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9th degree vs Tricky Wretch
Battle Rules:
10 lines. No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-16-04 at 03:32 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. Old/expired battle close - win |
9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 03:08 PM.
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Tricky Wretch has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 03:09 PM.
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I aint battled for a while.. next time you challange me make it a day before hand so i can get some personal's , I just dont know you but peace.
10. It's hopeless tryna beat me? 9th you know it's the end ...Cos ya punchlines miss me more.. Than my exgirlfriend! The champ never was gone... I always around, bitch.. I'll have this you beat down, like it was banned from soundclick! What the FUCK is the point? You know you wont win this.. Ya mom? I Unzip her pant's faster than Window's Winzip.. Fuck this homosexual bitch, Thinking MM isn't great? He's so gay.. Robin hood.. Could'nt get his arrow straight. I play trick's with word's & I even play trick's with whores. ........I'm the hardest mothafucka... In my bed with yours! |
Fuck not being abble to edit :cussing:
The champ never was gone... I was always around, bitch.. I'll have you beat down, like it was banned from soundclick! Incase you thought WTF? that line was retarded You & This? |
FYI kids, Tricky Wretch is Mental Murderous' alias...
You got no flava, so I'll spit now, it's time you were fed You out of ya Mental, that's funny judgin' by the size of your head The lines that I've said will murder this murderess, you drop crap, guy Prolly can't fight neither, but nobody could tell if you got a black eye! That's why, you should've declined, your spit'll be worthless This guy called Boys 2 Men 'cuz he thought it was a delivery service African cat, this battle's like his homeland, he got "sunned" Got shot down like Top Gun, on infomercials beggin' for adop-shun You look like Bubba from Forrest Gump breeded with a Hatian sow Account 36240, send him your donations now... His pic's at the bottom Peep the wordplay or don't vote, good luck bro... |
lol, funny that kid's know everything about me...
Are you one of socrates buddies? Good Luck though . . V0o0o0tes. |
Voted For: 9th Degree
9th: punch: 6/10you had way more punch 9th, cuz basiclly that guy jst sed he was better wen not.. flow: 8/10 yours flowed pretty good... vocab: 3/10 you shoudl use better next time... total: 17/30 (not good):( Tricky: punch: 5/10 blah!! wasn't good at all..u went wit it like a newb.. flow:8/10 your flow was alrite..not good though... vocab: 3/10, your vocab was weak... total:16/30.. 9th, you barely won this one.. jst do better next time.. vote: 9th Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^ That vote was stupid.. it made no sense you gave him a 6/10 and said he had way more punche's than me then you gave me a 5/10..? please dont vote here if your a moron.
Please breakdown your vote's.. |
Your a fucking dickrider what a miniute
Look punch: 6/10you had way more punch 9th, cuz basiclly that guy jst sed he was better wen not.. flow: 8/10 yours flowed pretty good... vocab: 3/10 you shoudl use better next time... total: 17/30 (not good) Tricky: punch: 5/10 blah!! wasn't good at all..u went wit it like a newb.. flow:8/10 your flow was alrite..not good though... NOTICE how he give's our flow BOTH 8 and give's him a GOOD comment and me a BAD comment.. & that wasn't even explained. |
Voted For: Tricky Wretch
very good battle 9th Degree-overall nice verse. you had a nice personal at the end. good closer. your opener wasnt too great but it was oka. your flow was okay. there was nothing wrong with your strucutre. the only thing i didnt like about your verse was the fact that you used that boyz 2 men line. i heard a joke like that about michael jackson so it wasnt very original. overall 8/10 Trick Wretch-pretty decent opener. better than 9th degree's openeer. i like the wordplay with the soundclick line. that was kinda funny. you had a good flow and structure was even. no streched out lines or nothing of that sort. your closer wasnt as good as 9th though. and you didnt really have any personals. overall 8/10 a kinda even battle i thought. i based it on originality and creativity. 9th degree had some good lines but that bar about boyz 2 men really killed it so im voting for Tricky Wretch |
Ayo Mental I'ma go holla at strobe and get dq'd...
