Yvonne vs Infamuz
 

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6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Check in by: 10-18-04 at 08:22 AM

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Infamuz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 08:23 AM.

ive been ritin since i put ill battle you so if it comes fast i been ritin for like 15 mins.........................................

u asked for ur next victim on ur list, answered ur callout now ur sayin its not fair n ur pissed/
bitch i can't keep this error to exist, resist wit cha fist but i'll still put terror in this bitch/
twist n persist but u won't stop bleeding, smash u so hard ur b known as the defeat queen/
stop pleading, i saw some of ur battles, read one word of ur verse n stopped reading/
infact is that i told this cat to recognize now juss check out her stat/*
fact is that u wack, wanna try ta beat me?chea, fact is that u can't/
she said its unfair, told her to understand, n she said under where/
'ma done ripoed out the pink heart out ur chest,it will be ya closest affair/

* its ok but still under 50

UPPIN YO VERSe........................................

Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 09:06 AM.

just like ur name states..no matta how many times u spit u'll always be infamouz
if you got stumped on the street..got ur ass net clipped..you cant 4kin blame uz
im makin you pack heat by the hotness from my spit..tell me how the slap feels
bend him over like a bitch..and break his anus in..then u'll see his achived lines drip
you battlin some1 like me,u'll neva reach my left knee..ya aint hit ya pubic yet
he spread his lips on d mic,thro his slippry lines while he bite,dats d only time he got it wet
dopness is defined as wackness gets quickly declined..i wanted a gd rapper,bicth r u blind?
i took a look at his lines..found it punch deprived..i still wouldnt find 'em if i pushed rewind


-if you dont get the lines of both then dont vote...

-quick key..couldnt be arsed too reserch w/e he done....

-votes shall be returned honestly....

wun

u neva knew me b4..those are some fake personals ....


:wtf:



uppin this thing

Voted For: Yvonne

just like ur name states..no matta how many times u spit u'll always be infamouz
if you got stumped on the street..got ur ass net clipped..you cant 4kin blame uz
im makin you pack heat by the hotness from my spit..tell me how the slap feels
bend him over like a bitch..and break his anus in..then u'll see his achived lines drip
you battlin some1 like me,u'll neva reach my left..ya aint hit ya pubic yet
he spread his lips on d mic,thro his slippry lines while he bite,dats d only time he got it wet
dopness is defined as wackness gets quickly declined..i wanted a gd rapper,bicth r u blind?
i took a look at his lines..found it punch deprived..i still wouldnt find 'em if i pushed rewind

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES GOOD PERSONALS AND FLOW


u asked for ur next victim on ur list, answered ur callout now ur sayin its not fair n ur pissed/
bitch i can't keep this error to exist, resist wit cha fist but i'll still put terror in this bitch/
twist n persist but u won't stop bleeding, smash u so hard ur b known as the defeat queen/
stop pleading, i saw some of ur battles, read one word of ur verse n stopped reading/
infact is that i told this cat to recognize now juss check out her stat/*
fact is that u wack, wanna try ta beat me?chea, fact is that u can't/
she said its unfair, told her to understand, n she said under where/
'ma done ripoed out the pink heart out ur chest,it will be ya closest affair
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE VERSE INFAM NICE FLOW GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS


V-YVONNE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES

IT WAS AN WEAK BATTLE NOTHIN GOOD OR TO LOOK AT BUT ANYWAY YVONNE CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES AND FLOW ALTHOUGH SHE FELL OFF IN SOME PARTS I STILL THINK SHE GOT IT

INFAM-NICE VERSE GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND FLOW

BUT DA PUNCHES AND DA WORDS-CHOSIN WERE TOO BASIC NOT AN GOOD VOCAB IN YO VERSE AND PLUS DA STRUTURE WASNT GOOD EITHER FROM DA TOP IT WAS COOL DEN AT DA CLOSA IT JUST GOT ME CONFUSE BUT ANYWAY GOOD VERSE NICE BATTLE GOOD PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT TOO BASIC AND YVONNE NCIE VERSE GOOD BATTLE U HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS 'OK"

MY VOTE GOES TO-YVONNE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW AND PERSONALS

~PEACE~

O And Yvonne Or Infam Return An Honest Vote In My Battle Links Are In Da Sig Honest Vote Thanks I Preciated

This was feedback posted for Yvonne
 

this was an aight battle ive seen alot better from both
ya personals and metas were pretty much average
ya punches were ok both of u provided about 6/10 quality
you can use some elevation and some metas and better personals

.....Nuff Said.....

^^..votin aint a sin...:P...jk

thanx for the feedbak...

uppin this peeps plz dont sleep...

Voted For: Infamuz

infamuz got diz wid da bettr flow diz yvonne personz flow wuznt dat nice but da punches were ok yuh jus didnt hav wut infamuz had tho cuz he had lyke hot punchez dope azz wordplay n personalz n good flow so i vote fo infamuz

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Voted For: Yvonne

aiight yo good battle you two... lets break it down...
infamuz. you had an aiight structure.. some of your punchez landed and i thought u ahd sum good ideas but u didnt pull em of right. you had a good vocab but sum of ur punches were pretty simple.... 6/10

yvonne you had a good battle, your punchez hit there targets hard, you have awsome vocab and structure.... and all of your ideas were very good which won u the battle all of those things combined.... v/ yvonne.

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Voted For: Yvonne

iigh here da breakdown...

Punches - Yvonne...they were harder n more direct...infamuz had mostly open mic lines...none were actual PUNCHES against ur oponent really

Personals - blahh...neither of yall was doin ya thing in this department...but i guess this was just a quick battle out da blue from what yall are sayin

Meta4s - tie...nuttin to serious that made me think like WHOA..but there was some OK metas in yalls verses

Wordplay - another tie....both verses were alittle stretched 2 me..but i really cant judge that cuz this is a TEXT battle...but to ME...both of yall stretched ya barz but if u was doin audio it wud prolly sound better comin from ur state of mind

Enjoyment - Yvone...simply becuz the punches were just better...infamuz ya verse was pretty wack 2 me...this battle wasnt THAT great anyway...but in the end...yvone takes the cake cuz her verse was more direct n hardin hittin...

Vote - Yvone

!~1~!

thats tight uppin............................................. ......

thanks hot but.......................id rather go 0-3 be4 you vote for me

common peppes b4 i go hit this shit up...plz

uppin what the fuck
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this battle haas been oin on for a week

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Voted For: Yvonne

Yvonne came harder with tha flow and had a better structure nice punches good lines some good shit personals was not really going but it was cool ya came harder so you got my vote

uupin peeps...dont sleepon this bitch u frogs....

Voted For: Yvonne

wow, this wasn't really what I expected,
Please STOP stretching so much people,also all that i'll beat kill you shit is the most played thing in the world, And just plain wack, listen to some good artists, (NOT G UNIT) something like supernatural, or canibus...they never say anything like that...multi's aren't everything, you guys had alot though, especially yvonne, she said I'll hurt type shit...and that was good...you have the talent, this just wasn't a very good drop...Although it was a lot better then the other drop, but you guys both can do better...

thats my honest opinion...

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Voted For: Yvonne

I think that Yvonne got this battle because i feel that Yvonne came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Yvonne got it they were used effectifely and were on point Infamuz u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Yvonne good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Yvonne and flow and structure i'll give to Yvonne.

V/Yvonne There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly