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Strikez vs J.R. Freeze
Battle Rules:
10 12 lines blind spit u set up no d/r or crew votes due 30 mins Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-19-04 at 07:32 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Strikez has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 07:08 PM.
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J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 07:12 PM.
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I'm new to this site, so this cat don't know my name
But still my rhymes are ill, and I'ma put him to shame Your punches for sure wouldn't hurt your grandma We never met, jerk, but already I can't stand ya I'll devour your skills like I eat ice cream cone Leavin you haunted bitch, with out nice dreams yo Battles begun time to lyrically kill, so you know It's time bitch If friends could help your skills, you would be rhymeless Go and buy a bra for your boobies you dumb noobie Sorry to tell ya, but your girl is one of my groupies Battling me was like you affording your rent No where to go, and all of your money spent |
Ya mic shakes like fake thugs faced with courts of criminal law/
You only “tight” like underwear, the way u always Grippin on balls/ ya claims of illness is fallacy, honestly ya quality is in question/ if you purchased your skills, you fuckin made a losing investment/ Dismantled with verbs and barz of murder I know it hurts/ StRikez you couldn’t defeat me in a rematch if I posted the same verse/ Like TV Guide you always come weekly(weakly), how you expect to win/ Cause ya rhyme like an anorexic joggin… ya skills are “runnin thin”/ fuck no-shows you're still-gonna-perish/ cause like "dead beat dads" you're skill-isn't-a-parent"(apparent)/ Like a pushup wonder bra, watch the votes that I “rack-up”/ Got ya down, an like broken cop radios, theres no way you’ll get “backup”/...... |
Wow..... I should just give up, your shit was seriously good.... I'm obviously a 'tad' newer than you are =P
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Dude where you learn how to spit sweet shit like that, gotta tell me =)
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
lol dawg you pretty tyte only thing u need to work on is ur flow..but u fo sho a vet in the makin..lol ur punches is pure dopeness...i think u'd be dope at audio....im feelin this fo sho j r took this no doubt...betta punches betta strcture betta errythang rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155489 |
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
Theres a murder goin on herre.... Battles begun time to lyrically kill, so you know It's time bitch If friends could help your skills, you would be rhymeless ^^only line i like remotely. So wahck. Don't know where to strat. Boobies? BOOBIES? Are you fuckign retarded. COne and yo? We must be on crack. no flow at all no punches no shit. 1.5/10 Finally some good shit.... Ya mic shakes like fake thugs faced with courts of criminal law/ You only “tight” like underwear, the way u always Grippin on balls/ ^^You coulda left it there. You own with the opener. This bitch had no idea what was comin. YOu had punches that hit, flow, metas, and multi-syllable rhymes. It's all over 8/10 |
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yoooo summm one help me end this battle..............
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
J.R. Dam Nigg You Teared Him Up Cuzzin Ya Flow Was Mad Tight Your WOrdplay Oh Got Dam Good Struture Decent Cuzz Ya Personals Was Cool Over All Good Flow Fam Vocabulary Was Cool Do Ya Thing Strikez Yo Son You Aiigh Basi Rhymes THough Step It Up A Notch Cuzzin And Get Ya Punches And WOrdplay Up |
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
lol nice freeze..... was not even close..... Beautiful wordplay and vocabulary...... Strikez your still back in 10th grade with those rhymes "Ya mic shakes like fake thugs faced with courts of criminal law/ You only “tight” like underwear, the way u always Grippin on balls/" From the start to finish your lines were hot |
Come on and vote this kid is hot.....Freeze derserves some credit.................................
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
J.R. Freeze came harder...period. His punches hit wit precision. His metaphors where decent...Wordplay was on point...Some of his lines were off, though... favorite line: Quote:
Strikes had nothing really.....He attempted punches, but they didnt really have an effect....Under the time limit circumstances, his verse was iight....But, J.R. Freeze took this one, hands down.... i did like this one, tho: Quote:
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