..:Logistic:.. vs MERCenary
 

Battle Rules:

10-15 linez
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

15 minutes to check in.
3 hourz to drop.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-18-04 at 07:21 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

..:Logistic:.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 06:51 PM.

MERCenary has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-04 06:54 PM.

logistic got no real skillz and no god damn logicz/
on this site makin some stupid ass topics/
fuck off hoe you wont win cuz no one can touch this/
your fingerz and head aikin like hell cuz you losin so much/
you have no losses nut hell after this you'll have such/
standin up to me kid i gotta admit you got some gutz/
you fucked up so much prolly 18 mutha fuckin cutz/
fuck off you suck admit it fuck you logistic/
go away from us real rapperz get off this shit/
you wont get clit mutha fucka get off and stat off my dick/
shit bitch you a$$ better spit wit dis/
you cant diss me cuz you suck like ludacriss/
my punches are aahrd jus like my fists/
after this mutha fucka you gonna be on my merked list/
fuck off and stay off we all kno your skillz dont exist/

Interigation marks above your head, actin' like your ass is all puzzled,
You know My Grandma beat you last week,I took a peak, and you got guzzled.
You ain't flowin' You sound like a fat boy with asma, a fat bitch that tagz ya',
Run a scar down ya' back, then take a mic and stab ya, have my lil bro grab ya'.
Crash you like Sept. 11th, ya' dick ain't gonna get rode?,your wins aint gonna become 7,
Ya can ask the devil any time straight headin, he'll tell ya' that I just merked god up in heaven.
Ya' aint suprised ya just got merked, by a scientist at work,not alot to comprehend,
Well, here it comes again, guess 0 (<<Wins) is your lucky number friend, cuz for you this is the end!
I'v been huntin for a pussy like you "MERCenary", I been tracking you down like a fuckin Canary! (Bird)
Go to a thesaurus for help, all's it says is Fuck you! It dont need you, Your rhymes can't carry.
Well, I'll sum this up with your "WAISTE MY TIME" cost, your ass is defeated, your ass got bossed,
The next paragraph will explain how much you apreciate my rhymes and how your ass just lost!!!!

... I guess its alright? ... I dont know?... ...
Peace out!!!!!!!!!!

damn wordplay fuck i need more of that shit. i kno you might win this.

Interigation marks above your head, actin' like your ass is all puzzled,
You know My Grandma beat you last week,I took a peak, and you got guzzled.
You ain't flowin' You sound like a fat boy with asma, a fat bitch that tagz ya',
Run a scar down ya' back, then take a mic and stab ya, have my lil bro grab ya'.
Crash you like Sept. 11th, ya' dick ain't gonna get rode?,your wins aint gonna become 7,
Ya can ask the devil any time straight headin, he'll tell ya' that I just merked god up in heaven.
Ya' aint suprised ya just got merked, by a scientist at work,not alot to comprehend,
Well, here it comes again, guess 0 (<<Wins) is your lucky number friend, cuz for you this is the end!
I'v been huntin for a pussy like you "MERCenary", I been tracking you down like a fuckin Canary! (Bird)
Go to a thesaurus for help, all's it says is Fuck you! It dont need you, Your rhymes can't carry.
Well, I'll sum this up with your "WAISTE MY TIME" cost, your ass is defeated, your ass got bossed,
The next paragraph will explain how much you apreciate my rhymes and how your ass just lost!!!!

Sry ... I zsscrweed that one bar up ... sry... here it is not scrwed up....^^

Interigation marks above your head, actin' like your ass is all puzzled,
You know My Grandma beat you last week,I took a peak, and you got guzzled.

You ain't flowin' You sound like a fat boy with asma, a fat bitch that tagz ya',
Run a scar down ya' back, then take a mic and stab ya, have my lil bro grab ya'.

Crash you like Sept. 11th, ya' dick ain't gonna get rode?,your wins aint gonna become 7,
Ya can ask the devil any time straight headin, he'll tell ya' that I just merked god up in heaven.

Ya' aint suprised ya just got merked, by a scientist at work,not alot to comprehend,
Well, here it comes again, guess 0 (<<Wins) is your lucky number friend, cuz for you this is the end!