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Voted For: Tricky Wretch
Both of you was good.. but some were kinda wack (th: ok you had an iight verse but not that good.. you had some flaw... definatly you didnt have good flow.. duno why hope said it was good.....ya structre was iight... you had good punches there were iight... though ya personals wasnt much of a threat there...some of your lnies were forced like the 3rd line... and some didnt connect.... and the last bar didnt rhyme.. wordplay was iight though Tricky Wrench: first ya shit was good... one sided battles kind of... you had good flow which was better... also ya personals were not as good but it was iight.. nice strucutre... punches were funny and good.....yours was much stronger that 9ths verse and it was overall better....... Vote is wrench for a better verse and more original with better punches and flow... |
This was feedback posted for Tricky Wretch
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Voted For: Tricky Wretch
You got no flava, so I'll spit now, it's time you were fed You out of ya Mental, that's funny judgin' by the size of your head ^^nicely worded/personal....7.5/10 The lines that I've said will murder this murderess, you drop crap, guy Prolly can't fight neither, but nobody could tell if you got a black eye! ^^ok punch...7.5/10 That's why, you should've declined, your spit'll be worthless This guy called Boys 2 Men 'cuz he thought it was a delivery service ^^nice i liked this...7.5/10 African cat, this battle's like his homeland, he got "sunned" Got shot down like Top Gun, on infomercials beggin' for adop-shun ^^koo wordplay/nice punch(personal).....8.5/10 You look like Bubba from Forrest Gump breeded with a Hatian sow Account 36240, send him your donations now... His pic's at the bottom ^^nice idea but wordin was a bit off, ok closer....6.5/10 .37.5/50 . It's hopeless tryna beat me? 9th you know it's the end ...Cos ya punchlines miss me more.. Than my exgirlfriend! ^^nice opener....8/10 The champ never was gone... I always around, bitch.. I'll have this you beat down, like it was banned from soundclick! ^^1st line blah...2nd was a good recovery...7.5/10 i only say that cuz of the (the champ never was gone) What the FUCK is the point? You know you wont win this.. Ya mom? I Unzip her pant's faster than Window's Winzip.. ^^blah...you kno this wasnt good...!..6.5/10 Fuck this homosexual bitch, Thinking MM isn't great? He's so gay.. Robin hood.. Could'nt get his arrow straight. ^^lmao...this was koo....8.5/10 I play trick's with word's & I even play trick's with whores. ........I'm the hardest mothafucka... In my bed with yours! hmmm this was aight...not hard hittin though...meh..7/10 37.5/50 . . hmm,aight this was real close 9th came with alot of personals that were good but not hittin as hard punches, but still personals that made ya laugh..... mm,good punches that were hittin hard not personal but the hit harder then 9th's did, this is 1 of those battle that you need to know what wins battles to be able to drop a good vote...(harder punches win battles)..so it was close but mm takes it for hader punches...srry nice...you came nice but ya punches jus werent as hard man... |
Voted For: 9th Degree
tricky no fucking self glory lines are madd played booooo punches and disses were ok tobe nice structure and flow was dope good there vocab was nice a 5/10 9th lol a opener personal here good lol at second bar too good shit also dope nice structure and flow but tricky had you there where you won is with better punches disses and dope personals 7/10 ok personals win battles and 9th had them on lock as well as punches here too so he gets my vote for hurting his oppenant more Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Tricky Wretch
checking votes for the EFL voting game...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573 |
get your gay ass hate vote out of here you ugly chump ,empire
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Voted For: Tricky Wretch
the reason y im votin for keys is as follows: his punches were better...the others were strechted an i wasnt feelin him structure.....the period was aite an it gave the feel that u were really spittin an not tyin and the flow..... overall it was just better to me...not some lame ass caps.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Sorry but nah, 3rd-Shift's vote was unexplained, and you can agree with me there. Anyways, uppin' for y'all who ain't vote yet... |
AIight yeah.. fair is fair UPIN.. empire is on my blacklist so he used this nick to vote for you... so he could be BANNEd if he does that again.
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Uppin' for more votes y'all, quit sleepin' on this
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This was feedback posted for Tricky Wretch
i hate voting:)....................................
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Upin this dead battle . .. .
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Voted For: 9th Degree
9th Degree You got no flava, so I'll spit now, it's time you were fed You out of ya Mental, that's funny judgin' by the size of your head lol good 8/10 The lines that I've said will murder this murderess, you drop crap, guy Prolly can't fight neither, but nobody could tell if you got a black eye! lmao I like this one 9/10 That's why, you should've declined, your spit'll be worthless This guy called Boys 2 Men 'cuz he thought it was a delivery service lmao again 9/10 African cat, this battle's like his homeland, he got "sunned" Got shot down like Top Gun, on infomercials beggin' for adop-shun oh the wordplay son the wordplay! 10/10 You look like Bubba from Forrest Gump breeded with a Hatian sow Account 36240, send him your donations now... Using someones punch to make your own bla 7/10 MM It's hopeless tryna beat me? 9th you know it's the end ...Cos ya punchlines miss me more.. Than my exgirlfriend! bla ok ok 7/10 The champ never was gone... I always around, bitch.. I'll have this you beat down, like it was banned from soundclick! not bad 8/10 What the FUCK is the point? You know you wont win this.. Ya mom? I Unzip her pant's faster than Window's Winzip.. bla made me smile bit but self glory punch 7/10 Fuck this homosexual bitch, Thinking MM isn't great? He's so gay.. Robin hood.. Could'nt get his arrow straight. lol ok 8/10 I play trick's with word's & I even play trick's with whores. ........I'm the hardest mothafucka... In my bed with yours! bla 7/10 MM overall 36/50 9th Degree overall 43/50 9 had harder punches better wordplay it was damn good, but I doubt most peeps understood it MM, you did well, to much self glory in this tho, come with harder punches pz |
shit my bad, MM your in the council, I dont usually vote on battles with crew members, didnt know sry, looks like you gon win anyways so sry man
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Well if you honestly felt I won then it's legal to vote against a crew member. Triple N voted against me when we were in MK together...anyways, uppin'...
