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3rd-Shift vs Ice Pick
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14 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting He been ducking for a while, and never answered back to my open mics.... So here ya go we finally goin at it.... Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 10-21-04 at 03:23 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
3rd-Shift has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 10:23 AM.
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duckin???????
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Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 08:33 PM.
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ya flow's just forced words verbally constipated
train of thought derailed demonstratin ya lack of mental concentration ya mind is runnin on fumes battlin naive plus you participatin in homom acts lubricatin niggaz dicks for MINIMAL COMPENSATION thats a lose lose situation but yu yakk outta ya ass 2get a victory gainst me thats bound to fall like a crackhead dancin wit two left feet ill make ya kids bastards to be, watch me murder this man ya structures' outgrownin ya words like a midget wit shaq's pituatary gland yu battlin 3rd wit 3 losses in a row an the 4th is next no tums or pepcid AC can cease the heat that i bring to ya chest you manifest a bitchmade beantown pussy no more no less my flow castrates ya so u apply tampons to stop the bleedin in excess God Like??? Pick you come off more like God's Dike inhalin dick residue in exchangin ya crimson sins snow white closer: somebody should confinskate ya mic an hand u a dick caz ya rhymes is IMPOTENT cant produce punches that actually hit... |
3rd shift fuck He's Shook, Sweating Me,, Relax, He Might Start Bleeding From His Hands-And-His-Feet
This Man's-is-Weak,,Ice rips his Arms out his Sockets,, Just to start "Expanding-his-Reach I'm Raw-For-Free--He's Over-Priced, Over-Cooked And Definitly Gassed My Words Inspire,, But His Threads Over-Hyped,, Over-Looked--Then Definitly Trashed! If You put a “bullet hole” threw “My Heavyweight belt” you still couldn’t get a “title Shot tha closest u came to wordplay is when you were 8 foolin' wit A-B-C-blocks in a battle wit Ice? I suggest you stand-guard, cuz tha only way you'll beat me is if u gimme a hand-job You 20-18 wack ass fuck and you bein ill at open mics and poetrys a damn fraud i'll White those Wordz out..don't worry ya' SECRET is Safe-wit-us i DISLIKE YO' DIGESTIVE ORGANS..Translation.. i Hate-ya-GUTZ Ya Lines,,, Like HAND ME DOWNS,,, Somebody has Used it Before kid I cuaght and avoided the punch and tackle like i was peter warrick Your lyrics are soft, and what adds to that is that they're published in paper-back Can't catch Ice when his rocket-boosts, by the way, Dr.-Suess wants his papers-back fuck forgot about this well here it is unedited and raw Dont get it dont vote simple as dat |
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This was feedback posted for 3rd-Shift
cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here! but i fink ice pick wins
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Voted For: Ice Pick
3rd-Shift ya flow's just forced words verbally constipated train of thought derailed demonstratin ya lack of mental concentration nice opener ya mind is runnin on fumes battlin naive plus you participatin in homom acts lubricatin niggaz dicks for MINIMAL COMPENSATION decent thats a lose lose situation but yu yakk outta ya ass 2get a victory gainst me thats bound to fall like a crackhead dancin wit two left feet kinda..no & yes..but no here…(to me tho) ill make ya kids bastards to be, watch me murder this man ya structures' outgrownin ya words like a midget wit shaq's pituatary gland decent punch hea yu battlin 3rd wit 3 losses in a row an the 4th is next no tums or pepcid AC can cease the heat that i bring to ya chest no hea… you manifest a bitchmade beantown pussy no more no less my flow castrates ya so u apply tampons to stop the bleedin in excess nice punch hea God Like??? Pick you come off more like God's Dike inhalin dick residue in exchangin ya crimson sins snow white an ‘okay’ closer Ice Pick 3rd shift fuck He's Shook, Sweating Me,, Relax, He Might Start Bleeding From His Hands-And-His-Feet This Man's-is-Weak,,Ice rips his Arms out his Sockets,, Just to start "Expanding-his-Reach nice opener I'm Raw-For-Free--He's Over-Priced, Over-Cooked And Definitly Gassed My Words Inspire,, But His Threads Over-Hyped,, Over-Looked--Then Definitly Trashed! lol…nice shit hea If You put a “bullet hole” threw “My Heavyweight belt” you still couldn’t get a “title Shot tha closest u