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B.L.A. vs Soulless
Battle Rules:
6 -1o lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting due 20 minutes after check in Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-17-04 at 05:08 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
B.L.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 05:35 PM.
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chec chec chec chec....
300 somethin post.. still your soul couldn't summon to Pro you aren't even in my stats in fact... you are under my sole if you lack soul why are you rapping,you happen to know... that if you battlin a wack rapper..that the mirror havoc will show* you quote kweli,but battling me aint a beautiful struggle* you couldn't plan a play to win anyway even while in a huddle you have eugoly...you aint fooling me,even a fool would see* you ae never the brightest,your mind speaks of silence* you couldn't soak talent in a MOVING BEACH,*just retire because if your soulless,then you won't rap not even in quior 1.in his sig he says he probably battle you or some other WACK rapper and a mirror havoc means if he battles wack rapper he IS a wack rapper 2.beautiful struggle is a talib kweli album 3. he has a eulogy in his sig and if he's soulless he's dead 4. and 5.-he says hes the brightest in his sig- if he can't soak talent in a beach thats moving he's stupid and the beach is bright lol 6.a quior is a heavenly thing and he's soulless |
can you pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaase
check in?????????????? I made it 20 minutes so we would freestyle????? come on man |
Soulless has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 01:32 AM.
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--Explanation--
* B.L.A. is also the expression for bla…. Get it…. We ain‘t playing put-put….and still B comes with miniature-hits His text is flat….and…. hard to read… just like his signature-is!!!! Im ‘pinning-the-kid‘,… the Best Around...shit I’ll ‘leave-him-torn‘… And make RV see the ‘end of him‘.. Like he mooned-the-boards!!!! You should really show ya record….you must have ‘something-to-mention‘… Cuz we can all see… that even your name… is ‘just-an-expression’!!!!* ..ya Lyrics are ‘far from the best‘, the kids telling ‘lies like rapid‘…. U drop so damn quick…. My verse is forced to be… ‘Below average‘!!!! Sonned!!!!!! |
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Voted For: Soulless
Souless: We ain‘t playing put-put….and still B comes with miniature-hits His text is flat….and…. hard to read… just like his signature-is!!!! ^^good personal and meta hott opener 8/10 Im ‘pinning-the-kid‘,… the Best Around...shit I’ll ‘leave-him-torn‘… And make RV see the ‘end of him‘.. Like he mooned-the-boards!!!! ^^good flow and punch 7/10 You should really show ya record….you must have ‘something-to-mention‘… Cuz we can all see… that even your name… is ‘just-an-expression’!!!!* ^^hott personal best bar 10/10 ..ya Lyrics are ‘far from the best‘, the kids telling ‘lies like rapid‘…. U drop so damn quick…. My verse is forced to be… ‘Below average‘!!!! ^^ehh decent closer played concept 5/10 overall: 30/40 B.L.A: 300 somethin post.. still your soul couldn't summon to Pro you aren't even in my stats in fact... you are under my sole ^^good opener nice punch 7/10 if you lack soul why are you rapping,you happen to know... that if you battlin a wack rapper..that the mirror havoc will show* ^^hot ass bar..really feeling this 9/10 you quote kweli,but battling me aint a beautiful struggle* you couldn't plan a play to win anyway even while in a huddle ^^u worded the last bar bad made this bar weak 5/10 you have eugoly...you aint fooling me,even a fool would see* you ae never the brightest,your mind speaks of silence* ^^ nice wordplay weak punch bad structure 4/10 you couldn't soak talent in a MOVING BEACH,*just retire because if your soulless,then you won't rap not even in quior ^^ decent closer 6/10 overall: 31/50 soulless pulled this battle out nicely... he had some good punches better concepts and a overall hotter verse |
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Voted For: Soulless
aight decent battle both dropped hot ass punches... nice flow from both yall, nice vocab i think souless had the better flow an better personals.. d.l.a, ya unches n metas an everythin was sick, but you wasnt as creative as souless, so i'm votin for soul no hate yall just tellin it how i see it can yall return the fave in my sig? thanx.. peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Soulless
V/ Soulless He killed it...every bar had a nice meta....BLA tried too hard...dont explain every frigin word in yah spit lmao....get direct punches...Soulless had me laughing the whole time....nice spit.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
I had to explain my punches cuz
niggas always sayin they don't get shit uppin |
Voted For: Soulless
lol..this was a funny battle... soull: nyce shyt man.. your was pretty good punch..but honestly..i've seen a lot better Score: punch: 7/10..it was funny.. so good job flow: 9/10 it flowed very well..i liked at alot..but everyoen can flow well.. structure:9/10..pretty good structure.. personal:7/10.. funny.. bout his sig!! 32/40 iight..Bla: your shyt was funny too..but at times i ddin'tget at it right away.. score: punch:6/10..was alrite.. i've seen alot better ones... flow: 10/10very nyce flow..better then his!! ;) personal:7/10 nyce personal..but why does everyone dis the siG? Structure: 9/10good structure man..it as also better... 31/40 vote: soul Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Soulless
