(x) CeEd vs ...Xclusive...
 

Battle Rules:

6-10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Suck One You bitch newb he called me on just to let yall no cause other then tha ti wouldent of battled him...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-21-04 at 03:14 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

k i seted up a brand new battle foryou newb...

...Xclusive... has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 06:42 PM.

http://community.rapverse.com/priva...wpm&pmid=303215
^^^thats where he pmed me to battle i wouldent battle him otherwise then that.......


Ceed what a fucked name what you think your so tough…
You cant take on a computer nerd, isn’t that already enough?…
You pm’ed me for a battle fuck your gay stop baggin on me…
Im gonna lay it fast break your neck and put you in plastic-surgery…
Your getting annoying stop pming me your like a sore brain infection…
Go get a life before this battles over, now were done this rap section…
He thinks hes better then me cause hes 14 also but hasn’t had an erection…
Hes just a short bitch with no life so he tryes rap sites to hit perfection…

when you gonna spit dawg?...i aleady did some quick shit lol not even good i didnt use no punches haha

(x) CeEd has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 11:27 PM.

Offensive or inoffenceive, relentless,how, could you think id b the one you bend wit (beef) delt wit light u up quiker wit' fuel and lepsip,//
on a richter scale i wud add up to be a 10,
Me is like the devil himself, never rebel but i wud kill you kwiker than any1 you wud neva tell, U wud neva regain ur strength even if even if you were a RENAGADE,blow u up wit a grenade,still on a raid, to bail out but cant make a move or cant even move on open space//
You a liar on probation, evryrhing wantz me to punch your face in, me a newb, KILL you like you aint no professional,
ill stand alone shoot you and blow u as an individual,
NO XCLUSIVE here its all ova bullets gone noe its the death RITUAL,//

ppl uppin 4 votez thanx............................................. ..

KILL you like you aint no professional,
ill stand alone shoot you and blow u as an individual,
NO XCLUSIVE here its all ova bullets gone noe its the death RITUAL,//
^^^that wa syour best but it was still wack...you need help wit punches dawg i think im gonna get this a KO so you better not dick ride or i will have to dick ride to...i got more hook ups den you so...but no hate alright verse for anewb nice vocabulary...
but ya uppin for votes

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

checkin polls........peace ~1

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This was feedback posted for (x) CeEd
 

mmmmm, if ex ceEd made his sentences more "readable he would win, xclusive, your punches were weak and they were dry, no hate just telling you how it is, stretched lines, but flow was consistant, x, flow was a bit wack, sort your flow and you speling and gramma out, make you shit understandable and you'll kick ass, i cant vote cuase im in your crew, o well

Yo Ppl Upppin 4 Votezz

um mistic rogue your wack i had dope punches and personals go elevate goof i had as dope as it gets punches but i didnt try so o well...atleast i merked this fag...watch if he gets a vote hes a d/r faggot...uppin for votes..!

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

lol you took this easily dont know why you bothered battlin him

punches i give to x clusive your punches hit harder...they werent tthat good but they hit harder atleast

flow: i gave to exclusive his flow hit way harder... ceed dont know what the fuck that was sapost to be but it wasnt no rap LOL....you need to elevate fam u'll get there soon enufff..........

vocab: xclusive got that aswwel.....both werent that good didnt see too many big words....but big enuff to get vocab....xlcusive get this

overal: X

return da fav

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155760

^man dont worry im dop with vocab one of the best on this site probably 2nd best with it but as i said i didnt try when i try ill have dope punches and wordplay and slick vocab...and i shouldent of battled this Mof he called me out tho...

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

X - good spit man, not your best.. but you really didnt need much.

Best Line - Ceed what a fucked name what you think your so tough…
You cant take on a computer nerd, isn’t that already enough?…

Worst Line - You pm’ed me for a battle fuck your gay stop baggin on me…
Im gonna lay it fast break your neck and put you in plastic-surgery…

Ceed - whack.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - Offensive or inoffenceive, relentless,how, could you think id b the one you bend wit (beef) delt wit light u up quiker wit' fuel and lepsip,//
on a richter scale i wud add up to be a 10,
Me is like the devil himself, never rebel but i wud kill you kwiker than any1 you wud neva tell, U wud neva regain ur strength even if even if you were a RENAGADE,blow u up wit a grenade,still on a raid, to bail out but cant make a move or cant even move on open space//
You a liar on probation, evryrhing wantz me to punch your face in, me a newb, KILL you like you aint no professional,
ill stand alone shoot you and blow u as an individual,
NO XCLUSIVE here its all ova bullets gone noe its the death RITUAL,//

OVERALL - One sided battle, Ceed your shit made no sence and your flow was way off. X you had some good punches in there and your flow was on.

Vote - X

RETURN THE FAV
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Voted For: ...Xclusive...

aight
X got this....
hands down.....
much more complex verse, nice personals n punches...
structure was readable, flow n bars connected, nice all round drop................

Co-ex or whatever yo' name be, ya verse was aight, nice vocab, few lines we're more fillers than uns tho, not as many personals, ovverrall ya verse was decent, but didnt come up as strong as X, so my vote goes too X, sorry mayn
no hate
an both yall return the favor
ya hear?
aight aight
PEACE!

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

xclusive took this better punches better everything he took this without even trying haha....

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whata bitch....im gonna merk him anyway...........

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

Ok Xclusive Gots this one easy....Xceed did aight for a newby...Xclusive had more Wit and Punches..and tht line Xceed about blow u as an individual sounded like u wanted to Give hi m Bj.lol.....but Xclusives made more sense and better wordplay
Structure/Exclusive
Wit/Exclusive
Punches/Ex
Vocab/Ex
Metas/only 1 meta-Ex
Vote/Xclusive....No hate Return the favour pz...

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

Ok Xclusive got this one easy....Xceeds structure was all over the place while Xclusive had a good flow and structure....Better vocab bit basic but better than Xceeds...
Flow/Exclusive
Structure/Exclusive
Vocab/Exclusive
Wordplay/Exclusive
Yall need to elevate a bit more
Vote/Exlusive...No hate return the favour....