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String9487 vs Mayne Event
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 200 Posts to vote.. Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 10-16-04 at 12:59 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
good luck man...
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String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 12:40 PM.
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Mayne Event has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 12:43 PM.
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STRING IS IN THE BUILDING!!!!
eh yo, when i bring the heat, its doomsday my punches make ya jaw "pop out" like the PS2 tray. im schoolin diss nigga, call me young professa n thats a pretty sad "spit" u just a "tounge depressa" Event, he's no Rocky, hes just a bad contenda and dude is reaaaal sweet, like a bag of "Splenda" Why go weak? u punch like a Tai Bo Geek and u not the Mayne Event, u just a side show freak..hahaha put a fork in this clown.... |
If “STRING IS IN THE BUILDING”.............. then I’m flyin a plane through it..*
The only “WARNING” you’ll be getting....... is when your being bodys Split..* Face it ya never beat Ice Pick he merked you.. you got ya friends to ride you* But in my view…… you suck shit……….........and im sure you realize its true.. Weak at battling so he takes it out on herbs.. only thing is.. they still beat him.* I ain’t a herb.. and I aint comin easy.. like an anorexic at the gym..this lightweight.. ………………………………………..... ...........……………is rippin you limb from limb.. Check his sig.. says STRING IS IN THE BUILDING Sig.. says WARNING... Beat Ice Pick.. even though pick merked him, he got friends to ride him to victory.. |
um i def didnt get friends to ride me to victory as i dont know nebody on this website but thats ight tho
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If “STRING IS IN THE BUILDING”.............. then I’m flyin a plane through it..*
The only “WARNING” you’ll be getting....... is when your being bodys Split..* Face it ya never beat Ice Pick he merked you.. you got ya friends to ride you* But in my view…… you suck shit……….........and im sure you realize its true.. Weak at battling so he takes it out on herbs.. only thing is.. they still beat him.* I ain’t a herb.. and I aint comin easy.. like an anorexic at the gym..this lightweight.. ………………………………………..... ...........……………is rippin you limb from limb.. Check his sig.. says STRING IS IN THE BUILDING Sig.. says WARNING... Beat Ice Pick.. even though pick merked him, he got friends to ride him to victory.. |
good thing i looked at this.. cause i posted in the wrong spot..
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Voted For: Mayne Event
If “STRING IS IN THE BUILDING”.............. then I’m flyin a plane through it..* The only “WARNING” you’ll be getting....... is when your being bodys Split..* ^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE OPENER MAYNE Face it ya never beat Ice Pick he merked you.. you got ya friends to ride you* But in my view…… you suck shit……….........and im sure you realize its true.. Weak at battling so he takes it out on herbs.. only thing is.. they still beat him.* I ain’t a herb.. and I aint comin easy.. like an anorexic at the gym..this lightweight.. ………………………………………..... ...........……………is rippin you limb from limb.. ^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD NICE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND GOOD FLOW eh yo, when i bring the heat, its doomsday my punches make ya jaw "pop out" like the PS2 tray. ^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" PUNCH im schoolin diss nigga, call me young professa n thats a pretty sad "spit" u just a "tounge depressa" Event, he's no Rocky, hes just a bad contenda and dude is reaaaal sweet, like a bag of "Splenda" ^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE FLOW GOING GOOD "OK" PUNCHES DIDNT SEE ANY PERSONALS BUT "OK" PUNCHES Why go weak? u punch like a Tai Bo Geek and u not the Mayne Event, u just a side show freak..hahaha ^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD CLOSA KINDA AN WEAK VERSE NO GOOD HARD HITTIN PUNCHES NOR PERSONALS MAYNE EVENT-U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES AND PERSONALS (DECENT) STRING-U CAME A LIL WEAK IN DIS BATTLE "OK" PUNCHES DIDNT SEE ANY PERSONALS GOOD FLOW GOING MAYNE EVEN BEST LINE:If “STRING IS IN THE BUILDING”.............. then I’m flyin a plane through it..* The only “WARNING” you’ll be getting....... is when your being bodys Split..* Face it ya never beat Ice Pick he merked you.. you got ya friends to ride you* But in my view…… you suck shit……….........and im sure you realize its true.. ^^^^^^^^^^^^ PERSONALS AND PUNCHES (DECENT) STRING BEST LINE: eh yo, when i bring the heat, its doomsday my punches make ya jaw "pop out" like the PS2 tray. ^^^^^^^ NICE "OK' GOOD PUNCH COULD'VE BEEN BETTA V-MAYNE EVEN JUST CAME HARDER WIT DEM PERSONALS AND PUNCHES STRING-USE HARD HITTIN PUNCHES AND USE CREATIVE ONES AND USE PERSONALS TOO ~PEACE~ |
haha w/e lol his shit doesnt even rhyme
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umm.. yes it does.....
It rhymes with SPLIT.. You rhymes with True.. Him rhymes with Limb... Nuff said.. you cant sway it anyway.. |
throught it n body's split dont rhyme very well n obviously i can't sway it
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Voted For: Mayne Event
decent battle...... Mayne......your flow was good, your structure is unique never seen it before but its good, your persoanls were good...punches were fair nothing spectacular, vocab cool..metas not many, multies not many. String......you spit a brag line as a opener...talking about how ill u are is not a punch!!!!!!!flow was cool, structure cool, didn't have any personals...I saw ya try in ya closer no its not a personal just cuz u say his name...pretty weak drop...need to elevate. Flow>tie Structure>String PUnches>mayne Personals>Mayne Creativity>tie Vote: mayne |
Ditto here..............
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uppin for votes holla at ya boy if u want honest opinions on ur battles
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This was feedback posted for String9487
ill drop a honest vote in this battle.. if u drop an honest vote on my battle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155489
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Voted For: Mayne Event
aight, aight, aight...... mayne event.. decent verse, nice mix of punches n personals, decent structure, exceptional wordplay n ya killed the verse with ya finisher, decent drop... keep em comin... string, ya verse lacked creativity, like that damn ps2 tray bar, the opener, that was weak homeboy... no hate, but ya verse lacked creativity an the punches wasnt as strong, so my vote goes too the homeboy mayne event return the fave in my sig mayn.. peace |
uppin for votes holla at ya boy if u want honest opinions on ur battles
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Voted For: Mayne Event
yo check... mayne event won this battle fair and square.. better punches.. bad structure.. bad flow.. could have dont much better from both.. and string i thought u was good.. this was wack man.. mayne event wins nuf said.. |
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Voted For: Mayne Event
hands down mayne event got this harder with the punches got personals and string that string is in the building shit is gay |
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