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:::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..::: vs Intensify Effect
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Dont Duck... You Gotta Battle Me Sometime.. Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 10-18-04 at 09:13 AM Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in. |
:::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..::: has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 09:22 AM.
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its about time this fuck battled me................
okay, okay, here goes..................... everytime i called you out ya ducked n got offline... fiend ya so addicted to crack u got a pac an tim roth shrine!.. my texts'll make u blind but thats good cause ya raps are ass.. i'll brake ya rhymes like glass... an with just one of my punches ya seein double vision.. you should know never to try rhyming without proper hip hop supervision.. i'm on a one man mission to help intensify your flows effect... but theres no help for you like a penis that cant errect!.. livin off past glory, ''violent types still on fire'' keep ya mouth ''canned''.. i'm some unsigned hype stompin you out an signin the partician to get u banned! i'll be damned if this dwarf gets the win... like the afgan soldiers your gon go thru torture as i stick a axe to ya foreskin..! aight..... explanations.. everytime i called you out ya ducked n got offline... fiend ya so addicted to crack u got a pac an tim roth shrine!.. ^^^ he always ducked when i accepted his called out n got ofline.. an tim roth n pac were crackheads in gridlock'd, if ya smart enuff you'll figure that out.. livin off past glory, ''violent types still on fire'' keep ya mouth ''canned''.. i'm some unsigned hype stompin you out an signin the partician to get u banned ^^^ he still thinks VT are on fire... stomp him out cause he claimin fire an there is a partician for him to be banned.. |
shit hahaha
i didnt mean to drop the verse twice, ahhh well... when ya ready effect, drop ya verse |
how many bars u went so i can match ya...............
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 05:42 PM.
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dopeman,
diss me?.. said i been ducking.. but i've been waiting for ya skill's to rech a settlement... cuz i'll murder ya drop befor it happens,.. like shell' poping stomach.. during a fetal development... *ouch* Don't care if you think you ill, your punches can touch me?.... hardly.. Wouldn't put ya "nuts on the table"... if you were hostin a... "fuckin party"... Wanna ride my dick and battle ? Well,.... I bet you'll fall brother.... But please loosen up ya grip dawg,... ya hardness bearly fills a extra small rubber.... *ha* im rippen your ligemints in three N creamating the Remains Of ya physical.. basic.... so stop quickly ' My verbal Abuse is Metal bound like Rappers with Braces.... your more Herbish then "empire" in a pink slip, dog what type of Brain Patterns Are yours?.... your executed ' no props ', left hangin like Hinges on Large Doors... Im so Ruthless ' I'll switch your hearts Blood supply with Mental Confusion Sending simple Illusions.. ' you get crippled an booted like handicap kids kicken an feuden..BITCH!!! *ha* BANG-BANG-EARLY..... * P.S i had more but ia int know how many bars u went so i cut my verse short..... * good luck family... much respect... |
hmmm, you pre wrote that yea?
aight if u get the win i want a rematch so i can work on it an not drop the first thing that came to my head.... |
upp'in this battle for some votes.....................
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Voted For: intensify effect
close battle Dopeman: once again ya stuctures fucked, fix it cause it can lose u battles sometimes, liked ya opener, punches were there and were decent but weren't hitting that hard, flow was kinda off, some ok meta's, like the play off his name, some nice personals, liked the personal about the banned petition, ya closer could have been alot better, 5/10 Intensify Effect: good verse all around, tigh opener, liked the nuts and party line lol, the rubber line was hot too, basically ya whole verse was nice, punches were hitting harder then dopeman's, tight meta's was there, structure was kinda crazy, flow was on and off, good worplay and creativity, fave lines was the basic and braces lines, good closer, 7.5/10 vote - Intensify Effect return the honest votes, battles are in my sig, no hate |
upp'in this battle.....................................
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upp'in this battle.....................................
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
both of yall stuctures are fucked and intensify effect you got a fucked streched lines...but were tight 1 jsut feed
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Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
effect yo flow wuz nice da structure wuz fukked in parts an da punz were wea but da personals were nice an da opener wuz tite but u didnt have a good closer but dopeman yo flow wuz nice and yo structre wuz good u started off whakked az fukk but yo verse got better dat canned line wuz hella tite so imz votin fo u return da favor maaaaaneee! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^^^ upp'in for more votes mang.......
and explain ya shit better then the guy above me plez..... |
hey yo effect, d2r vs wisemen...
i want you in a proper battle one where i actually take time on the verse an not drop the first thing that comes to my head |
^^^holla back u down with the team thats whats sup.....
upp'in for more honest votes with good brakedowns...... |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
dope gets this his verse connected alot better, da structure wuz titer an da flow wuz nice, da finisher was pretty funny, tim roth line was creative n original, da personals were much better yo effect yuh verse wuz iight, u need 2 spell better homie, an da personals wernt there, nice vocab tho, but vocab dosent win u a battle personals do an u had nadda sorry homie |
upp'in for explain votes......................................
