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BkBrawla vs streetryda
Battle Rules:
6-Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting g-luck mayne :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-15-04 at 08:14 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
BkBrawla has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 07:45 PM.
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streetryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-04 07:45 PM.
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you call yourself bkbrawla dont be sad when i maul~ya
left your mouth dropped cuz i dropped it hot, just stalled~ya ripped out your vocal cords, deceased, now lets hear you speak the only time you beat a man is when you got them under the sheets sig'ed this bullet so they know who left you lying dead papers out, caption bolded, [B]heartless murder[B/] is all they read |
street u been defeated u aint spittin nothin cause i poured acid down yo throat i cracked ya speech puttin hot punches through yo ribcage no-one going to hear yo screech//(mournful cry)
you might spittin hot ish when i spit throwin cold hollow points punches rippin through yo torso i keep throwin dese full blows ur going to win? iam going to lose? naw playa its been verso// I'll smack ya bitch ass like my hippo but in an pimp way bitch u'll treat me with respect i'll have yo ass go to da fuckin store buy me an bouquet// Iam like an clay when i spit fire i always come hard iam crazy mental my punches just dont pinch ya skin i'll go deep ur gettin scarred// He thinks he'z an thug he rides on tha streets but da last time u was ridin on streets is when you playin hop-scotch on seasme streets// (o yes dey did an live show in maryland) I'll discrete you body so u can have 2 personalities i got some tricks under my sleeve more surprsing when yo mom saw you jerkin yo meat now this battle is ova yo ass wouldnt be hotter dan mines if you was in an hot-seat// iam out~! ~peace~ Main Entry: ver·so Pronunciation: 'v&r-(")sO Function: noun Inflected Form(s): plural versos Etymology: New Latin verso (folio) the page being turned scarred-adjective: deeply affected |
uppin man nice drop... but it was supposed to be heartless murder i messed up
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o and clay when u put an clay or pottery in an oven its heat that makes it HARD~!
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O Aight Mayne Uppin For Votes Holla~! Votes Mayne Uppin
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Voted For: BkBrawla
yo bk got this shit. Street, you tried wit the multi's but yo flow was still a lil off. But nice try. You really didn't have many punches though. But nigka keep elevating you'll get there. BK, your verse was pretty decent. First off, stop the "/" shit. That hsit herbish as fuck. lol But yo flow wasn't that bad. It was pretty nice. You also had some nice punches in there. Few hit hard. Not bad. keep elevating, fam. pc props to both Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Ok Thanks For Da Info Yo Uppin For More Votes Peep'z Uppin
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Voted For: streetryda
Streetryda’s Verse you call yourself bkbrawla dont be sad when i maul~ya left your mouth dropped cuz i dropped it hot, just stalled~ya 5 ripped out your vocal cords, deceased, now lets hear you speak the only time you beat a man is when you got them under the sheets 6.5 sig'ed this bullet so they know who left you lying dead papers out, caption bolded, heartless murder is all they read 6.5 18/30 Elevate more…work on yo punches a little more tho…Peace BkBrawla’s Verse street u been defeated u aint spittin nothin cause i poured acid down yo throat i cracked ya speech puttin hot punches through yo ribcage no-one going to hear yo screech// you might spittin hot ish when i spit throwin cold hollow points punches rippin through yo torso i keep throwin dese full blows ur going to win? iam going to lose? naw playa its been verso// I'll smack ya bitch ass like my hippo but in an pimp way bitch u'll treat me with respect i'll have yo ass go to da fuckin store buy me an bouquet// Iam like an clay when i spit fire i always come hard iam crazy mental my punches just dont pinch ya skin i'll go deep ur gettin scarred// He thinks he'z an thug he rides on tha streets but da last time u was ridin on streets is when you playin hop-scotch on seasme streets// I'll discrete you body so u can have 2 personalities i got some tricks under my sleeve more surprsing when yo mom saw you jerkin yo meat now this battle is ova yo ass wouldnt be hotter dan mines if you was in an hot-seat// 15/30 No offense Bk but yo lines were too stretched… tha punches were okay…but tha flow fell off(to me tho)… keep workin on yo punches tho…but my vote goes to STREETRYDA Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
o like damn homie "ok" i'll try to shorten my lines a lil thanks for da honest vote uppin for more votes holla
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uppin on the votes pplz lets get more comin peace~1
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um yo anyway idk why all da votes been erased and shit but uppin for votes
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Voted For: BkBrawla
streetryda ya verse had hard hittin punches...hella hard mayne compliments... bk...ya verse was wider..and had more vocabs..i noticed a frew multies...too...ya punches were more...and u get this vote cos of that...but if ur verse was as short ass street ryda's..he woulda won...but ima give this to u for more number of punches and more vocabs...props to both tho... 1 |
uppin on this actual explained vote even tho its against me its straight but it said 6 lines only so he stretched his lines just so he could fit more in......which ruins structue....but no hate
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This was feedback posted for BkBrawla
aint even gonna vote... WACK battle... but if i did vote it would BARELY go to BK... even tho im not a big fan of his n shit he would barely take this one
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And I Luv You Too Bigpappa Lol
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lol uppin mofo'z uppin
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Voted For: BkBrawla
jea u took this ur shit was much better ......il bk your punches came harder and your flow was off the hook i was feelin da shit...structure was garbage and flow was bad but thaz bout it stree u need to up ur game fam u pretty wakc...bad punches no personals bad vocab no wordplay return da fav and vote http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155156 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.... ........
