oreo vs Socrates
 

Battle Rules:

14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

LMFAO! you actually think you beat me, its gotten really annoying. pay close attention to the last rule up there since you have a hard time following it. Dont duck bitch! :spit:

Minimum posts to vote: 450

Check in by: 10-22-04 at 01:54 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Oreo dq'ed for PMing for votes:

Quote:

Originally Posted by oreo check my battle between me ands socrates

Socrates has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 01:55 AM.

oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 01:11 PM.

aqaqight but this time come better, man, and i thought you werent battleing no more? but im get at you im at school rite now takig a test so when im at home your done for

Nope. dont tell me how to come kid. im gunna rip you a new asshole. blah im tired of you speaking my fuckin name. so its gunna end now.

fuck your nsem, your new nam,e gonna be oreos bitch,
lets up the stakes, who ever wins get to own the other for life?

fuck your nsem, your new name gonna be oreos bitch, :laugh2:
lets up the stakes, who ever wins get to own the other for life? :thumbup:

you left this site and came bak cuz i crushed your dream,
how can a man stiil be a pussy without a hysterectimine?
you lost royaly in the battle when your alais named strobe,
couldnt even up your game if you used an X-box as a probe,
you and empire got somthin in common, hate threads man,
this aint even web beef you this is more internet spam,
dont battle no more, nostradomas made you a freeposter,
bars coudnt even be hot if they were popped out a toaster,
this oreo is unedible, if you get a vote then you got a taste,
you caint come back this rap shit and get repsect like ma$e,
really a computer nerd that wants to make it as a rapper,
told me to kiss your black ass but your really a cracker,
screaming yeah, cuz you got this shit bad mother fucka,
remind me again and youll feel the lyrical burn like usher,

i hate you for real man, you a hoe on the streets i bet

you left this site and came bak cuz i crushed your dream,
how can a man stiil be a pussy without a hysterectimine?
you lost royaly in the battle when your alais named strobe,
couldnt even up your game if you used an X-box as a probe,
you and empire got somthin in common, hate threads man,
this aint even web beef you this is more internet spam,
dont battle no more, nostradomas made you a freeposter,
bars coudnt even be hot if they were popped out a toaster,
this oreo is unedible, if you get a vote then you got a taste,
you caint come back this rap shit and get repsect like ma$e,
really a computer nerd that wants to make it as a rapper,
told me to kiss your black ass but your really a cracker,
screaming yeah, cuz you got this shit bad mother fucka,
remind me again and youll feel the lyrical burn like usher,

man your verse should have been done alreadym you setted up this battle without my knowledge, your a coney

*im dont mean to feed but this dumbass posted his verse where i can see it so i guess he wants me to*

Im tired of this fuck up, god dammit its makin me mad
So pathetic he has to sig the only vote hes ever had
Blah actually i only battled cuz i have nothing to do
your records 5-5, thats zero and its still more than you
Peepin your verse and all i can say is fuck commas kid
Your shit is one run-on sentence of how whack you is
Im dunkin oreo, whether its in milk, soda or coffee
Didnt make sense cuz I think this poor fuck will try to rob me
oreo thinks hes better? seriously something aint right
only chants he has is the ones boo'ing him off the mic
reck careers for biting newbs, what makes you different foo?
not that we dont like you, we just hate loathe and despise you
Youve been roasted with your pathetic attempts to cook me
Youre the reason people no longer say "One Smart Cookie"

Blah! Vote Fukkas :thumbup:

blah humbug i agree to terms. uppin this shibble for votes.

upppin this shit
socrates your a coney man.........

This was feedback posted for oreo
 

elevated again you got good stucuture dont fuck that up...but you still need work on punches you kinda had one tho...

you lost royaly in the battle when your alais named strobe,
couldnt even up your game if you used an X-box as a probe
^^that was wack but its a punch..

but Phantom took this he had way better everything sry but he didnt hae vocab but he had real punche splus he didnt try i dotn think eather ehs better then this to...

upppin yall, vote not feed.............................

upppin............................................ ....................

upppin............................................ ....................

Man This Getting More Ups Than Votes,
Socrate You Set The Bar Two High For Votesm Your Friends Wont Even Come And Vote

upin.............................................. ........ :spit:

Voted For: Socrates

just checkin shit out and uppin

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

oops sorry have this deleted i was just uppin my bad

thanks for uppin homie............................................. ..

uppin............................................. ........

This was feedback posted for oreo
 

So c r a tes won but not by far . . Infact that verse was half assesd.

This was feedback posted for oreo
 

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oh my god wat the fuck no one votin and socrates dont even try and up this shit

Voted For: Socrates

Im tired of this fuck up, god dammit its makin me mad
So pathetic he has to sig the only vote hes ever had
almost
Blah actually i only battled cuz i have nothing to do
your records 5-5, thats zero and its still more than you
word your shit better. this line also makes no sense the way its worded, the setup is terrible.
Peepin your verse and all i can say is fuck commas kid
Your shit is one run-on sentence of how whack you is
could have been decent, wording kinda killed it.
Im dunkin oreo, whether its in milk, soda or coffee
Didnt make sense cuz I think this poor fuck will try to rob me
wtf? no.
oreo thinks hes better? seriously something aint right
only chants he has is the ones boo'ing him off the mic
kinda played, but at least its wordplay. flipped decently, setup even worded decently
reck careers for biting newbs, what makes you different foo?
not that we dont like you, we just hate loathe and despise you
terrible filler, didn't even flow
Youve been roasted with your pathetic attempts to cook me
Youre the reason people no longer say "One Smart Cookie"
not bad nameplay

Vote: socrates.

you still need to get a lot better.

wtf i hate this voting system. ill break this down again, because it got lost:

you left this site and came bak cuz i crushed your dream,
how can a man stiil be a pussy without a hysterectimine?
don't use words you don't understand. hysteractamy is removing some of the uterus. it means less pussy, not more pussy. your line makes no sense
you lost royaly in the battle when your alais named strobe,
couldnt even up your game if you used an X-box as a probe,
no
you and empire got somthin in common, hate threads man,
this aint even web beef you this is more internet spam,
blah, horrible filler with no flow
dont battle no more, nostradomas made you a freeposter,
bars coudnt even be hot if they were popped out a toaster,
horrible meta, no wordplay, two lines have no relevence to each other
this oreo is unedible, if you get a vote then you got a taste,
you caint come back this rap shit and get repsect like ma$e,
no
really a computer nerd that wants to make it as a rapper,
told me to kiss your black ass but your really a cracker,
i dont think he is
screaming yeah, cuz you got this shit bad mother fucka,
remind me again and youll feel the lyrical burn like usher,
played

well there you have it.

work on setups and punches having to do with each other, work on wordplay thats not so stupid, work on better metas.

socrats is white yo i saw his pic as his alias..........................

uppin this shit..........................................

This was feedback posted for oreo
 

yo oreo holla at me on aim: MO MURDA BKI ............

This was feedback posted for Socrates
 

lol...this is a joke-battle hea mayn..
i dont feel like voting but my vote would go
to Soc

Pz.

This was feedback posted for oreo
 

checking them polls,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,

uppin and leave a vote yall...............................

Voted For: Socrates

Ok.....this was pretty obvious to me. Soc came a little weak in this one but he still had a few good punches mixed in there while Oreo just plain sucked. His shit didn't even make sense half of the time......anyway

Vote - Socrates

Vote on my battle bitches :thumbup:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157553

vote gets dqued............................................