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Voted For: 9th Degree
tricky: It's hopeless tryna beat me? 9th you know it's the end ...Cos ya punchlines miss me more.. Than my exgirlfriend! ^^ seen stuff similar 6/10 The champ never was gone... I always around, bitch.. I'll have this you beat down, like it was banned from soundclick! ^^hot bar maybe your best of the battle 9/10 What the FUCK is the point? You know you wont win this.. Ya mom? I Unzip her pant's faster than Window's Winzip.. ^^i understood this punch but its still gay 3/10 Fuck this homosexual bitch, Thinking MM isn't great? He's so gay.. Robin hood.. Could'nt get his arrow straight. ^^ehh decent 5/10 I play trick's with word's & I even play trick's with whores. ........I'm the hardest mothafucka... In my bed with yours! ^^good closer 7/10 overall : 30/50 (60%) 9th degree: You got no flava, so I'll spit now, it's time you were fed You out of ya Mental, that's funny judgin' by the size of your head ^^hot punch good personal 8/10 The lines that I've said will murder this murderess, you drop crap, guy Prolly can't fight neither, but nobody could tell if you got a black eye! ^^lol good bar 7/10 That's why, you should've declined, your spit'll be worthless This guy called Boys 2 Men 'cuz he thought it was a delivery service ^^hottest punch in this battle 10/10 African cat, this battle's like his homeland, he got "sunned" Got shot down like Top Gun, on infomercials beggin' for adop-shun ^^weak 2/10 You look like Bubba from Forrest Gump breeded with a Hatian sow Account 36240, send him your donations now... ^^1st line stretched decent closer 4/10 overall : 31/50 (62%) 9th degree took this one with a couple better punches it was a close battle but a couple of MM's lines were kinda weak |
Ok, uppin' this shit for some more votes, quit sleepin'...
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Battle got re-opened, so I'm uppin' this again. Good luck Havocc :thumbup:
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Uppin' again for some more votes yo...quit sleepin'
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Voted For: 9th Degree
Vote: 9th degree 9th: You got no flava, so I'll spit now, it's time you were fed You out of ya Mental, that's funny judgin' by the size of your head meh...ok opener, not really hard-hittin - 6.5/10 The lines that I've said will murder this murderess, you drop crap, guy Prolly can't fight neither, but nobody could tell if you got a black eye! lol, funny, gd punch, gd flow - 7.5/10 That's why, you should've declined, your spit'll be worthless This guy called Boys 2 Men 'cuz he thought it was a delivery service nice punch, gd diss, liked wordplay - 8/10 African cat, this battle's like his homeland, he got "sunned" Got shot down like Top Gun, on infomercials beggin' for adop-shun lol, gd humour, kinda harsh but fuck it, its battlin, gd wordplay, flow and originality - 9/10 You look like Bubba from Forrest Gump breeded with a Hatian sow Account 36240, send him your donations now... lol, gd closer tied in wid ur previous bar, was gd - 9/10 It's hopeless tryna beat me? 9th you know it's the end ...Cos ya punchlines miss me more.. Than my exgirlfriend! ok, wernt really feelin dis bar.......6/10 The champ never was gone... I always around, bitch.. I'll have this you beat down, like it was banned from soundclick! seen dis b4, but nice, gd flow, hard hitin - 7.5/10 What the FUCK is the point? You know you wont win this.. Ya mom? I Unzip her pant's faster than Window's Winzip.. haha, but made-up, gd punch tho, gd humour and originality -7.5/10 Fuck this homosexual bitch, Thinking MM isn't great? He's so gay.. Robin hood.. Could'nt get his arrow straight. basically...no........5/10 I play trick's with word's & I even play trick's with whores. ........I'm the hardest mothafucka... In my bed with yours! fell of in last 2bars....i spose u sort of xplained y abuv ur drop, but still --6.5/10 RTF - links in sig |
Aight, tied up 3-3, uppin' this again yo...vote kids!
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Are you getting friends to vote ?
............... I'm being serious.... Because I dont care if you do because I dont care about this nickname.... The point is my verse was better. |
No, I'm not getting friends to vote, nor would I never think of doing such a thing. Voting is based on opinions, and the last 3 people who voted simply thought my verse was better i their opinion. Sorry for the confusion :thumbup:
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Uppin' again, let's get some more votes here kids.
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Voted For: 9th Degree
flow: 9th punches: preety even but id say 9th edge it creativeness: keys this was closer then it looks and it was a grate read but 9th had better flow and was more hard hitting with punches nice battle... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^Unexplained, I'm getting that removed...upping for real votes people.
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