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Keys vs TuNiT
Battle Rules:
8 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 10-17-04 at 09:23 AM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
TuNiT has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 08:58 AM.
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u want to drop somthin hot so bad u even named yoself keys (keys like computer keys)
you got as much chance of beatin me as eminem gettin on his knees (slim hatez fags) ho please your rhymes r poor u even get beet down by fiends like a dealers front door u fucking whore go play wit cho dildo even if u cut off me hands ill still flow dis aint no show itz all fuckin real an u suckin dick moe then a gotdang navy seal |
Keys has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 09:10 AM.
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I'm the winner here.. are you a man or a mouse?
He's so fuckign ugly.. The mirror's all ran out his house! You think your dangerous like GUNIT?..:( dude it's ova.. He dont hold any gun's.. He just rock's his supersoakers! I'm not even gonna bother.. Cos I Fear noman.. I'll cut him and this verse... ....Shorter than garrycoleman! I'll break this loser.. Leave him dazzled shaken & rattled.. Only ya mom COULD Beat-me ...................................& i aint talking about this battle! |
luvely verse homie dat wuz fiyaaaaaaaaaah u gots skillz u probably beat me
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Voted For: TuNiT
ok you got this you had better punches which made more sense try to elevate yeh?? not bad though keys your verse was aight but half of it made no sense if ya no whatta mean ot bad thoughsorry for the short explination but thats it... return the favour links inb the sig no hate |
Voted For: TuNiT
u want to drop somthin hot so bad u even named yoself keys (keys like computer keys) you got as much chance of beatin me as eminem gettin on his knees (slim hatez fags) nice opener ^^^ decent personals n punches T, ya flow was right on point keys, dunno if ya took your oppenent for granted? but from the complexcity of ya rhyme scheme n structure, it looks like u couldda came alot harder, i gotta give this to T-Unit.. return the fave yall |
I dint bother... but i beat him.
....................... This is why you never battle in FL....... |
well im 2-0 up an ur rhymes were nuthing but played out shit, gary coleman has been used too much in rhymes, same as the super soaker line, ya verse was un creative
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^ nigga shut the fuck up u as wack as shit.... u just got ur good dickriders''s
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yea an yo moms one of dem muthafukker!!!
uppin for votes cause i MERKED DIZ KAT |
yo can we get some honest vtes an i'll return da favor
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yo can we get some votes peoples????????????????????????????
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Lol.. nigga i'll woop ya ass shut the fuck up you wak as fuck..
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you da wack wun i'm 2 up kiiiiiiiiiiiiiid :) so u shut da fuck up
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can we gert sum voteiz on dis battle it haz been open fo monthz biatch
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Voted For: Keys
Keys: u had aight punches, hardly any of them were landin tho, rhw atructure was good & not stretched-out, and the flow was okay, but u had some pretty weak punches tho... Tunit: your punches were pretty weak here too, none of them landed, ur flow was a lil short, and the structure wasnt as good tho, but overall Keys took this one here tho |
hey vote fo meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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can i get sum votrz on d battle hurr i alwayz vote foe uz
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Voted For: TuNiT
both wack as hell and need elevation desperately, toddler rhymes and concepts. ima give it tun coz of his first bar, was actuall punch. rtf or il have to dq this vote. |
dqed in a day unless u rtf in sig................
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This was feedback posted for TuNiT
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Voted For: Keys
Keys: I'm the winner here.. are you a man or a mouse? He's so fuckign ugly.. The mirror's all ran out his house! Haha..Not Hard Hitting Though..3/10 You think your dangerous like GUNIT?.. dude it's ova.. He dont hold any gun's.. He just rock's his supersoakers! Weak..2/10 I'm not even gonna bother.. Cos I Fear noman.. I'll cut him and this verse... ....Shorter than garrycoleman! Ok..4/10 I'll break this loser.. Leave him dazzled shaken & rattled.. Only ya mom COULD Beat-me ...................................& i aint talking about this battle! Wack..3/10 Overall: 12/40..You Got Punches, Just Make Em Original and More Creative. TUniT: u want to drop somthin hot so bad u even named yoself keys (keys like computer keys) you got as much chance of beatin me as eminem gettin on his knees (slim hatez fags) Wack..2/10 ho please your rhymes r poor u even get beet down by fiends like a dealers front door WTF? Nah..2/10 u fucking whore go play wit cho dildo even if u cut off me hands ill still flow No NO NO!! 1/10 dis aint no show itz all fuckin real an u suckin dick moe then a gotdang navy seal WTF? Get Outta Here..0/10 Overall: 4/40...You Need To Stop Rapping. ~R~ |
This was feedback posted for TuNiT
Keys Got It But Can't Vote..........................
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Voted For: TuNiT
wack battle here here not enuff wordplay no stretch lines or anythin but ima give tunit the vote for just comin out wit hard punches thats it but keep it up aight this was a weak battle but can be improve by workin on ur weaknesses aight my v/ tunit |
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