words
ha nice again a little multis N a nice punch...

your paperweight artillery can't go against my satanic torture tactics,
or mic grapplin, you ain't got shit on me....you a verson of Aaron Carter battlin
haha nice....

You can shrink the faunt all you want and your shit still looks like fucked lines
Called me out , well the first 2 battles you ducked missed ya own check time
ok personal....

Stop Stunting...Dumb Prick...Wit One Cent ..Worth of Rap Flow?
Ask Who's Better Between Me And You?...I Get Picked Like a Afro
concept sorda played but still a nice flow N hit on that...

I slay emcees for the hell of it, and the death of you, is my next agenda
its a good thing this is only one round/ I don't wanna be a repeat sex offender
ok this was good but at the same time sound sorda gay.. but i know what u saying thou......

My Tactics Flip You Backwards Until Your Stutterin From Loss~Of~Words...
Being Alergic To Oregano And Eatin Pizza Was The Last Time I Lost~To~Herbs...
umm idk but u sorda lost me here??.... eeeh

Think you hot it took fluidmoons chorus to help you make a name , consider that a gift
From what i've read your bull shit and wack, Ya Skills like ya name, Just a fucking Myth...
personal/diss and also a good ending...

wow this was a tight battle both had a excellent drop i was feeling both alot myth drop alot better then i thought he could much props i see i wont sleep on u if we ever meet up....
ice pick still droping harder as he progress in R.V which is making me elevate as-well which i have ICEY so we can scrap a few rounds but as for this battle imma have to give it to ICE PICK he drop harder punches, had more word-play N vocab was good N was very creative...
myth u had all that but just not enough of it u had one good word-play N ice had a couple, u had like 3 good punches ice had like 4 u there but just need it a little more u know what im saying NO HATE MUCH PROPS AND RESPECT TO BOTH HELLA BATTLE HERE....


return the favor of a honest vote....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157065
me vs dajokah666

Paris Hilton666 10-24-04 03:32 PM

Voted For: Myth

myth is gay and wack as fuck

Removed

Paris Hilton666 10-24-04 03:34 PM

oo take my vote off

JPoll 10-25-04 03:51 AM

This was feedback posted for Myth
 
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Ice Pick 10-29-04 12:32 PM

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Ice Pick 10-30-04 02:52 PM

Uppng

damn, drop a link, get this closed.......


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