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THUGLIFEOUTLAW vs :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-17-04 at 03:26 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
:::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..::: has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 02:28 PM.
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bitch you a fake thug claimin ya ''gang bang''..
punches like this ya lil ass would have more chance steppin to clubber lang! just think what you gonna tell your seeds? ''hey kids, i pretend i'ma gangster an live life high on weed!''.. you just been ''emceed'' an shit this is just font... in reality i could pick personals like a menu at a resturant.. this is sink or swim an you in the deep pool... your lyrical content aint nothin but a weak tool... you fool, put down the mouse an unplug ya keyboard.. like ''carmen san diego'' ya whole worlds bein played an explored.. ya font dosent succeed so i hope you dont pop a e-cap.. or i'ma have to retaliate by givin you a fuckin e-slap!.. i set a lyrical mine an you just been verbally boobie trapped.. this battles ''signed n sealed'' an you just been gift wrapped..(rapped) punches like this ya lil ass would have more chance steppin to clubber lang! ^^^ clubber lang froim the movie rocky a.k.a mr.T lol.. like ''carmen san diego'' ya whole worlds bein played an explored.. ^^^ carmen san diego is an old ass game, cant remember what on? sega or some shit, lol, but it was a tv programme too, yall should know what it is n get that punch.. |
THUGLIFEOUTLAW has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-04 02:51 PM.
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I'm untouchable, theres really nothing you can do to this,
You be biting ideas off of niggas, just like ya did to Ludacris, http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155334 Your punches are like the jets in Iraq, they're scared to land, Close you got to being dope was actually gettin drugs from ya 'dopeman' How's this cat gonna rip me if he still cant figure females out? and How ya gonna get 'dirty dirty' when you dont have shit 'down south' I'm about to king these mothafucker, like he was a game of checkers, newb basher, cuz he's all up on my challenge once he seen my 1-3 record, I'm not a big fan of alias's either, cuz ya ask me they all suck, and if ya look in the link below, even he admits his names gay as fuck. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=151653 *The reason I said he cant figure females out, is bcz he made a thread about he can't figure girls out on the site, if ya want you can go and find it, i just didn't wanna use it, cuz I already got 2 links in this. VOTE!!!! |
uppin this battle.................................
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Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
dope man got this, his puns n personals were alot more creative.............. decent flow n rhyme scheme an it was just a okay verse on da whole thug life yo verse was aight, the highlight of the battles were the 2 links, but the rest of the content wasnt as strong, so my vote goes too dopeman, sorry homie |
upin yall
dont sleep lemme get some votes!!!!!!!! |
uppin votes i need some battles closed so i can battle some more honest votes tho.....ill return da favor jus leave da link.
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yupp
what he said uppin y'all........... don't sleep |
uppin
dont sleep yall......... honest votes will be returned |
god damnit
can we get some votes uppppin, dont sleeeeeeeeeeeeep... |
stop sleein god damnit......
upin for votes!!!!!! |
Voted For: THUGLIFEOUTLAW
aight i was feeling both your verses, i felt dopeman could have come harder, lines i liked from dope were. 'you fool, put down the mouse an unplug ya keyboard.. like ''carmen san diego'' ya whole worlds bein played an explored' nice and smooth set a lyrical mine an you just been verbally boobie trapped.. this battles ''signed n sealed'' an you just been gift wrapped not bad kinda generic but not bad at all you had a better flow in this battle. untouchable didnt have the witty punches but some raw personals. I'm about to king these mothafucker, like he was a game of checkers, newb basher, cuz he's all up on my challenge once he seen my 1-3 record I'm not a big fan of alias's either, cuz ya ask me they all suck, and if ya look in the link below, even he admits his names gay as fuck I'm untouchable, theres really nothing you can do to this, You be biting ideas off of niggas, just like ya did to Ludacris shit was serious i always dig personals because in real life thats the shit that wins battles, flow was dopeman sounded better but i'd give this battle to vote-untouchable Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
diz wuz a reel close battl but i thank dat drope got diz cause of dem lines................ bitch you a fake thug claimin ya ''gang bang''.. punches like this ya lil ass would have more chance steppin to clubber lang! ^^^ dey wuz hot, i lyke da puns in dere yo just think what you gonna tell your seeds? ''hey kids, i pretend i'ma gangster an live life high on weed!''.. you just been ''emceed'' an shit this is just font... in reality i could pick personals like a menu at a resturant.. ^^^ dey wuz reel nice i lyke dem puns fa showley you fool, put down the mouse an unplug ya keyboard.. like ''carmen san diego'' ya whole worlds bein played an explored.. ^^ datz nice 2, nice personal I'm untouchable, theres really nothing you can do to this, You be biting ideas off of niggas, just like ya did to Ludacris, ^^^ i dont get it yo?????????????? Your punches are like the jets in Iraq, they're scared to land, Close you got to being dope was actually gettin drugs from ya 'dopeman' ^^ iraq shit iz played but dat drug line wuz fiyahj I'm about to king these mothafucker, like he was a game of checkers, newb basher, cuz he's all up on my challenge once he seen my 1-3 record, I'm not a big fan of alias's either, cuz ya ask me they all suck, and if ya look in the link below, even he admits his names gay as fuck. ^^ dey wuz pretty boring puns dat never really landed on da whole yo thug yo verse wuz iight but ya vocab wuz plain n simple n dere wuz no creativity dope had a few iight puns n personals an better flow so mah vote goes 2 him |
can we get some damn votes yall
upppppppppppppin!!! |
Voted For: THUGLIFEOUTLAW
dopeman: nice verse, good wordplay, aight, but it was kinda boring, no hate though. untouchable: nice. more interesting 2 read, nice flow. pz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin yall
dont sleep votes will be returned!!!!! |
uppin yall
dont sleep this battle needs votes fa sho... |
uppin yall
dont sleeeeeeeeep honest votes will be returned thanx peace |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
I think that Dopeman got this battle because i feel that Dopeman came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Dopeman got it they were used effectifely and were on point U'Flowz u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Dopeman good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Dopeman and flow and structure i'll give to Dopeman. V/Dopeman There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly |
uppin for votes people
honest votes will be returned |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
punches-dM stuture-UF pers-DM mets-none multis-none best-DM dm wins his punches landed he had some the other guy UF had some punches land but wasnt very hard came ok wasnt as good tho DM wins this nearly 1 sided all the way ~1~ |
This was feedback posted for :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
just checking polls..........
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This was feedback posted for :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
had it punches all i can say. i dont wanna vote because no one pays the favor.......
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Voted For: THUGLIFEOUTLAW
i think untouchable got this,it was close but a weak battle,u both lacked in hard hitten punches,u could have been wittier and creative,and using links is a cheap move to do,its just not original in my opinion,well untouchable had good personals but he could have used them in a better way,dopeman lacked in punches and personals he came weak on them and wasnt witty.so my vote goes to untouchable... ps.return the favor in my sig thx -1- |
Voted For: :::..D|O|P|E|M|A|N..:::
dope man had better punches had ill rhyming tight wordplay nice flow good meatas his punches were crazy flowz had an ight verse punches didnt hit as hard not many meatas and the ones that he had were weak vote on my battles |
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