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N.Tavarez 10-15-04 09:08 PM

Hit Em Up On Archaelogist
 
Destroy And Rebuild
The Warning

Get Ya Wig Split.. leave the wrists slit of Nitwits
Arch gotta stick his tongue in Revokes Ass to 'Spit Shit!
U Beat Me in 2 lines...Ill murder u Unlimited
He Feeling Himself Like His Hand And Dick Are Intimate!
Beef Is Costly..This Creep? Killing Em Softly...Sleep...
Someone Wake Em Like A Cup Of Coffee..An Get Em Off Me!
Prem beat u But He Made A Mistake..Dis Champ Is So Fake
When He "Drop Gold Bars" Its Just proof he Cant "Hold Weight"!
U'll Neva "Blow Up" Pretend to be "Da Bomb" An Get Raped
U Couldnt Be A 'Super Mod' if U Logged On With A Cape!
Let the Machete Scrap..U CornBall Acter Like Chevy Chase..
All that extra water just equate to Arch being 'HeavyWeight'
Fake Champ of RV? Im Switching My RapSite...
Prems bar Had Em 'Go Up In Smoke' Like Fumes From Crack pipes!
So Act Right! Serving Up Niggas Brown Blue Black White...
Sit In my Throne..And Crush these 'Pussies' Like a Fat Dike!
Those Punchline Leagues Is A joke.. Thats Just Reality....
Only Place u Crown A Heavy Weight Champ On A Technicality...
U Not Even Moderately A Decent Moderate..U Rap Shitty!
Far From King of this 'Jungle'..More Like Tigre From Rap City!
A Host that Like pretending..You A Spinoff oF Revoke
U Might Ass Well Go Elope...He Got His Dick Up Em Ya Throat!
RIP to Strobe....Voice of reason... Only Mod I Respected...
Cuz He Did His Job..And Arch Is Just Concerned With His Record..
Plus He Got So Many Groupies (D/R) It'll Make The 'Stars Drool'
That Been Riding His Dick So Long....They All Carpool!
(Arch: Comon Kids..In Ya Car seat we gotta another battle to steal)



End It Now..^^^^^^Thats Filler 2 Me ..I Do That on Lunch Break..

N.Tavarez 10-16-04 12:31 PM

haha! hope i aint offend ya arch d/r's but truth is truth

flow2crazy 10-16-04 12:47 PM

Dope... good flow, vocab, punches all around dope diss... keep it up and drop some feed on my open mic

N.Tavarez 10-17-04 10:55 AM

now he tryna ban me for stupid shit........an he wonder y i dont shut my mouth to him

MC Prephickz 10-17-04 11:27 AM

now I aint big on disses becuz everyone got sumtin they can get cracked on for, but this was a nice drop, nice length and number on lines, good punches, jus a tight rhyme. Good drop and keep elevatin.

N.Tavarez 10-23-04 10:06 AM

not even uppin fa beef.......just opinions..............

Loveliss Grandz 10-23-04 11:07 AM

dat was da hottest dis i've seen in here yet.10/10.keep up da good work.dat shit was funny too.even my moms read it and was crackin up and she hates rap.

MERCenary 10-23-04 11:07 AM

nive man. lovin it. lol

N.Tavarez 10-23-04 11:24 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Loveliss Grandz
dat was da hottest dis i've seen in here yet.10/10.keep up da good work.dat shit was funny too.even my moms read it and was crackin up and she hates rap.



^^^^^hahahahahaha!!tell ya moms i said thanks....good looking on the feedback

MERCenary 10-23-04 11:25 AM

me man i did. koo.

N.Tavarez 10-25-04 05:30 PM

ima up it this time for artistic critisism............................

Premanition 10-25-04 05:40 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Loveliss Grandz
dat was da hottest dis i've seen in here yet.10/10.keep up da good work.dat shit was funny too.even my moms read it and was crackin up and she hates rap.



lol thats wot had me crackin up^^^^ :laugh:

anyway tight diss dawg you brought the heat, nice flow but most importantly in a diss nice punches n some gud personals....you'd av been beta battlin him wiv that though instead of just an open mic...pz

hot will ya hit up the open mic in my sig...called 'confession'...wud be appreciated..thanx

Dirty Nigga 10-25-04 05:40 PM

cant critize it..
it was a hot diss
personals were right on point.......

arch must be kickin himself cause he got murderd by you here an by me in the battle lol

but back to the topic at hand, the personals were right on point an the wordplay n bars connected...8/10, this was a real hard hittin diss

can u leave feed on my newest open mic dope man?
links in the sig

peace

Premanition 10-25-04 05:42 PM

oh n thanx for the mention...lol

yeh i was abit hard fuckin done by...i shud be champ :huh:

well 1 more week n i'll be bac to take bac wots mine...

hit my open mic dawg...in my sig...do it...lol

pz

MADDRAPPER 10-25-04 05:44 PM

I don’t type fast but like glass I transmit light so my grammar
Legit and bright like a star lit night just cosmetics and glamour
Like makeup fakes duck from this, stuff terrific like Hieroglyphics
A hidden description of written Egyptian on cave wall cats sniff it
Like MEL GIBSON in a feeble second this becomes a lethal
Weapon with fashion nice like the passions of Christ never drums evil
The whack garbage halt after I acknowledge my fault
Went to college and was taught good things now have skills in bulk
Some cats flows pride and strife but provide for a wife
Even with bling on will bring home paycheck at lease twice
A month then price hunt in the Mall this bring peace in life

N.Tavarez 10-25-04 05:48 PM

hell yeah u merked him..ridiculously.. it kinda got me heated the way when they was voting for u ..he no where to be found..but the minute u "broke a rule" he was right there to snatch that "belt" plus i was pissed that day anyway..but i aint got no beef wit him anymore cuz it was minor ..i just throw that out to make cats think if i can throw this one in open mic imagine what i got for battles..now i just want feedback but goodlooks on the opinions,, i ll peep yours in a sec

Premanition 10-25-04 05:58 PM

lol.......yeh archs coo but he was quik to d'q me....but woteva....

pz

N.Tavarez 10-29-04 02:50 PM

more niggas read this..............................

Zig Zag 10-29-04 02:51 PM

this was pretty tite

8.5/10

N.Tavarez 11-19-04 09:35 PM

wouldve let it drop but he deserves another look.........

FlowIntelligent. 11-19-04 09:47 PM

son that was dope you in a crew if not come to M.A.B if you are in a crew fuck them and come to M.A.B

N.Tavarez 11-20-04 03:18 PM

ill let you know..................................

For$akeN 11-20-04 03:31 PM

haha...I actually liked it 8/10

N.Tavarez 11-22-04 07:40 PM

sound suprised....fors i heard you the man for sigs..pm me i want a special sig

streetryda 11-22-04 08:13 PM

this was pretty good man...flowed nice was humerous....pretty good diss...nice vocab and multis

keep it up fam

peace~1

¤ÐÅž¤ 11-22-04 09:10 PM

this was a good drop, nice structure n shitsome of ya lines would sound
dope in audio.< maybe you should give it a try dawg
overall i was feelin most of the punchlines< some funny shit..

N.Tavarez 11-23-04 09:08 PM

i wish i could do audio...this aint even my comp let alone a mic...but ill have all that shit soon..

Young Drama 04-18-05 11:27 PM

Dope Shit Man

Start Droppin Again


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