intensify effect vs Bizzey
 

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Old / expired battle close - win

Bizzey has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 10:44 AM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 11:17 AM.

CHOKES-n-MAIMS these HOs-n-LAMES wit' POLES-n-CHAINS
We'll BLOW-YA'-BRAINS into SMOKE-REMAINS and you WON'T-COPE wit' da' EXPLOSION-PAINS/
NOVICANE WON'T CONTROL-DA'-PAIN that you'll GAIN from BROKEN-FRAMES
We WON'T REFRAIN from EXPOSIN' DAMES when blood DRAINS from ya' OPEN-VEINS/
Our EARTH-SHATTERIN'-WORDS HURT-HERDS of SCATTERIN'-HERBS
No MATTER-DA-VERBS we CONVERGE we're still DAMAGIN'-NERVES/
UNTALENTED-PERVS don't DESERVE BATTLES; You'll get disMANTLED-n-SERVED
You AMATUER-NERDZ drop more bullsh*t than Rodeo's ANIMAL-TERDS!/
intensify effect you aint ENTIRELY TIGHT, INSPIRED-or-NICE
You should be FIRED-4-LIFE and then go through RETIREMENT-TWICE!/
You LIARS-CAN-BITE like IRON-MIKE and still EXPIRE-IN-FIGHTS
Callin' me "Wigga" when I'm Black & in LIFE you're WHITER-THAN-RICE/ (not racist)
MY-RHYMIN'-DEVICE is a TOLD-MIC; You're our fans NEEDIN'-GIMMICKS-and-GAME
We're FROZEN FLAMES; you're intensify; you EVEN-MIMMICKED-DA'-NAME?!/
CRITICS-CAN-BLAME weak crew TEXTS on PESTS like "intensify effect "
BUTTERS-HIS-ASS-WHEN-ASKIN'-MEN for ASS-FUCKIN'-&-PASSION/
SUCKIN'-AT-RANDOM while "effect" is RUBBING-A-MAG-NUM
CUMMIN'-ON-HIS-DAD'S-TOUNGUE FOR FUN & lettin' his mom HAVE-SUM'/
DAMN-SON! "HIP HOP HUNNI'S" ya' only hope on dis' BATTLE-SITE
So ya' MIGHT as well be safe-n-strap on your dick-RIDING'-SADDLE-TIGHT! (aiight!)

something real quick no need to try for u sicne u'r a noob....

yo,
thought Jay-z's talk bout now-a-later raps would have srapped this...
fag shit, cuase the only thing on bizzy dick is his hand grip.. *ha*
Im Locally Known By others ' Your just know by your Mother...
plus i've seen harder hit from ya sister attacking ya brother,...
dog, i'll be place'in grenades in ya sheet just to blow ya cover.... so go-ahed N stunt...
cuz bizzy cant afford a "blow to the chest" like smokers with-out money for "blunts"...
shit,... i'll Put Spider Venom In your Liver ' Then Deny ya
Bathroom Privelages...
cuz ya flow weaker then popey fighting with-out hes spinage...
u want unlimted bars, but i'll give u hot limited scars....
cuz the hawk i'll tight'en ya movement, like shaq in a compact car....
u gonna come-back hard? u nasty fuck... i dont do fags...
thought u was gonna win? thats more confussing then a blood in a royal blue-flag..... U BITCH NIGGA!!!

BANG-BANG-EARLY.....

thats all i went for now....
but if he has alot more then that i will match hes bars to even things out....

ooo-shit...

i slept on u'r skill's there buddy....
i should of drop'ed alot harder then that... nice verse.....

after the winner is annonce i want a round 2......
i'll drop my heat then but dont get me confused im no lame.....

Voted For: intensify effect

intensify gets my vote......just beta, wasn't great but like ya sed u didnt really need to come hard, took this in every aspect.....

bizzey look at some vet battles n peep the structure and try to convert cos ya flow suffered badly cause of ya structure....keep elevatin dawg...

peace

will ya both hit my battle wiv B.I.Detained in my thread wiv an honest vote...

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oh n bizzey like the multi's but tone it down abit n concentrate on ya punches...

intensify u will av to come beta in future though...

peace

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Voted For: Bizzey

ok another dope battle imma break it down...

opener:bizzey
closure:bizzey
multies: bizzey
punches: intensify
flow:bizzey
Structure: intensify

ok dope battle yo both did yo thing but imma have to give it to bizzey his vocabulary was alot more complexed that intensifies and the multies were unbelievable for a newbie

great battle yo...

no hate return the favour links in the sig...

or me vs. mattee1

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Voted For: intensify effect

bizzy, you wouldnt happen to be wish would you?
ya rhyme scheme is exactly like his, decent multies an personals, but fucked up structure...
few lines were strecthed too...
overrall, u came a lil weak cause multies dont win u battles, it just improves your flow...

effect, ya came strong, hot ass puns...
highlight of the battle was......
u gonna come-back hard? u nasty fuck... i dont do fags...
thought u was gonna win? thats more confussing then a blood in a royal blue-flag.....
^^^
that finisher killed it....

effect came much stronger an was the more complex emcee
no hate to either
ya gave it all u could
but effect came strong

return the fave in my sig yall
peace

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Damn some good multi's here man keep that shit up

Voted For: intensify effect

nice battle...ie took it with his punches though...

bizzey: nice multies and shit...but i saw no punches in dat verse...good structure...good flow...just come harder and throw punches

ie: betta punches...had good multies...betta battle verse...

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This was feedback posted for Bizzey
 

Dam nice multies i cant vote tho right now cuz i gotta go ... but nice shit dawg

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