Kwell vs SmokaJoka666
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
NO CREW VOTES
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 10-20-04 at 06:11 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 06:12 PM.

U should be beggin fo sense, like charity askin fo dough from Oprah
battlin me is stupid, cuz it dont take much heat ta' smoke a joka
i'm the coldest cobra, this show is ova.....shit, it's curtains fo u
fuck a white T, i should be given a law suit the way i'm hurtin this foo
wit ya vexin words, u like a surgical tool...u gittin under ma' skin
if i told u ta' raise the bar, your stupidass would run to the gym
ya dumb n ya dim.......try n step on me, n u'll stand in defeat
dawg, in this game of hot potato, u simply cant handle the heat
u act like your punches are strong, but u aint speakin much
cuz if ya lines fail ta' connect, how do u expect ta' keep in touch?
u cant reach me-----dawg, i'll jus swing n defeat ya purpose
u prolly feel like u in dark waters.......cuz all u see is murkage
u think u sly n slick...it's funny how these peeps admire pricks
we should make this a fare battle,
.......................so at least voters'll hafta PAY ta' ride ya dick

i hope u show...

SmokaJoka666 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 07:30 PM.

Smoke'll make this kid my personal 'pupil' all the way to death
So if your my pupil...
The only way 'eye' can come ill, is if I was reffering to myself...
Watch this kid get his d/r's...and this thread'll have em all on it
But if ya want to see a forbidden fruit? just ban my opponent...
Thought you had this battle in your hands, but not talkin the talk..
He reminds me of Times Square each year, dropping the ball
It's easy...just ask if he's wack...and the kid'll simply confess
That he's a poor fuck...
..Reason way he's on his feet is cuz his car was repossessed
Just up your punches...cuz right now they're the worst ones...
But it'll be all good...that'll be o-k...well you'd still suck son

uppin fo votes...........................

we need some votes here.............drop links....

Voted For: Kwell

ha ha. yo kwell had a nice verse. i expected more from smoka cause everyone says hes really good and this is the first battle i seen from him. hopefully this wasnt his best

smoka-u had some lines kinda. not really anything that stood out. the only line i was feelin was the line about the fruit. that was ok though. not really hard punch. you had a decent flow though. overall 5/10


kwell-nice verse. especially against someone who is referred to as a vet. you attacked smoka in every line. with nice punches and u had 1 personal usin his name in the opener which was good. ur closer was also good. ur structure was good and so was your flow. u had a lot more punches than smokajoka. overall 7/10


vote-kwell...........

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Voted For: SmokaJoka666

This was one sided for sure...
Smoka: shit your verse killed all of his lines it was better and your punches were dtrong... nice personals and your flowed very welli dunno why someone voted agaisnt you cos you had this win striaght forward.....i liked the last line... also nice strucutre..... all of yours was came as played and crapp and yours was original

Kwell: your was iight not that good though smoka got you on every line.....your flow wasnst as good.. but it was iight your struuctrew was good....aslo you had iigiht punches and personals but your punches were very much played and it wasny original....

Vote Smoka joke for a better verse and originality

rating...
smoka:7
kwell: 4
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Voted For: Kwell

ok i wasnt really feelin both but k made a more clean approach and keeped the hits comin smok didnt seem to have a strong structure or flo though i did like the time square line nicely creative. but k had more hits, very simple battle which is ok, defeat and heat prick and dick ....ones and son, so on so on,
hard to choose but k's is more structured.

Voted For: Kwell

kwell got diz
his verse had da better puns n personals
dat gym line wiz tight
kwell ya finisher iz a lilplayed but da rest of da verse wuz nice

smoke ya flow wuz iight, dat opener wuz weak an da finisher wuznt much better, dint have no wit in yuh puns either

for overrall consistency in da bars kwell got da win

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......uppin 4 votes.....

those 2 votes are bullshit votes... not explained... blah...

Voted For: Kwell

Aight Kwell got this He just simply came harder & Brought gd Vocab..Smoka what happened?lol....There was no creativity at all....
Structure/Kwell
Vocab/Kwell
Wordplay/Kwell
Punches/Kwell
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Voted For: SmokaJoka666

SmokaJoka666-punches were a slight harder than Kwell's...but that 1st line was pretty funni tho..but overall u get my vote cuz yo punches were kinda harder than Kwell's

Kwell-yo shit was ok..to yo punches weren't hard enuff..and tha flow was ok..but overall u had a decent verse

Vote = Smoka

This was feedback posted for SmokaJoka666
 

checkin polls... good luck to tha both of yall.....

Voted For: Kwell

I think that Kwell got this battle because i feel that Kwell came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Kwell got it they were used effectifely and were on point Smoka u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Kwell good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Kwell and flow and structure i'll give to Kwell.

V/Kwell There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly

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Voted For: Kwell

kwell came harder and my vote goes to him becuz i was feelin his punches more and he had better personals,i liked his opener and i liked the gym rhyme,closer was ill too,smoka came decent here and had some good punches and he had a good opener but a weak closer, and some of smokas lines were stretched and hard to understand and flow with so close battle but kwell takes this.
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This was feedback posted for Kwell
 

^damn, nice drop Kwell.... u elevatin' quickly.. nice battle, you could possibly KO'd smoka... keep doin' ya thing you two.. :thumbup:

thanks for all the feedback/votes yo.....uppin for some more.....

uppin this shit...drop an honest vote n i'll do the same for your battle if u drop a link...

uppin this shit again...

Voted For: Kwell

Kwell - good spit - you had some good punches in there with a good flow.

Best Line -

U should be beggin fo sense, like charity askin fo dough from Oprah
battlin me is stupid, cuz it dont take much heat ta' smoke a joka
(good opener)

Worst Line - u cant reach me-----dawg, i'll jus swing n defeat ya purpose
u prolly feel like u in dark waters.......cuz all u see is murkage

Smoka - good spit.. you had some good flow.. and some good punches.

Best Line - But if ya want to see a forbidden fruit? just ban my opponent...
Thought you had this battle in your hands, but not talkin the talk..

Worst Line -

Smoke'll make this kid my personal 'pupil' all the way to death
So if your my pupil...
The only way 'eye' can come ill, is if I was reffering to myself...

OVERALL - good battle, but I gotta give this to Kwell, he had harder punches and a better flow. Smoka your shit was good to I was just feelin Kwells verse more.

Vote - Kwell

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