Kwell vs * Gra$e *
 

Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew/Hate/DR/ BS Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-19-04 at 09:01 PM

Must drop verse in 270 minutes after check in.

Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 08:05 PM.

* Gra$e * has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 08:05 PM.

im sikk dogg u aint fuckin wit da best
i Spit Prayerz out ma mouth and it ripz throug Ya Vest
And i micheal and try to malest itz a test
im on a quest u next rippin u up on text u gettin a F
lets gett it poppin crackin u perfer Toasta or da heata
And u like long objectz so ya shove down ya Throat iz a Fajita
im crazy non stop spitin neva quitin u shitin n bitchin
ma glockz Clickin n got gunz to rock ya skull andz itz bearly nippin
cripin no spittin ho my flawless blowz r crazy smoke some Dro
puff it tho and drop some doe so u can go home and pay ya Ho

i messed up

i aint Micheal****

Some peeps shouldn't even try they luck...shit, this guys fucked
Dawg, i'ma bout ta' drop U like the U.S. if it decides ta' divide up
eyes shut, wit my hands behind ma' back--n u'll still git destroyed
u? elevated? only cuz ya nuts aint descended yet--u still a boy
i'ma proclaimed vet, dawg..........unlike u, i spit fire n dont stall
thats why u yell "HO" wheneva they call your dumbass fo 'role' call
so u think u on the road to riches, the greatest star ta' battle?
well lemme take ya R n ya E bitch, now lez see how far u travel
yo, i need a new contender, i hope somebody got one ta' spare
cuz it's obvious i'ma against a pussy, jus like this foo's underwear
ya disliked--when voters come, i'll know that what i laid is felt
shit, if your dumbass had the chance, i know you'd dissGrase yourself

aight, we uppin this fo some votes......

*correction*...in line 8, i meant to say
"i'll leave u wit only an R n an E...."
anyways uppin #2

uppin #3.........drop links n i'll return the favor if i've got enough posts....

Iight Uppin Dis Whack Catz Verse

Voted For: Kwell

u took this easily

punches: kwell
vocab: kwell
personals: none
Wordplay: kwell
flow: kwell
structureL kwell

holla at me...lol kwell took this easily rtf the favour

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155489

uppin number 4........................drop links...............

Voted For: Kwell

ok grase i dont know wat was goin on with your flo or anything i dont understand a thing wats with the "fajita" line you need to take some time off and learn some vocab and practice you lyrical ability more, dont be ashamed i did about a year or two ago and im now alot better than i was.

kwell you better but not that much, you rhyme easy, stall with call, i advise to both of you do like i did and practice some more before you battle again.

kwell gets this one.

uppin...drop links n i'ma hit 'em up wit an honest vote...

This was feedback posted for * Gra$e *
 

blaoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo0
elevate b4 you become H Dub C next leader

lol at this cat sayin MY verse was wack...anyways, uppin this...

uppin this shit.......................................

we need some more votes here......................

uppin this shit...................................

Voted For: Kwell

Kwell-A decent structure which kept the flow right...weak personals, but at least you had some...not that many good punches, wordplay was good at times "cuz it's obvious i'ma against a pussy, jus like this foo's underwear " I liked that

Gra$e-"And i micheal and try to malest itz a test
im on a quest u next rippin u up on text u gettin a F"? do they teach spelling at your elementary school? weak punches...no personals....forced multis which made your drop look totally retarded. No wordplay...vocab was limited...elevate

V/Kwell
Reason:Better structure, flow, punches, wordplay, and vocab

Kwell...you should have enough posts...if you can return the favor on both my battles...thanks fam

Voted For: Kwell

easy:

the vote obviously is one sided, i wasnt briking on any portion, ya came good Kwell, ya wordplay was felt and ya structure was good, pointer on punches = dont got one, lol, ya had a good verse, nice anology, keep it up, create a rec. Grase ya metas were failed, so did ya verse, nice effort, ya came and showed up, thats good, but ya didnt come through with a win this time, maybe next time, but at least ya elevating, and thats wat this is all about, right?

vote: Kwell

return the favor, links in ma sig = vrs. jr freeze

up.............

Voted For: Kwell

Grase... ya whole shyt was sloppy, dawg... no hate,just truth... no punches were thrown in ya verse... everything was chopped up and nothing led to to the next line... work on y astructure and ya disses... punchlines were non-existant... seriously need elevation here


Kwell... you killed this dude with ya verse... that us line was cool as shyt and i liked the play on his name... GAS...see how for you travel... hot shit son... structure was good... punches connected... personals woulda improved it but ya punches stung him well enough... good shyt yo