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Adrenaline vs genocide
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 10 Check in by: 10-21-04 at 12:34 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
genocide has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 12:49 PM.
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Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 02:04 PM.
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Man, ya not a challenge but worse of all I'll murder you
Fuck punches hows this for a personal, ....................I've never heard of you! You lie gay talkin shit while I just stand straight & blowin army gaurds, is the only way u'll establish a fanbase! Ya just a young buck, n schools hallways r callin sport... ya skill is like fuckin midgets trippin, always fallin short! My spits automatic, ur more along the lines of wat a semi brings, you've never lost yet.... but kid theres a 1st time 4 everything! You'll never drop hot........ even with as hard as you jumpin, truth is..... this fuckin noob'll prolly borrow bars from'is oven! U'll catch disrespect like cinderella, but no rags to riches... and u'd hafta turn kindapper.... ..........just'a bag some bitches!! This is nuthin but a quick key so drop ya written shit... cuz my rep is here, and none of ya disses are hittin it!! The shit ur throwin is wild.... easily said ur out of the box You like d/r'ing... cuz it seems like ya proud of the cocks! I'm whorin ya ass, a loss is what ya finally givin at last... bitch you were unbeaten........now ya just livin in past! yA Not the herb I mention, if I say 'pass the stuff'.... ya not dope............. ya lucky your the grass I cut! ehh... quick-ey |
Lood kid u been actin hard for days but ur more like limpbizkit/
your flows like aids u just cant live with it/ ur rhymes are not grimy cuz all I see is prettyness/ ill leave u in a ditch like waste/thats a pretty mess/ I spit bars like water the way it flows so easily/ ur not hard homie please stop ur cheesin me/ ur only an act white boy ur too wack/ im watchin u like a sitcom/nothin but laughter/ ur like a boring book/I cant even read the first chapter/ I destroy emcees like a virused-up lyricist/ am not just about rap ill deliver u two fists/ I bring creative shit to the table/all u bring is garbage/ u couldn't be the best ur the opposite of carnage/ ayo its over man but am gonna put a stamp on dis shit... wat I gotta do to eliminate dis bastard/ pull out ma gat/stand back/and watch him fade like casper/ feel me homie/am all about it/ i cuz beef/i got heat/u dont wanna be around it/ my sky aint blue/so u can feel its clouded/ am clappin foolz who think am only half-jamaican/ u afraid cuz my verses turn niggaz to caucasians/ back in the day i used to live in a project/ u neva saw a hood in ur life/ur just a "soft head"/ look/my heart's black like the juice from coca-cola/ if i saw u/i'd chop u in peices like the knife from pizza nova/ I can change moodz like autumn was in February/ i bet this kid change dudes like the attitude of jim carey/ FUCK THIS BITCH! HE COULDN'T ACHIEVE A GANGSTA FIGURE/ IF HE WAS HANDED BAGGY CLOTHES,BANDANAS AND A TUPAC PICTURE// YA SUCKA!! lets see wat u got...lol |
ayo!!!
I like this one...This was definately my best battle so far...where the votes at?? nice challenge genocide*props* but am takin the throne now homie!! ya! |
if you say so little man but nice verse this is a close battle im a like the turn out and if ya need a crew talk to mad dog in D2R tell him that i sent you.
yo uppin this shit for votes yall. -genocide- |
uppin this shit boys and girls now lets get some votes on this shit yall
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ayo G, peeps aint votin... whats really good??????
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This was feedback posted for genocide
is this a second battle?...........
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well anyway can yall return the favor, i voted in yalls other battle...and my battle is being slept on...so can you guys vote honestly on that battle..
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Voted For: genocide
Lemem lay it down im watchin u like a sitcom/nothin but laughter/ ur like a boring book/I cant even read the first chapter/ ^^Best example of how whack your verse was. No mulitples, no metaphores worth mentioning. WEak verses. Toatlly friggin wack IP: Man, ya not a challenge but worse of all I'll murder you Fuck punches hows this for a personal, ....................I've never heard of you! ^^Not a bad beggining, led to better things. Not great but better than taht other ma fuckas. Punches made more sense, sounded less forced. Vote-Genocide |
uppin for some more votes yall thats 0-1 me
am i winning both of our battles yes and the bad thing is is that you wanted this second one |
uppin this for some fuckin votes
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uppin for some fuckin votes yall...
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uppin for some serious votes on this shit mayn come on yall vote please
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uppin for some serious votes on this shit mayn come on yall vote please
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uppin for some motha fuckin votes...
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uppin for some serious votes on this shit mayn come on yall vote please
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uppin for some serious votes on this shit mayn come on yall vote please
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uppin for some serious votes on this shit mayn come on yall vote please
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uppin for some serious votes on this shit mayn come on yall vote please
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uppin for some serious votes on this shit mayn come on yall vote please
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uppin this shit again for some damn votes come on and vote i will return votes on this shit
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. . . . . . . . . . . . . cricket, cricket. WHERE ARE THE F---ING VOTES |
Voted For: genocide
v/social outsider ehhh. both dropped story books. i just felt socials verse more, had some good witty punches in there. opener was mad playedddd son. ya had a couple quoteables in there. overall he came good. adrenaline. i unno really what to say. shit you dropped was blahh made me sleepy just reading it. nothin stood out at all. keep elevating. |
uppin nfor votes 2-0 come on and vote this fuckin sucks ass come on and vote on this shit
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Voted For: genocide
not a lot to say. social outsider took this easy,harder punches,beta struct,flow...he used metas and good wordplay. adrenaline-your shit was weak...no creativity. no punches,no nothin..... |
return 1 here genocide...............................
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Voted For: genocide
you win this one cause the outher dude is a mother fucking faggot and cant rap breake down punches social multies- social everything else social so vote?social |
uppin for some serious votes on this shit mayn come on yall vote its 4-0 me so do thiss
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Voted For: Adrenaline
adreniline merked this kid mad personals tight ryming nice wordplay mad structre meatas were tight 2 punches hit hard best line- FUCK THIS BITCH! HE COULDN'T ACHIEVE A GANGSTA FIGURE/ IF HE WAS HANDED BAGGY CLOTHES,BANDANAS AND A TUPAC PICTURE social otsyder had basic structre rhyming but ight flow wordplay was kinda weak an ight verse best line-Ya just a young buck, n schools hallways r callin sport... ya skill is like fuckin midgets trippin, always fallin short vote on my battle |
ok uppin this cat ^^^^^ appenterly cat see a good battle whe he sees one pop up in frount of his face but any ways UPPIn
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Voted For: genocide
^nice closer.. lmao.. ur structure was kinda eh.. but u had nice punches and good flow.. the best bar in the battle was: My spits automatic, ur more along the lines of wat a semi brings, you've never lost yet.... but kid theres a 1st time 4 everything! ^lol, nice.. dayum u had a nice closer..! ur opener was okay.. but u came harder than adrenaline- he had attempted punches but he didn't deliver them the way he could have.. nice quick battle you two.. and good luck with this one.. pz.. |
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