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chedda boi 10-19-04 11:21 AM

Bizzey vs Kwell
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-19-04 at 05:21 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

System 10-19-04 11:22 AM

Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 11:22 AM.

System 10-19-04 11:35 AM

Bizzey has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 11:35 AM.

chedda boi 10-19-04 11:39 AM

<opener>

(ADMIT IT); You like a HEATHEN LEGION givin' PERVERTED-VERSIONS-OF-SERMONS
You switch official religions more than CONVERTED-PERSIANS-n-GERMANS/
NURSES-n-SURGEONS can't SAVE-YOU on da OPERATION-TABLE
Who do you PRAY-TO when I SLAY-YOU as I re-enact da' FABLE of KANE-n-ABLE?/
I'll STAPLE-these-unSTABLE-TRICKZ to a CRUCI-FIX and disABLE-this-STUPID-KLICK
Ya'll get STRANGLED wit' CABLES-n-MANGLED till' I see PUKE-n-SPIT/



<heaten up>
*~RIPPIN~THESE~NIGGAS~*
~FLEE~THE~NATION~ cuz the ~ERA~OF~WASTIN'~ is ~IN~OPERATION~ nobody can stop it not even the ~FEDERAL~BUREAU~OF~INVESTIGATION~ so ~HIT~THE~BATTLESTATION~
I was ~DESIGNED~4~TERMINATION~ by an ~INTELLIGENCE~OPERATION~ more powerful than the ~INTERNATIONAL~DEVELOPMENT~ORGANISATION~
I had ~DEDICATION~ to ending ~THE~REVALATION~ with ~ULTRAVIOLET~RADIATION~ and ~RACIAL~DISCRIMINATION~ only to be fucked up by ~PSYCHIC~COMMUNICATION~
~DECAPITATION~ and ~ANNIHILATION~ is wat i use to clear up the ~SITUATION~ wen im ~FACIN~ fake niggaz ~INVADIN~ this ~POPULATION~ wit no~INVITATION~OR~EXPLANATION~ lyk u who ~RHYMES~WIT~ILLUSTRATIONS~
~THIS~DEVASTATION~ gon lead to ur ~INNER~DETONATION~ which causes ~BRAIN~MUTILATION~ and makes u fall dead right ~BENEATH~THE~BASEMENT~

chedda boi 10-19-04 11:41 AM

verse are opener and closer for all yall dont know i heated up on the sencond verse

Terse. 10-19-04 11:48 AM

^ i hope u gon check in.....anywayz,

You bein shifty...so i'ma punch u so hard, u'll be left dizzy
merk u...cuz nobody look up to u, aint nobody wanna be Busy
rather be laid back...even tho it aint hard to fuck u up clown
like eyelids--u dont shut up, so u obviously u gotta be shut down
i buss rounds - of lyrical shots...bitch i'll put one in ya cap
i know u shook--u straight posted when i've got u under a-tack
i dont see nothin special about u, no creativity or stylish complexity
in my book, son....u only git one star--like u a Child of Destiny
u've got mild intensity, u bein told what to say, ya shit's all wired
go 'head n drool all ova my verse, thaz the only way ya spit's on fire
dont mean ta' self-glorify, but i'm jus an MC that u wont surpass
n face it...the only time u'd see a W is if somebody cloned yo ass

u better show...

Terse. 10-19-04 03:22 PM

uppin fo his verse...

Terse. 10-19-04 03:26 PM

^yo, my bad...sorta fucked up, my verse is in the wrong place, but w/e...jus tryin ta' git used to these RV frontlines....
(#2)

chedda boi 10-20-04 08:20 AM

uppin 4 votes/////////////////////////////////////

chedda boi 10-20-04 01:21 PM

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chedda boi 10-20-04 03:09 PM

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Terse. 10-20-04 05:52 PM

......uppin #3.....vote up........................

Terse. 10-20-04 11:16 PM

uppin #4..........drop some links n i'ma return the favor

chedda boi 10-21-04 08:31 AM

uppin 4 votesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Verbal Vision 10-21-04 03:52 PM

Voted For: Bizzey

Aight close battle but Bizzey gets it coz the Multi's killed Kwell-Bizz ya structure was wack but u had a better flow...Vocab was good so was wordplay....
Kwell-Pretty good verse had complexion but a few lines were stretched-U didnt hav as good vocab as Bizz but u did have a solid flow No hate Vote goes to Biz...
V/Bizzey No hate Return the Vote fam....