Soulless We ain‘t playing put-put….and still B comes with miniature-hits His text is flat….and…. hard to read… just like his signature-is!!!! very nice in the setup but the punch is blah...it was obvious you wanted to make the signature punch and you kinda stretched too much to make that comparison... Im ‘pinning-the-kid‘,… the Best Around...shit I’ll ‘leave-him-torn‘… And make RV see the ‘end of him‘.. Like he mooned-the-boards!!!! nah...this is weak... You should really show ya record….you must have ‘something-to-mention‘… Cuz we can all see… that even your name… is ‘just-an-expression’!!!!* meaningless multis... ..ya Lyrics are ‘far from the best‘, the kids telling ‘lies like rapid‘…. U drop so damn quick…. My verse is forced to be… ‘Below average‘!!!! lies like rapid is a forced multi...the punch was a little played but it was enjoyable once i got it...made me chuckle... your verse wasnt that good but it was alright...you had attempted punches and one or two good ones and your verse was put together better...enough for the vote here... B.L.A. 300 somethin post.. still your soul couldn't summon to Pro you aren't even in my stats in fact... you are under my sole blah... if you lack soul why are you rapping,you happen to know... that if you battlin a wack rapper..that the mirror havoc will show* i didnt understand your punch even with the explanation you quote kweli,but battling me aint a beautiful struggle* you couldn't plan a play to win anyway even while in a huddle couldve been ill with the setup but then it just fell off... you have eugoly...you aint fooling me,even a fool would see* you ae never the brightest,your mind speaks of silence* just randomly changed your rhyme scheme here and it wasnt really saying anything it was just rhyming words... you couldn't soak talent in a MOVING BEACH,*just retire because if your soulless,then you won't rap not even in quior blah... your verse wasnt too good here...it felt like you were reaching for punches but nothing was really connecting...some of it was just meaningless rhyming...you need to work on making harder hitting punches that dont need explanation... |
Voted For: B.L.A.
BLA: hmm im gonna have to go with you dawg you elevsted again...your stucture was dope and you flowed nicely and you had dope vocabulary i like dyour verse alot you had some dope punches to...witch i think came hard as fuck! some other mgith see he won but i dont think so...8.7/10 Soulless: k you had aight punches that were out played dawg you had fucked spelling with fucked your shit up...good stucture and flow...your opener was hella weak tho...coulda been better you also had a weak closer i dont know what else to say but BLA is a hot rapper now tha the has stucture..8/10 VOTE: B.L.A return the favour here..: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154545 |
Voted For: Soulless
Soulless: We ain‘t playing put-put….and still B comes with miniature-hits His text is flat….and…. hard to read… just like his signature-is!!!! Ok opener, punch was aight, first line was good, 3.5/5 Im ‘pinning-the-kid‘,… the Best Around...shit I’ll ‘leave-him-torn‘… And make RV see the ‘end of him‘.. Like he mooned-the-boards!!!! Good transition, nice wordplay here, overall a good punch, 3.5/5 You should really show ya record….you must have ‘something-to-mention‘… Cuz we can all see… that even your name… is ‘just-an-expression’!!!!* Wouldn't have gotten that if it weren't for your explanation, but it wasn't that great, 2.5/5 ..ya Lyrics are ‘far from the best‘, the kids telling ‘lies like rapid‘…. U drop so damn quick…. My verse is forced to be… ‘Below average‘!!!! Lol good finisher, this was a clever punch, 4/5 Total: 13.5/20 B.L.A.: 300 somethin post.. still your soul couldn't summon to Pro you aren't even in my stats in fact... you are under my sole Ok opener, punch didn't come hard but I liked the line, 2.5/4 if you lack soul why are you rapping,you happen to know... that if you battlin a wack rapper..that the mirror havoc will show* Good multis, punch wouldn't be understood if it weren't for your explanation, 2.5/4 you quote kweli,but battling me aint a beautiful struggle* you couldn't plan a play to win anyway even while in a huddle Ok personal in the first line but the punch wasn't that hard, 2/4 you have eugoly...you aint fooling me,even a fool would see* you ae never the brightest,your mind speaks of silence* More good multis, but the key is to make your lines with each other, not with themselves...2.5/4 you couldn't soak talent in a MOVING BEACH,*just retire because if your soulless,then you won't rap not even in quior Punch wasn't that hot, but you had some aight wordplay in the first line, 2/4 Total: 11.5/20 Winner: Soulless, with better punches, although B.L.A. had some good multis and wordplay. Both of you are skilled textcees, so keep doin' y'all thangs... Return the vote to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only... |
lol are u serious did u get 3 votes removed forrm this battle?... ones is from L.I. for gods sake... a vet u know he knows waht hes sayin...
