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*Ya ni99az got me Really confused out Here
Like i aint the greatest writer of the 21st century
Feel Me Ni99az~~~~~~~~~Breathe Easy*

I was Delivered from a Black 22 Year Old Vaginal Capacity
Whodini Tendencies at Age three u could call me Majesty
Forever has this Consistence protrayed a day in the Life
Focused upon with Suspicion like ah Arabic in a Flight
Quadroople Scriptures Surface from every Single Approach
Death 2 Breathe Strokes like 300 Pounders stayin Afloat
U can Purely Understimate any Tendencie produced from Me
Cuz me and Defeat is Like tryin 2 Convince the Dead to Breathe
Never Tolerate any Uneccessary Feedback dont kno where BladeBe
Frequent Stops to Bronx and Bx city Usually no Trouble finding a Yankme

*So thats 10 hot barz and yet im still Understimated
U kno wha
ima make u fucks Breathe Easy ...Believe Me*

Respect is Demanded when eva the Name is Mentioned without Pention
Totally Unfocused and Devoted 2 the Purpose like 5 Yr olds in Detention
Delivered upon to the Wrong side of the Tracks,so tell whats to Miss?
Unbelivable Accomplishments like Slap Boxing with out Any Wrists
All hail to the Truest believe me its in my Pedigree purely Undisputed
Steadily Frowned upon like Pre Marital Sexual Relations from a Judist...Priest

~~~Breathe Eazy~

that was pretty good. good vocab and nice flow to it.....probly the best 8 barz i seen in an open mic. keep it up..........

4 sho
uppin people can i get some feedback

This was nice.....i was feelin the rhythm on this....wit a solid relax beat...shit..lol am thinkin audiowise but this was good drop fam work on less sylables cuz some ar stretched than others

That Was Gator 4sho *troop*. I Actually Heard It And Saw It My Head While I Was Reading.good Mental Picture Painting.this Is From The Dude U Called A Fukin Clown.but I'm Also A Fair Clown So I Give Props To Those Who Deserve It And You Got That.get@me Whenever U Ready.

iight good vocab that really stood out but the mood of the rack was conflicting from begging to end lemme elaborate..

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Originally Posted by Troop

I was Delivered from a Black 22 Year Old Vaginal Capacity
Whodini Tendencies at Age three u could call me Majesty

^^ that bar had me feeliong like i was going into a Black Album type song ya know talkin bout how you grew up and shit.

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Originally Posted by Troop

Forever has this Consistence protrayed a day in the Life
Focused upon with Suspicion like ah Arabic in a Flight

^^that bar switched the mood WAY too quickly from an introspective song to a hardcore song, that wasn't too cool :(

but overall for what you were aiming at you did a pretty good job, but yea flow can definatly be fixed up, and how deep you go into it needs to change a little also. :thumbup:

Damn. for real man i saw it all. Ya gorwin up, all the vocab was excpetional. Structure made it easy. Interlude was nice. Fo real stay up.

One

nice drop dawg. The first to bars wouldve killed anyone.

"I was Delivered from a Black 22 Year Old Vaginal Capacity
Whodini Tendencies at Age three u could call me Majesty"

that was hot dawg. Keep bars like dat comin. U killin cats wif 8 bars dawg, lol, holla NICE DROP

4 sho
propz 4 the luv

uppin

Respect is Demanded when eva the Name is Mentioned without Pention
Totally Unfocused and Devoted 2 the Purpose like 5 Yr olds in Detention- hahaha holla
Nice little drop---
Uppin this shit for famoz

4 sho thanx 4 the luv fam
Uppin

it wuz nice troop, da bars connected really well n da flow wuz sickening, nice drop, real enjoyable to read, only flaw is there shuld have been more

Now thats some really hot shit dog i been down for a while
but im back until its time for me to go back in to the studio
so for now keep posting an i'll give the feed as long as i get it in return
God bless all 1

4 sho welcome back my ni99a

im feeling this joint. nice concept,flow . Keep up the good work kid.

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I’ll discover your house and cover your mouth with mud
You’re a down south scrub can’t arouse a thug
You stir up stress you like syrup a mess and sticky
Like a sick duck you mixed in a bundling way you rumbling
Every day lost in street while I spit boss heat got you stumbling
Like blindfold mice you rhyme old not nice your world crumbling
Like KFC biscuits this is a deft spree don’t twist it got you fumbling
Like the NFL the worse clown with no first downs look dun
You best duck scum and remove the muck from your gum
Groove with class my style smooth like glass you just dumb
Got this chump drunk of this funk like an intoxicating drink
Like cable COX your rating stink I’m educating this fink

Um ya ne way.........