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yo niggas peep'z need to vote explain shit damn get dis closed already uppin
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yo uppin stop sleepin on dis battle yo vote peep'z damn it~!
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uppin on this mayne lets get some votes on this battle peace~1
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argh uppin fo votes peep'z been here fo like 2 or 3 months now lets get some votes holla~!
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Voted For: BkBrawla
ok this battle dissapoints me due to BK's meta's and flow being so good but lacking all the punchlines and insults needed its a sad thing to see... just use less threats and more punches next time Street your rhyme scheme was very very very basic and your structure was better but your wackness wasn't in porportion of you having actual punches so even though BK's was all threats his lyrisism crushes you no hate B.L.A.'CK! peace |
hmm..thats a really wack unexplained vote but w/e its not even worth my time to get rid of it even tho i should....w/e mayb it looked like his was better cuz he hella stretched his lines
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This was feedback posted for streetryda
checking polls, yo streetryder, dopeness defined is closed
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uppin vote please...get it closed already damn ppl
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This was feedback posted for streetryda
This is heavy! like the thing about beating a man under the sheets
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Voted For: streetryda
alright....being as how it says 6 lines..you SHOULD BE DQ'D....but i won't vote against you due to the rules..i will however..average out the score i give each bar.....so you better hope your consistent if you wanna win.. you call yourself bkbrawla dont be sad when i maul~ya left your mouth dropped cuz i dropped it hot, just stalled~ya not bad for an opener...i give it a 7/10 ripped out your vocal cords, deceased, now lets hear you speak the only time you beat a man is when you got them under the sheets gay jokes are kinda played....but this was funny so i'll give it a 8/10 sig'ed this bullet so they know who left you lying dead papers out, caption bolded, [B]heartless murder[B/] is all they read good closer, i liked it a lot 8/10 over all score 23/30 average score = 7.666 street u been defeated u aint spittin nothin cause i poured acid down yo throat i cracked ya speech puttin hot punches through yo ribcage no-one going to hear yo screech//(mournful cry) you might spittin hot ish when i spit throwin cold hollow points punches rippin through yo torso i keep throwin dese full blows ur going to win? iam going to lose? naw playa its been verso// horrible attempt at multis..and the lines were way to stretched........2/10 I'll smack ya bitch ass like my hippo but in an pimp way bitch u'll treat me with respect i'll have yo ass go to da fuckin store buy me an bouquet// Iam like an clay when i spit fire i always come hard iam crazy mental my punches just dont pinch ya skin i'll go deep ur gettin scarred// doesn't even rhyme........0/10 He thinks he'z an thug he rides on tha streets but da last time u was ridin on streets is when you playin hop-scotch on seasme streets// (o yes dey did an live show in maryland) I'll discrete you body so u can have 2 personalities i got some tricks under my sleeve more surprsing when yo mom saw you jerkin yo meat now this battle is ova yo ass wouldnt be hotter dan mines if you was in an hot-seat// you said streets 3 times in one line...but atleast you attempted a personal...4/10 overall score = 6/30 average score = 2/10 street ryda wins by a fuckin landslide...you need madd elevate brawla |
This was feedback posted for BkBrawla
*ahem* Someone Got Merked................................word
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lol....haha you a funny guy drastic.........or should i say ________ lol i wont....haha upinnn on this vote explained too which is even better!!!!!! peace~1
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Voted For: streetryda
StreetRyda- What can I say besides you killed him... punches were hott espcially the under the sheets line, pretty hott way you spit the verse.. BkBrawla- No hate but that was just like a bunch of jumbled words... i'll be suprised if anybody understands that, punches BARELY hit.. Elevate... Basically a one-sided battle.. |
uppin lets get some votes coming..........
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Voted For: streetryda
i voted for strret cause BK barely rhymed his structre was way off it was hoorible bad wordplay streets puches hit but not harhis wordplay was a lil off along with structre aight rhyming bad battle though return the favor Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: BkBrawla
streetryda: hmm good stucture and it flowed but that was weak dawg...weak punches and wordplay...try working on that shit...and you'll be dope vocabulary you were pretty weak with that but o well elevate in time... BKBrawler: dayum bad stucture but it flowed good vocabulary...dope ass punches liek dayum where that coem from naw jk...good wordplay at some spots...nice verse is all i gotta say...keep workin that shit but try fix your stucuture... sry for my spelling im tierd:) return the favour here: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157938 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: BkBrawla
since when is that 6 lines^^^JESUS!........................ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
my bad...that was feedback...dq dat shit..........
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will do man.......i know it happens..ive done it before a couple times.........but uppin on this shit......wish you woulda voted for real instead of leavin feedback tho.......
but w/e UPPIN ON THIS LETS GET IT CLOSE ALREADY!!!!!! peace~1 |
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