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big GZ vs Raw Material

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UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-19-04 at 04:24 AM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

big GZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 03:55 AM.

Raw Material has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 04:02 AM.

This is where shit just gets ugly, big mistake homie, Shogun is fuckin' back, And Shogun is the Master. SHO 'NUFF lil' nigga.

Aight, at least you showed nuts, called me out, but I think uz a bit overzealous,
What can really be said about U that your record don't already tell us?
It's apparent you were never given a blessing or a prayer from the hip-hop pastor.
And this ain't a second-rate Japanese movie where the student becomes the master.
In hip-hop 101, you sat by yourself in the corner wit the hat that read "dunce",
Sendin' out the search party again? Didn't I send you runnin' for the hills once?
So don't expect me to act suprised right after history repeats itself,
You mcz like books, I read through your stories, get bored, & put you back on the shelf.
I upset your stomach, like U said, after me your career went down the crapper,
Remind me of presents gettin' torn open on Christmas, findin' out itz hard to be a rapper.

The only two posts you will need to understand the verse are right here.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=122307

&

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...991&postcount=1

Good luck homie, no hate, just business.

-CJ-

Come on nigga, don't fuckin' no show like you did last time, especially not when you call ME out. Handle that shit homie.

-CJ-

you "breathe like you rap"...guess what, u can hold the "mints"
and get "rubbed the wrong way" til' you "break like deodorant"
u ain't "tryna see me"...so go ahead and "take the glasses off"
its easy...i'll eat u wit no problem like apple sauce
im "taking u to school"...u don't even know "what class it is"
"people sleeping on your verse"...just like new "matresses"
Talib's an underground mc...u an mc I put underground
"i'm kool-aid" everybody gets a taste...and u watered down
in gym class u were the fat kid always picked last
nuthin's changed...you'll get "whipped fast like whiplash"
ya mom was an ugly groupie...and it wuz one night of fun
thats why u gon' always be "Talib's Illegitimate Son"

don't lie to these people...you set up the battle and didn't even let me know if u were going to battle

wow son, I seen you come madd harder than that, I guess you just think Ima second-tier nigga on here. Aight, whateva kidd, that's the love I get.................

Uppin' this shit niggaz.

-CJ-

uppin this shit...why don't people vote on battles anymore??? anyone who votes on this battle will get an honest, explained vote in return.

Uppin'.....................dis.................... .......shit....................................... ...............

Niggaz............................................ ............

.................................................. ..-cj-...........................................

be nice if anyone would vote on this shit at all. anyone, for anyone, just vote bitches.

-CJ-

lets get some votes...it has been over 2 weeks and no one has cast a single vote...what the fuck!

A vote or two would be alright, you fuckerz.

-CJ-

This was feedback posted for big GZ

yo checkin this battle out.............................

Mufukin' vote you faggot ass bitch cum-guzzlin' flea infested homosexual transvestitic blackguards.

-CJ-

Vote.............................At least one vote would be nice, this shit been open for like 3 weeks now.

-CJ-

Voted For: Raw Material

Aight, at least you showed nuts, called me out, but I think uz a bit overzealous,
What can really be said about U that your record don't already tell us?

that was the only good line in the battle, this battle sucked ass, and im not sure why big GZ keeps calling himself talib could have been bitten. anyways based on punches neither were good but countreejay just sounded a bit better.

Voted For: Raw Material

Homie you was nice keep i tup your flow is hot but yall was a good match

Voted For: Raw Material

Checking The Polls On This Old Ass Shit...............................

This was feedback posted for Raw Material

that a fuckin' boy crhymie!!!

your feelin' the whole japanese warlord thing eh, i feel you bruh. that shits hard. from one shogun to the other...C.S. STAND THE FUCK UP!!! SINDICATE CITY.......WHAT!?!?

...the super...

Voted For: Raw Material

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to GZ flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, country had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle

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Voted For: Raw Material

Well Big ....you came very basic but im not one to talk i only have one more win than what i lost so lol ..............

this is how i break it down

Punchez..RM
Personals..RM
Multi's..RM
Metas..RM
Vocab..RM
Sturcture...GZ

So there You Have it folks i hope i helped in a good way ...........now RTF in my Battle against Hang-man Please
Thank you you are so kind

Voted For: Raw Material

Aight, at least you showed nuts, called me out, but I think uz a bit overzealous,
What can really be said about U that your record don't already tell us?
nice
It's apparent you were never given a blessing or a prayer from the hip-hop pastor.
And this ain't a second-rate Japanese movie where the student becomes the master.
decent here
In hip-hop 101, you sat by yourself in the corner wit the hat that read "dunce",
Sendin' out the search party again? Didn't I send you runnin' for the hills once?
decent
So don't expect me to act suprised right after history repeats itself,
You mcz like books, I read through your stories, get bored, & put you back on the shelf.
nice punch
I upset your stomach, like U said, after me your career went down the crapper,
Remind me of presents gettin' torn open on Christmas, findin' out itz hard to be a rapper.
nice closer

you "breathe like you rap"...guess what, u can hold the "mints"
and get "rubbed the wrong way" til' you "break like deodorant"
decent
u ain't "tryna see me"...so go ahead and "take the glasses off"
its easy...i'll eat u wit no problem like apple sauce
no…
im "taking u to school"...u don't even know "what class it is"
"people sleeping on your verse"...just like new "matresses"
pretty decent here
Talib's an underground mc...u an mc I put underground
"i'm kool-aid" everybody gets a taste...and u watered down
no…
in gym class u were the fat kid always picked last
nuthin's changed...you'll get "whipped fast like whiplash"
okay
ya mom was an ugly groupie...and it wuz one night of fun
thats why u gon' always be "Talib's Illegitimate Son"
no…

Overall CJ took this one…punches were harder
and they landed…but overall CJ came harder tho