GangsStarShit vs dflow
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-21-04 at 01:54 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

dflow has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 01:55 PM.

yo ur lyrics r weak/ u should have em liftin weights
ill send u spirit to hire peaks/give ur ma the latest updates
on how i left ya body upstate/my rappin i think u under estimate/ i sell bricks to cribs/ like real estate/u sell nicks to kids/and ya cells prepaid/ya crossed ur line a fate/now im gonna put u back in place/man u prolly havent even gottin to first base/so all u do is sit on the net and masturbate/u just mad cause labels turn u down like ya dads welfare case/after ur defeated ur gonna be takin place/by the next rapper that wanna get interlaced/and purposely misplaced/all put u in a box like wheat thins/cause my steel meet ya tin/leave nut residue on ya gurls chin/if u win that would be a glitch/cause u aint nuttin i go home and take a gangstashit

GangsStarShit has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 05:56 AM.

well i don't remember accepting this but oh well ima key sumthin up...

Verse,

Somethins suspicious wit this newb jack ass Kid dflow,
It's prolly the reverse merkins he wants not 5 votes he wants it's zero,

This kids an outsider got no friends come to mention,
Him camping outsides the only way he's makin criminal in-tent-ions,

Thinks he'll elevate fast jus coz he's from Concord,
They crashed and burned like u'll do too like skaters lightin up their skateboards,

Blah 6 lines is all his worth no attempt whatsoever

lets get some votes who u think really one
-peace

uppin.............................................

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Voted For: GangsStarShit

dflow:
i dont know what that was..your stucture was seriously fucked up..punches were weak no vocab it was a alaround as kickin you got sry but man you have no punches and no wordplay nothing to hot hear...i gotta give this one to GGS he was hot...2/10

GangsStarShit:
dawg not bad...your stucture was a little off but it flowed...nice vocab nice witty metas..nice punches they were hot as fuck...could of been better but i dont think you tryed lol...nice punches enough said...try fixing your stucture make it even it will flow alot better therw out the whole verse..iight..7/10

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Voted For: GangsStarShit

Aiight, easy vote. GSS got this shit won because he had better well thought out disses and overall, better flow and punchlines. dflow, I see you got some potential, but you need to work on making your punches connect as opposed to going off track, and you need to try and use personals. Try reading the tutorials on this site to elevate. As for this battle GSS gets my vote.

Peace.

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Voted For: GangsStarShit

i think that GangsStarShit got this one. D ya structure let ya down on this, coz i could hardly read it. It was all mixed in.
just get rid of the /'s coz they mess up ya verse. couldn't really see any decent punches neither. nice creativity from gangstar. had some nice use of meta in here. I give gangstar this based on a better structured verse anda more cmplex verse:- metas and wordplay.

Votes: GangsStarShit

/\ very nice way to use ur 1,000th post uppin this

Voted For: GangsStarShit

blah battle...

dflow...it's apparent you're a newb...cuz ya verse was newbish...no hate dawg, but u need to up ya game...ya shit was simply to basic, try and be more creative next time...and the worst part was your structure...you need to press enter after every line, it'll make ya shit look cleaner...

GS, u had a meh verse...but then again, i guess you didnt have to try that hard...punches were aight, not outstandin, but aight...stucture was decent....but anyways, i know you can do better than that...but nevertheless,

V/ GS for better overall verse (structure mainly)...

Voted For: GangsStarShit

Nice battle I thought flow come ok but I did feel
the way you droped that verse..

Didn't really feel your punches and there wasnt
any wordplay....

Gangsta ~ come hott nice verse with nice word play
I thought the punches was on point and hit hard..
I also liked the way you droped the verse.

Vote ~ G