came to wordplay is when you were 8 foolin' wit A-B-C-blocks haha…nice again in a battle wit Ice? I suggest you stand-guard, cuz tha only way you'll beat me is if u gimme a hand-job You 20-18 wack ass fuck and you bein ill at open mics and poetrys a damn fraud decent i'll White those Wordz out..don't worry ya' SECRET is Safe-wit-us i DISLIKE YO' DIGESTIVE ORGANS..Translation.. i Hate-ya-GUTZ y tha caps?...but decent hea Ya Lines,,, Like HAND ME DOWNS,,, Somebody has Used it Before kid I cuaght and avoided the punch and tackle like i was peter warrick *check ur spellin*…decent Your lyrics are soft, and what adds to that is that they're published in paper-back Can't catch Ice when his rocket-boosts, by the way, Dr.-Suess wants his papers-back [b]nice closer Overall my vote goes to Ice Pick..cuz he had slight harder punches than 3rd-Shift…his punches landed… |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Tight Shiiit Ice Pick: Punches - Hit Like A Muh Fucka... If This Was A Boxin Match I Believe This Would Be A K.O.... Felt The Title Shot One.. Dope Shit 9.5/10 Word Play - Pretty Decent I Guess To Say The Least... 6.5/10 Vocab - Ive Seen Better Vocab From You So This Is A Dissapointment From You 6.5/10 Personals - Decent But Wasnt Really There 6.5/10 Multis - Meh 6/10 Total: 35/50 Punches Knocked Him Tha Fuck Out.. 3rd Shift: Punches: Personally I Believe That You Lacked This.. Didnt Connect Very Well 6/10 Word Play: Basic Shiit I Guess Nuthin Exciting 6/10 Vocab: Better, Much Better Than Ice's I Guess 7/10 Personals: Bah 5.5/10 Multis: Pretty Good To Say The Least 7.5/10 Total: 32/50 Your Multis Were The Only Thing I Can Atleast Congratulate You On.. Close Battle But Ice Takes This 35 - 32. Not A Great Difference But I Believe He Took This.. No Hate... No D/R.. Good Luck To The Both Of Yall :thumbup: |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
i voted for ice pick cause he came hard all his punches hit he had good wordplay nice metas and rhyming was ill best line-If You put a “bullet hole” threw “My Heavyweight belt” you still couldn’t get a “title Shot tha closest u came to wordplay is when you were 8 foolin' wit A-B-C-blocks 3rd-had aight wordplay and rhyming his punches didnt hit as hard as ices did but he came weaker then ice best line-yu battlin 3rd wit 3 losses in a row an the 4th is next no tums or pepcid AC can cease the heat that i bring to ya chest |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
this was an ok battle... but ice came way harder i thought hitting bar after bar... 3rd shift fuck He's Shook, Sweating Me,, Relax, He Might Start Bleeding From His Hands-And-His-Feet This Man's-is-Weak,,Ice rips his Arms out his Sockets,, Just to start "Expanding-his-Reach nice opener straight at him.... i'll White those Wordz out..don't worry ya' SECRET is Safe-wit-us i DISLIKE YO' DIGESTIVE ORGANS..Translation.. i Hate-ya-GUTZ cool flip on the 2ed line again straight at him raw... Ya Lines,,, Like HAND ME DOWNS,,, Somebody has Used it Before kid I cuaght and avoided the punch and tackle like i was peter warrick Your lyrics are soft, and what adds to that is that they're published in paper-back Can't catch Ice when his rocket-boosts, by the way, Dr.-Suess wants his papers-back ha nice ending good punch again raw N straight at him good drop... 9.0 3ed u was aight but u aint come straight at him raw N flow was good vocab was decent but wasnt creative enough with it N thought need it to come harder... you manifest a bitchmade beantown pussy no more no less my flow castrates ya so u apply tampons to stop the bleedin in excess that was nice u came at him raw... ill make ya kids bastards to be, watch me murder this man ya structures' outgrownin ya words like a midget wit shaq's pituatary gland that was preety decent but could of came harder... somebody should confinskate ya mic an hand u a dick caz ya rhymes is IMPOTENT cant produce punches that actually hit... i aint think this was a good ending but ok but not suited for a ending sorry but decent verse.... 7.3 vote ice |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
3rd shift: hmm bad stucture...but it flowed...bad punches didnt realy coem to ahrd in this one....no real hard hitting vocabulary but you had dope vocabulary it came hard but nothing new...try working on punches you'll win then.... IcePick: k steched verse......good punches tho came hard hitting...good wordplay in there...some real hot lines no real inspiring vocabulary tho....but as i said streched lines bad stucture and flow...but you win this with ease... return favour here: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157938 |
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