I'v been huntin for a pussy like you "MERCenary", I been tracking you down like a fuckin Canary! (Bird)
Go to a thesaurus for help, all's it says is Fuck you! It dont need you, Your rhymes can't carry.

Well, I'll sum this up with your "WAISTE MY TIME" cost, your ass is defeated, your ass got bossed,
The next paragraph will explain how much you apreciate my rhymes and how your ass just lost!!!!

DAMN!!! There it is ... if that isnt right then fuck it... itwont go on the i want i to...SHIT!! THIS IS MY VERSE!!

hehe your verse was good any wayz structure wont matter.

Damn!!!!! Welll lets get some votes on this shit...The one bar in my verse is FUCKED UP!!! ... SORRY!

Yeah I guess... i liked your verse it was pretty coool.... ...thanx for the feed back dude... Well lets get votes on this..

yeah votes but no hard feelings i wanted to bee as hard as i can.

Yeah..... its alright.... i dont take no affense through battling... its alright... We are just elevatin... Ya know..

yeah Imindz rule has to be in here no votez damn. people dont sleep on this hurry and vote.

Voted For: ..:Logistic:..

yeah its all good u got da job done...overall dis battle was weak and dissapointing.....but logistic gets my vote because of his creativity and his punches....mercenary you had to much self glory and saying fuck you fuck off all da time...
vote=logistic for creativity and better punches

yo return da favor on my votes both of yall...da link is below....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d=1#post1673296
its a topical battle and its my first one so just drop a vote on dat link honestly

Voted For: ..:Logistic:..

just checkin polls might as weel give feedback too

first you both need to elevate some

mercenary-you need to work on flow your structures aight ...need harder punches and personals...get multi's it helps flow and get some vocab and wordplay....

logistic-aight fix up your structure man your lines are too stretched noone likes to see that..your personals were weak and so were your punches...okay flow.work on better vocab and wordplay too aight man no hate just feedback

return the favor in my sig on an open mic or vote in a battle...peace~1

Will do ..... thanx for the feed back ....... Uppin for votes!!!!~~~~~~

Uppin for votes on this mutha fucka!! ... lol ha ha peace out....~

uppin this mutha fuckin battle.

Voted For: MERCenary

merc took this....beta structure flow and much beta punches, nice verse here liked it dawg...pretty one sided...

peace

can ya hit this battle honestly...thanx
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...675177&posted=1

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Voted For: ..:Logistic:..

Vote go to Logistic
aiight he came harder and he had a better vocab both structures was cool yall did ya hardest but Logistic got my vote because he came harder then Mercanary and flow was better good PL nice flow

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Voted For: ..:Logistic:..

you won by a hair!!!!! That was a toughy but it just came down to a couple lines I thought he was going to beat you but you proved a worthy competetor

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Uppin for votes.... leave some actual feedback...... and actually read the verses....

Peace~~~~~~

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Voted For: ..:Logistic:..

Okay Weak battle..But Logistic got this
Logistic had a wack structure & flow ..But he had more metas and better Vocab & wordplay..Still weak

MERCenary-Weak verse very basic but u had the better Flow and Structure ...Logistic beat ya wit his Vocab & wordplay..Keep elevatin No hate
V/Logistic...........Return the Vote plz
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156212

Voted For: ..:Logistic:..

alright logistic took this easily.....merc your shit was just wayy too basic fam you need to extend your lines....and spit betta punches...and you had no similies...you gotta use your brain..if shit dont pop up then hip hop wasnt meant for you nigga....
Logistic you need to elevate too...your lines are stretched..and you have good vocab for a 12 year old....ur punches need to be improved alot too....but overall its pertty decent shit nigga.......

return da fav and drop a vote on dis battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=156434

Voted For: ..:Logistic:..

logistic got this
much more complex verse on the whole...
decent personals....
nice punches an structure an flow
but uhhh, the finisher could have been tighter, but still
hands down
much more complex emcee an it showed...

merc, ya flow was.....blah
predictable
not the strongets punches
personals were..................okay, verse could have been much better an it needed to be
no hate

return the fave in my sig
peace