i have 6 votes for me lmao... u have 1.. but lol lets finish it.... |
yi I aint get o votes removed
check the forum I aint even post one callout uppin |
agiht then its all good.... but did u have a problem with the votes that were removed?... i didn't see one...
but lets get more in here...... UPPIN.... |
agih......... uppin for votes..........
drop a link for BLA and myself |
come on people... lets get this closed...
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Voted For: Soulless
my vote goes to Soulless, B.L.A. yo shit was aight.. punches were okay..kinda hard ..and yo flow was pretty decent too..Soulless nice flow,structure & tha punches were nice..but overall...yo verse came on top on this one...u get my vote |
This was feedback posted for B.L.A.
^nice battle u two, just peepin' the polls.. :thumbup:
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Voted For: Soulless
300 somethin post.. still your soul couldn't summon to Pro you aren't even in my stats in fact... you are under my sole ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ EH KINDA AN WEAK PUNCH GOOD FLOW if you lack soul why are you rapping,you happen to know... that if you battlin a wack rapper..that the mirror havoc will show* you quote kweli,but battling me aint a beautiful struggle* you couldn't plan a play to win anyway even while in a huddle ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCH GOOD PERSONAL GOOD FLOW NICE you ae never the brightest,your mind speaks of silence* you couldn't soak talent in a MOVING BEACH,*just retire because if your soulless,then you won't rap not even in quior ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIGHT GOOD PUNCH GOOD FLOW NICE INDEPTH- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE BUT ALTHOUGH U CAME A LIL BASIC YA PUNCHES WERE GOOD AND DA FLOW AS GOOD BUT U CAME A LIL BASIC I SEEN YA BATTLES U COULD COME A LIL HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES CREATIVITY We ain‘t playing put-put….and still B comes with miniature-hits His text is flat….and…. hard to read… just like his signature-is!!!! Im ‘pinning-the-kid‘,… the Best Around...shit I’ll ‘leave-him-torn‘… And make RV see the ‘end of him‘.. Like he mooned-the-boards!!!! ^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIGHT NICE PUNCHES GOOD PERSONALS AND GOOD FLOW NICE You should really show ya record….you must have ‘something-to-mention‘… Cuz we can all see… that even your name… is ‘just-an-expression’!!!!* ..ya Lyrics are ‘far from the best‘, the kids telling ‘lies like rapid‘…. U drop so damn quick…. My verse is forced to be… ‘Below average‘!!!! ^^^^^^^^^^ HA NICE GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCH AND GOOD CLOSA AND GOOD FLOW SOULLESS- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE HARD DECENT PUNCHES AND GOOD PERSONALS AND FLOW OVERALL= DIS WAS AN KINDA LIKE AN ONE-SIDED BATTLE B.L.A. U COULD'VE COME HARDER BUT YA PUNCHES WERE A LIL BASIC NOT REALLY HARD HITTIN, SOULESS U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE FLOW GOOD PUNCHES AND NICE USING PERSONALS BUT SINCE B.L.A CAME A LIL BASIC AND SOULESS CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES & PERSONALS I HAVE TO GO WITH SOULESS CAUSE HE CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES AND FLOW AND PERSONALS B.L.A U HAD AN AIIGHT VERSE U JUST CAME A LIL BASIC I SEEN YA BATTLES MAYNE U AINT THAT BASIC MAYNE COME ON BUT ANYWAY THATS WHY I VOTED FOR SOULESS CAUSE HE CAME WIT HARDER PUNCHES V-SOULESS PEACE OUT.................WORD |
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