GKillaz vs Envee
 

Battle Rules:

2 Lines - Puchline Battle
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good Luck!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-16-04 at 01:27 PM

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GKillaz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 01:02 PM.

iight just something new to try, good luck.. and may the best punchline win!
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Your the one n only phoney homie - blow me....
Faker then the meat they be puttin in balongy...
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Now how can you call this BEEF?.. lol BANG BANG!
Your up, bring the heat.. or end up like frosty...

Envee has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 01:06 PM.

This battle is pointless like U.S. bombing iraque...you intense...
Cause this the U.S.A. man no one wants your canadien "cents"...

Explanation...

1st line

When U.S. bombed iraque the was no reason for it cause there was no weapons and we were all tense cause we thought we would have another terroist attack...

2nd line

You from cannada and no one uses coins in tha usa from cannada and by sayin cents no one wanna hear ur bar

Dawg this battle is only 1 bar...

Fucken idiot

Dawg this battle is only 1 bar...

Fucken idiot

2 lines = 1 bar
4 lines = 2 bars

You did 2 bars...

and you said 2 lines...

Stupid ass...

VOTES

Voted For: Envee

eh... both need a lil bit of work.. the flow was a lil off on enees.. but he sitll got it.. cause the other duded punch was eh... bologny ?.. hehe.. na..
vote envee

Voted For: Envee

both punches weren't that hot but Envee's was better i like the reference to canda
holla at ya boy
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Lmfao!!!

I got one punch and u got 2 and i still got more votes

I did only do 2lines 1 bar.. and its the shit between the ~~~~~~ the your up bring da heat, was just tellin ya to bring da heat.. no line, iight lets get some votes...

Explain my punch since fuck face up there dont understand....

Hotdogs and Balongy are both made wit just extra meat n shit, and its like fake meat, same as procesed cheese.. it fake to!

lets get some votes, and yo.. win or lose, I want you in a real battle after...

fuck, explain your votes people.. he says cents and says it means no one wants to hear me?.. haha.. and Iraq shit is played like no tomorrow, one more reason why these D/R's gotta go!

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Haha right after this set it up dowg... make it due like monday cause I got some other battle 2 take care of make it a 8 bar battle

This was feedback posted for GKillaz
 

Aight i dunno.. i wasnt feelin this battle.. first of all the explinations by envee were too much.. and the whole bar u had i wasnt really feeling.. where do u get the BAR from "cents"... that jus doesnt work..

g kills.. it was alright, could be better.. little played.. with the phoney n shit..

i dont really wanna vote, because it was even on both sides..

Personals with the canada shit from envee, though it didnt really make sense to me..

where as gkillas had a little played line.. which could have been better..

both could have been worded better..

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thanks..

the cents mean like dont put ur 2 cents if ur not gonna vote.. meanin no1 wanna listen 2 his shit and no one uses candien coins in usa its wordplay blud

^^ aight.. true enuff.... diidnt see it like that.. even the explination was iffy on that.. oh well good luck to both..

iffy .. of course its iffy, he is tryna mke a hardcore puch outta a line that didnt make sence!, and how is mine played wit havin 4 rhymes in 1st line, and then a niice punchline for 2nd, which wasnt played.. Ive never seen it once!

^^ Your first line was played.. ive seen it soo many times...

the whole phoney homie as a multi. is played in general..

what about the whole.. only phoney homie blow me.. see that all the time NO, now STFU kid, and vote on battles.. not just leave feedback, and even if my first line was a lil played, my 2nd still took it

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Quit swayin bitch or you finna get DQed...
And thanks 4 tha votes who did vote... Can we get more votes in here? Fucking bitches like him gotta sway his votes in fuckin bitch made coward... My line was Iffy? fuck out of here aight hurb? Nerd ass muhfuckuh..

More votes please

Voted For: Envee

GKillaz:

well on your other name(i think) you did much better....
ok umm...... punch wasn't that effective and sort of played
in my opinion...............
overall: 5/10

Envee:

nice line.....i took it to the heart because i'm canadian:(
effective personal but it was played aswelll............
i would say that it was good though........................
overall: 6.5/10

vote: envee

Voted For: Envee

This battle is pointless like U.S. bombing iraque...you intense...
Cause this the U.S.A. man no one wants your canadien "cents"...
^^^^^mmmmm, not bad, flow was a bit off but punch wasnt bad, 6/10

Your the one n only phoney homie - blow me....
Faker then the meat they be puttin in balongy...
^^^^^mmm, didnt like this as much, i give 5/10

vote goes to envee, well done man, please returna dn honest vote on one of the battles below

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Thanks 4 tha votes guys this is my 1st battle since ive came back 2 RV and RB so it lookin good lmfao this bout 2 be a 5-0 KO lmfao...

Damn it

Da da da da da

Im loving it... Lmfao...

Vote more

P.S.

Ill vote in u guy's battles 2morrow

/\ Uppin' C'mon We Need More Votes Please...

Finish this shit up...

Voted For: Envee

aight this battle was pretty one sided... envee is gonna take this one with an all around better battle verse. the punches were solid as well as the personals... both of yall didnt have all that wonderful of structure but i guess that cancels eachother out in that category... aight this is my break down

Multis-none
structure-none
wordplay-envee
punches/personals-envee
flow-envee

like i said pretty one sided... i liked how he ripped on canada too... g killas just come harder next time... no hate tho

VOTE- ENVEE