BkBrawla vs SuPaRaPpA
 

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SuPaRaPpA has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 01:59 AM.

BkBrawla has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 02:02 AM.

i hate cry baby little girls, im better than you cuz you sing/
you only have beef and brawl at BK, Burger King/
You are not as good look at my name and know im better/
i will leave your body so red, lit students will think its a letter/
you fag boy, dont get so touchy touchy/
cuz if i said i was pussy, youd just be scared of me/

u call yo self suparappa da only time u call yo self dat when u put yo big lips and wraop on an dudes dick//
u know u like that licorice dick,,,i'll knock dis kid out of existance my punches come hard dey neva an path of least resist (easy)

like yo favorite game i'll ripp yo chess off i spit lyrical acid through ur brain it will dissolve// (make it mushy kinda like)
I'll murder you so bad da csi wont solve dis murder case i'll cutt yo face in pieces like dat dude paintings i'll refraim yo face// (some painting its all mixed up idk)




i'll put hemeroges in yo eyes so its an sign of strangled,,,,yo face being torn up cause u gettin mangled u got stuck in my spider web u been tangled//
your the mous iam the kat,,, your an pussie iam a thorough my 9'z rippin through yo torso u cant take dese full blowz,,,,like i did to yo rhymes and yo girl did to my dick it blowz//

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Voted For: BkBrawla

aight
brawla got this...
nice flow, decent structure, hard hittin personals an a few nice punches...
more creative verse on the whole
good job BK..

suppa, ya flow was whack, no offence, but it was just boring, there was no flow at all, an ya punches aint the strongest, few okay personals, but work on ya flow an punches
no hate
just tellin it how i see it
return the fave yall..

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Voted For: BkBrawla

i'll put hemeroges in yo eyes so its an sign of strangled,,,,yo face being torn up cause u gettin mangled u got stuck in my spider web u been tangled//

....Nice line bk, But work on ur structure

IP:


i hate cry baby little girls, im better than you cuz you sing/
you only have beef and brawl at BK, Burger King/
.....Wtf supa?...... u need 2 elevate son

This was a weak battle...but My vote goes 2 bk

Voted For: BkBrawla

ok thizz is what i think....


Personals/Punches-SP you came wit some good stuff wit the punches..But BK had more personals..in my mind he took you in this category...

Vocab-Iight overall it seemed about tied here...Bk you came hard and you all so came hard SP....But overall Bk came a lil bit harder in this subject....so he gets this part too...

Enjoyment-Enjoyment was about tied here...it was nice....I liked and enjoyed reading botha your drops...So tie here...

Flow:Overall SP had better Flows..cuz his lines weren't as stretched....So SP gets this topic...

Overall:Bk came harder in the parts needed to win a battle...the punches and personals...so my votes

V/BK

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Voted For: BkBrawla

bk toook this hands down..better punches better vocab better personals..but ugly structure..loook like a book....supa yo shit was wack good flow doe..bad structure..urr punches was bad no personals

vote BK

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Voted For: BkBrawla

i hate cry baby little girls, im better than you cuz you sing/
you only have beef and brawl at BK, Burger King/
^^ aight weak ass opener man 3/10 only pts was for the weak personal
You are not as good look at my name and know im better/
i will leave your body so red, lit students will think its a letter/
^^ this didnt make sense a red body cant be a letter.just seemed like you tryed to rhyme with better no good punches 2/10
you fag boy, dont get so touchy touchy/
cuz if i said i was pussy, youd just be scared of me/
^^ weak punch wasnt much flow 2/10
7/30 cuz weak ass punches and personals.....not much flow..elementry wordplay and it was just whacked i didnt like it the only thin you had was structure


u call yo self suparappa da only time u call yo self dat when u put yo big lips and wraop on an dudes dick//
u know u like that licorice dick,,,i'll knock dis kid out of existance my punches come hard dey neva an path of least resist (easy)
^^aight okay opener coulve been better but okay personal and flow was sketchy saw some multi's but lines are too stretched 5/10
like yo favorite game i'll ripp yo chess off i spit lyrical acid through ur brain it will dissolve// (make it mushy kinda like)
I'll murder you so bad da csi wont solve dis murder case i'll cutt yo face in pieces like dat dude paintings i'll refraim yo face// (some painting its all mixed up idk)
^^okay nice multi's and ood punches but again stretched lines but good flow shoulda rhymed the last words of the lines 7/10
i'll put hemeroges in yo eyes so its an sign of strangled,,,,yo face being torn up cause u gettin mangled u got stuck in my spider web u been tangled//
your the mous iam the kat,,, your an pussie iam a thorough my 9'z rippin through yo torso u cant take dese full blowz,,,,like i did to yo rhymes and yo girl did to my dick it blowz//
^^okay okay multi's could have been a lil better for a closer but it was good flowing but it you shoulda rhymed the last words of your lines but its okay once again stretched lines tho6/10
18/30

okay supa had the structure and that was it
you need to not stretch your lines so much
but nice punches
okay personals
good flow
nice multi's

v/bkbrawla