sabotage vs frein-ma$ter
 

Battle Rules:

4- 6 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


lets go if u think ur good.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-16-04 at 02:43 AM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

frein-ma$ter has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 02:00 AM.

sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 02:15 AM.

ok man i aint wanna have to do this


you a newb to this site so I don’t wanna hurt you little buddy
frein-master reminds me of homosexual comics…..so gay its funny

don’t know the difference between 10 lines and 5 bars kid go to hell
aint nobody feelin your sh!t except that dude from jail

in other words u get your fudge packed ya whole flows pre written
ima make this ‘fool vanish’ like ‘retarded magicians’

you only got 12 posts so ur chance to win is lessened
he runs his head into ‘english books’ in order to claim he got ‘sentenced’

here u go herb...

..Like rough sex when i poke his ass-is-ruined ...shove my fist through his gums make him hand-me-his-chewins... ,this pansy-is-ruined.. cause prem a ‘cut his chest‘, and (leave sabotage showing more heart) than a Family Reunion[b]//

...Trample-his-doings, he better duck when the free-mag-blows-him...or else the clip a leave his [b](health broke down) like rehab programs...his knee-scabs-open, when i shoot-this-zero...When i pull, it’ll leave sabotage (covering his face more times) than a super hero//
..Boot this queer~o, and get schooled when this dude’s majoring.. cause My verse Puts (Dyn in his place) more times than food catering...|new hater stings, come at request as soon as my foe’s need...Prem sharp, the knife a leave (blood leaking out ya face) like a fucking nose bleed//

...‘Close reads’, prem ‘ends chapters’ and haze his glaze...daze his wayz...like sneaking into a (retard’s racist movement)...Sab only accepted posed as Krazy K’s //

...Aint no breakin this don.. after battle his speech shakin and drawn...(Sabotage winning?) I leave this bitch (holding his mouth) like he’s taken a yawn//

MURKED>>>>>TKO!!

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

got dayum frein..u merked sabotage...nice shit fo real dawg...ur structure is bad though....ur flow is decent..punches is killin..no personals..Ill vocab...nicely done all around

sabotage...ur shit is too basic..u need to hit em hard..pull out the big words n punches n shit..ur flow was ok..structure bad ..keep ur shit together dont space bars...overall ok

that was a pretty good verse man. but it was kinda hard to read. but good drop..............

thanks!........................................... .........anyway uppin

This was feedback posted for frein-ma$ter
 

me= freeposter of the century can't vote.....but stretched lines galore in my opinion...........................................

uppin this shit.............................................. ..............

Voted For: sabotage

my vote goes to sabotage, nice verse, some ok pnches, good flow and good structure, frein, dont define all your sentences, a it pisses me of and b, the readers arnet that dumb ok!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

This was feedback posted for sabotage
 

checkin out this battle

hahhah^^^^^^^??? is this cat joking or wat........either ur the dumbest kid ever or just a dick rider.......anyway if u think i m wack battle me bitch.....

uppin LOLLLLLLLLLL...(if this is the typical voter at this site u wont be sein me long here)

^^ i was talking about mistic............................................ ............

wow ......anyway uppin

omg if you think sabotage won..fuckin dr uppin this....

upin.............................................. .....

Voted For: sabotage

yo man no doubt you won:
but first let me say what was wrong with frein-master did wrong:
first and most important:
your style was horribale i think you might have done everything wrong wit it first the //'s stop that second the bold letter, we no what the good lines are when we read it so no need for it third ____________ same thing as the bold letters.
ok second:
your flow sometimes it was short lines and then therew were long one and stop with the () i have no idea why you usew them
now thrid:
lyrics were pretty bad. i think it because your style and flow was bad. There was some good lines but alot just seemed played out
one think you did good was mults you had mad mults but that does win battles

ok sabotage:
first i don't like the new name
but everything else looked good

ok uppin 4 votes.....................................

This was feedback posted for frein-ma$ter
 

Just to tell youy.... you verse was pretty much all over the place which lost you allot of points... i was iight... but no need for he bolding and your "merked ko thing...

wow wat herbs......anyway uppin...................................

uppin this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

This was feedback posted for sabotage
 

checkin..........................TC............... .........

This was feedback posted for frein-ma$ter
 

checkin polls for this................................

uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Upppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!1

voting on this ish..........NOWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

u win

Voted For: sabotage

sabotage got diz cuz hiz structure wuz way better den dat other guyz i culdnt even follow diz other guyz rhymez it wuz 2 fukked up

^2 wack votes.......................................

yup^ lol......but 1 each so who cares i wanna get this battle done with anyway......UPPPPPPPINNNNNN

lets finish votin this battle.....come on!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: sabotage

sabotage took diz hands down...
i culdnt even work out diz other guyz flow, dat structure is horrible fien...
puns, structure an personals all go to sabotage
an without decent structure, puns n personals, ya verse is pointless....

frien, work on structure, cause ya rhyme scheme is so fucked up, i had to read it 3 times before i culd figure dat shit out
an thats not good, thats not good at all...
major flaw

so sabotage got diz
no hate
an return da fave vs keyz cuz its my first ever battl an i need 2 kno if itz iight or whakked

uppin for votess.........and if u dont know how to vote or u vote based on structure ur a herb....

uppin!!

^but if they have a hard time reading it then it aint bad if they base it partially on that........still uppin 4 votes..............

come on uppin......i wanna finish this battle fuck...its been up for like a month!!!!!

ok man uppin 4 votes...............................

can we get some votes in here?........................

ay man can we get some votes?......................

This was feedback posted for frein-ma$ter
 

good shit but i aint voting

uppin this for votes..............................