Stephen Elwood vs. Socrates
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Read & Good Luck Check Ins Are Due Wednesdays By 12 Midnight Eastern Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern |
again! thats gayyyyyyyyyy
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Honestly..
I dont know who you are, Your fuckups? I could write pages you know And id take you back to school.. But i finished Grade 7 ages ago, Smoka knows, Im twistin this nut like i resemble some spanners The type of guy to say nigga please!!, cause his mom taught him manners, Your heads gettin bigger man, so this loss is affecting your crew, Funny.. .. This is my 30th post, and im still more respected than you, You were gone? News to me but you better start listenin' bitch, Fact is we knew you was gone.... we just didnt give a shit. Your just whack, so i dont know why you choose to lie, Said face the facts.. so now hes staring whack eye 2 eye, Dont respect you, cause man you never come hard, Youd live of reputation, but its not gettin' you far. |
This battle is useless as fuck kid I ALREADY BEAT YOU
So now ill just decide whats more of a joke, you or your crew iight well im typing with my right, ill slap you with the other hand Cuz you gunna need enough Dr.'s to cure aids in my motherland multis is nothing, so my verse and you have something in common This fag went Lloyd Banks style on me, and started eating raw-men They say you're stiff competition, i dont believe it dumbass Stephen Elwood?^^^ More like an ignorant kid in spanish class Youre just right above me man, ill knock you to a lower place Confidence in your crew is dwindling WHOA spelled in lower-case Go ahead drop your hardest, i wanna see what youre about Cuz if we goin for match of the weak ........your verse will DEFINATLY help out |
hey umm , he obviously dropped while i was keyin so dont mind some of those lines i thought i was dropping first...:)
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we discussed the editing of my verse.. i oriiginally dropped 8 but he came 12, we keyed same time.. so yeah.
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wait wait wait
so socrates, it was ok for u to allow him to edit in lines BUT....... i owuldn't of been ok for me to edit out lines cuz i dropped to many |
i gues.. just vote dizzle.
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LOL... Vote: Elwood.
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lol i just realized
it says "new to rb" |
sdizzle, that was cuz i was running the tourny n the rules said that YOU couldnt edit your verse at all after 10 minutes. btw GREAT vote god :thumbup:
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vote whores.......
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This battle is useless as fuck kid I ALREADY BEAT YOU
So now ill just decide whats more of a joke, you or your crew stfu...... |
hah..
e-style, nucca. |
stephen-
I dont know who you are, Your fuckups? I could write pages you know And id take you back to school.. But i finished Grade 7 ages ago, filler^^ Smoka knows, Im twistin this nut like i resemble some spanners The type of guy to say nigga please!!, cause his mom taught him manners, average ^ Your heads gettin bigger man, so this loss is affecting your crew, Funny.. .. This is my 30th post, and im still more respected than you, alright You were gone? News to me but you better start listenin' bitch, Fact is we knew you was gone.... we just didnt give a shit. too basic Your just whack, so i dont know why you choose to lie,Said face the facts.. so now hes staring whack eye 2 eye, mmmn Dont respect you, cause man you never come hard, Youd live of reputation, but its not gettin' you far. alright socrates- This battle is useless as fuck kid I ALREADY BEAT YOU So now ill just decide whats more of a joke, you or your crew decent iight well im typing with my right, ill slap you with the other hand Cuz you gunna need enough Dr.'s to cure aids in my motherland good multis is nothing, so my verse and you have something in common This fag went Lloyd Banks style on me, and started eating raw-men alright They say you're stiff competition, i dont believe it dumbass Stephen Elwood?^^^ More like an ignorant kid in spanish class nice Youre just right above me man, ill knock you to a lower place Confidence in your crew is dwindling WHOA spelled in lower-case nice[b] Go ahead drop your hardest, i wanna see what youre about Cuz if we goin for match of the weak ........your verse will DEFINATLY help out [b]mmmnnn?? is this a compliment LOL? [b]kats- punches-socrates(came a lil harder) multies-none wordplay-socrates(had like 1 or 2 lines alright wordplay) personals-socrates(they were forced though) creativity-rarely any...too simple verses metaz-none flow-tie well both mc's came with a simple verse...i gave this to socrates because his punches were more consistent and he came harder......u both need to put some multies in there and some creative wordplay to elevate ya verses....anyway this was a weak battle... vote- socrates |
stephan elwood:
I dont know who you are, Your fuckups? I could write pages you know And id take you back to school.. But i finished Grade 7 ages ago, ^^ decent opener not hott 5/10 Smoka knows, Im twistin this nut like i resemble some spanners The type of guy to say nigga please!!, cause his mom taught him manners, ^^lmao hot shit 9/10 Your heads gettin bigger man, so this loss is affecting your crew, Funny.. .. This is my 30th post, and im still more respected than you, ^^good bar 7/10 You were gone? News to me but you better start listenin' bitch, Fact is we knew you was gone.... we just didnt give a shit. ^^good consistency hott bar 8/10 Your just whack, so i dont know why you choose to lie, Said face the facts.. so now hes staring whack eye 2 eye, ^^played 3/10 Dont respect you, cause man you never come hard, Youd live of reputation, but its not gettin' you far. ^^decent closer 5/10 overall : 37/60 (62%) Socrates: This battle is useless as fuck kid I ALREADY BEAT YOU So now ill just decide whats more of a joke, you or your crew ^^ kinda weak 4/10 iight well im typing with my right, ill slap you with the other hand Cuz you gunna need enough Dr.'s to cure aids in my motherland ^^ pointless bar 3/10 multis is nothing, so my verse and you have something in common This fag went Lloyd Banks style on me, and started eating raw-men ^^lmao hot 9/10 They say you're stiff competition, i dont believe it dumbass Stephen Elwood?^^^ More like an ignorant kid in spanish class ^^ weak 4/10 Youre just right above me man, ill knock you to a lower place Confidence in your crew is dwindling WHOA spelled in lower-case ^^ consistently weak 4/10 Go ahead drop your hardest, i wanna see what youre about Cuz if we goin for match of the weak ........your verse will DEFINATLY help out ^^ ehh decent 5/10 overall : 29/60 (48%) vote: stephen elwood |
v/elwood
with better overall flow,punches,and personals but socrates came decent as always also.... peace |
v/elwood
had over all the better punches personals and flow with structure..... socrates you came okay but not good enough to get the win |
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you sir, are an idiot... dont ever vote on either of our battles again. |
Closed. Stephen Elwood wins. Edit your check-in with 4 votes next time or bad shit is gonna happen...really bad shit...
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