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Voted For: intensify effect
woah your both on fire this was a hot battle imma break it down for ya... opener:intensify closure:intensify multies: intesify: there wernt many really. flow: dopeman punches: intensify overall: intensify ok i thought this battle was hot you both did your thing but i think intensify got this no hate... return the favour links in the sig or me vs. mattee1 peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upp'in............................................ ........
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Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
Dopeman oh shnaps good battle this was a cool battle nice Dopeman's shit was hittin one after another good punches mayn personals hm....... you lyrics is crazy tho your a monster with tha flow and you came a little bit harder and good structure mayn hollaaa Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin yall, dont sleep
honest votes will be returned |
^^^ i hope u aint exchanging votes with these cats.......
cuz there will be no dick ryders...... upp'in for votes N brake downs cuz some of these votes wont count at the end.... |
lmao effect, i'm thinkin the same about you
check the record <<<<<<<<<<< i dont give a shit if i lose, one thing is i DONT CHEAT, why is it whenever u get votes people assume its cheating????????? an uhhh, your vote from explicit will not count if u go try gettin my votes dq'ed, cause its the least explained vote out of te whole lot lol |
uppin yall
dont sleep my verse started off a lil weak got better in my opinnon i.effects verse was stretched but tight in places so can we get votes an they'll be returned honestly? peaxe |
its more like u started and end it weak dawgs no hate i seen better from u....
my lines are forever streched or whatever, but it flows right plus hit hard.... no hate...... upp'in for votes... |
upp'in............................................ .....
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Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
yo this was a close battle very good to both of you, i was feelin lines from both fav intens line: "But please loosen up ya grip dawg,... ya hardness bearly fills a extra small rubber.... *ha*" thats cool. fav dope line: "livin off past glory, ''violent types still on fire'' keep ya mouth ''canned''.. i'm some unsigned hype stompin you out an signin the partician to get u banned!" that shit was straight disrespect right there damn,i really like how dope explains his shit at the end just case a playa aint get somethin, thats one of the things that also got this vote cause i read back through it again and got what you was sayin, ima have to give this to dope he came with more personals and they hit a bit harder, good luck both of you. |
Voted For: intensify effect
this was a good battle. dopeman- dope personals.(but theres no help for you like a penis that cant errect!..) this was killa. lol. good flow and vocab. not much wordplay tho. overall 7/10 I.Effect - dope drop i felt ya verse this was pretty sick. (cuz i'll murder ya drop befor it happens,.. like shell' poping stomach.. during a fetal development... *ouch*) that did hurt! flow was real good and good personals aswell. pretty good wordplay. the closer one it for me. 8/10 good battle. no hate |
uppin for vbotes
one more needed so dont sleep... |
upp'in this battle yet again dont sleep on my verse...........
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upp'in this battle yet again dont sleep on my verse...........
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Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
I think that Dopeman got this battle because i feel that Dopeman came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Dopeman got it they were used effectifely and were on point I. Effect u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Dopeman good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Dopeman and flow and structure i'll give to Dopeman. V/Dopeman There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
howq the fuck are most of these votes not explained?
your a bitch effect... anyway uppin AGAIN, so this can get slept on for another 6 weeks............ |
u aint winning by no bull-shit votes BEAT ME FAIR AND SQUEAR U DA BITCH WHO KNOWS u aint really win u douted ya-self N ya verse cuz u know my verse crushed u'r verse but u got a couple of dick ryders for u N aint explain much at all fuck outta here.....
upp'in for honest explain votes.... bar-by-bar would be better... |
upp'in yet again..................................
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WTF? this is still open mang........
can we get a few more votes dog 4-real mang.... |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
good battle here, pretty close, I'll have to go with dopeman, he just came harder, had the flow and punches hit, wordplay and structure weren't as good, but he just controlled this, Intesify effect, you did good, nice job both |
WTF???????????????
upp'in N dopeman u better not be swaying or pming to vote for u.... |
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