PayDay 10-21-04 05:38 PM

Voted For: Bizzey

da-da-da-da-da-damn...bizzey...u like multies huh? lol...anyways...this was a good one...bizzy took this with better punches, personals, and alot of conecting multies...you also had good vocab, but your structure was off...kwell...wad up mayn...your verse was tight, but he killed you with the creative punches and multies...if you hadnt self glorified as much you would have taken it...but since its a battle, u kno how it goes...no hate nah mean...so vote goes to Bizzey...it was just 2 notches better

Terse. 10-21-04 07:56 PM

uppin for some more honest votes....

ThirdDegree 10-21-04 08:43 PM

Voted For: Bizzey

Witness my Voting prowess

i dont see nothin special about u, no creativity or stylish complexity
in my book, son....u only git one star--like u a Child of Destiny
^^ Best line in the verse. Not bad, good strucutre, decent punches, a few were off the mark. Some played shit liek the spit fire line. FLow was aiight 6/10

The whole multi second part on bizzey was ill. I dunno why u changed your structure. Sumthin ain't feel right. Anyway yeah punches connect the FIrst part hled most of em. Good verse bad structure in second half.
7/10

Good battle keep goin ya'll

One

ghetto cripple 10-21-04 08:56 PM

Voted For: Kwell

ok kwell just came straight with disses and had good rhymes the one star line about destiny child was very creative. b came more for flow it seems not very hard disses, dont get me wrong he had some, maybe the german line if k is german......kwell pretty much said what im feeling in this line here
"i dont see nothin special about u, no creativity or stylish complexity "
b just has no core stable about his opponent.

chedda boi 10-22-04 08:07 AM

uppin4vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvoooooooooooooottttttttt ttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeesssss

chedda boi 10-25-04 12:29 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppin

chedda boi 10-26-04 12:10 PM

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

chedda boi 10-27-04 08:41 AM

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Terse. 10-27-04 07:31 PM

uppin this shit.............................................. ..............

(X)eed 10-27-04 11:08 PM

Voted For: Kwell

man no doubt kwell won why? cuz he had flo and he wsnt tryin 2 sho off like bizzey.. ex~FLEE~THE~NATION~ cuz the ~ERA~OF~WASTIN'~ is ~IN~OPERATION~ nobody can stop it not even the ~FEDERAL~BUREAU~OF~INVESTIGATION~ so ~HIT~THE~BATTLESTATION~
I was ~DESIGNED~4~TERMINATION~ by an ~INTELLIGENCE~OPERATION~ more powerful than the ~INTERNATIONAL~DEVELOPMENT~ORGANISATION~
I had ~DEDICATION~ to ending ~THE~REVALATION~ with ~ULTRAVIOLET~RADIATION~ and ~RACIAL~DISCRIMINATION~ only to be fucked up by ~PSYCHIC~COMMUNICATION~
^^^^^^^^^^^ the whole abovew line wuz WACK cmon man............. u can do betta than that gud openin line though bizzey,,, but overall kwell won

chedda boi 10-28-04 09:53 AM

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

chedda boi 10-29-04 09:43 AM

get this voted on stop sleepin on this battle uppin 4 votes

Terse. 10-30-04 11:26 AM

uppin this shit...................................

Miss. Lyricist 10-30-04 08:20 PM

Voted For: Bizzey

Personally, there was wordplay in every single friggin line. Your verse was so complex I almost couldn't follow. Neither of you punched very hard, but you were slightly ahead of Kwell, so you got my vote.

You need to work on your structure though, so ppl can follow ya verse better.

GangsStarShit 11-01-04 09:19 AM

Voted For: Bizzey

I think that Bizzey got this battle because i feel that Bizzey came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Bizzey got it they were used effectifely and were on point Kwell u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Bizzey good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Bizzey and flow and structure i'll give to Bizzey.

V/Bizzey There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly


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