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:.anxiety.: vs Paramik
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Blind Spit... put at 700 to prevent herb votes and d'rs..... Minimum posts to vote: 700 Check in by: 10-19-04 at 08:31 PM Must drop verse in 480 minutes after check in. Old battle close / win |
:.anxiety.: has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 08:04 PM.
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Paramik has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 08:07 PM.
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Oh yeah... I hope you read this... Im changing my name to ajax... I dont know when it will be changed so go with anxiety as the name in the diss... But just so ya know...
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i cant find any diss with ajax........ or can i.......
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I wouldnt even try... I just asked strobe... You know how slow he is... Even if my name does get changed before the battle is over, its not like people dont already know me...
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Kid’s a great helper, cause Anxiety’s just curved the win to me.
Cause this pussy’s on top…….. must be a stuck cat in the tree. CS is always Coming With Shit, but fuck ya crap aint the last….. Cause the only things that’s shit loaded…, is coming from ya ass. Named after what he is, this kid is only ashamed of his name. Like his sad face, I’ll put you out of misery by dropping the pain. Face the facts you only got JPoll sticking up for you in the game. Don’t get excited, what he really means is the initials in his name. Shit, I’m facing psychos, likes spotting crack kids, bashing cars with bats. Damn, I’ll be nailing this fucker and leave this insane kid with tacks. JP- Just Playing Read this Closely...... |
Holy shit anx... you shud be done.....
you was still for about an hour.. now you browsing forums..shit.... |
And i just took a hot-tub... Dont worry dawg... I already got 2 lines done... Lol... I know, i take forever to get around to shit...
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Holy shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Get it up then..... |
On this site, ain’t no one whacker than Paramik…
He couldn’t blow his shit up if he was an Arabic… Yeah you got respect on this site, barely though… Your shits whack enough, so why write for scenario? You can’t compare to me, in this game I’m a beast… Why the fuck you think Paramik’s been chatting with priests… It must suck to be takin down, as you shoot for the sky… But you know you gon lose like liquer of tears cause the ‘proofs’ in ya ‘eyes’… I wonder how come every rhyme you use is a perfect rhyme… Because most people that only have perfect rhymes look that shit up online… Most of my personals are from his two open mics in his sigs... Peep that shit if you wanna understand them... |
My lines end where the ... is, so even though it looks like 12 lines its 10... You can also tell because thats where it rhymes...
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Thats Ight...
nice drop... upping........................... |
God!! you changed ya sig so peeps wont get my personals... herb.. JP...
in that case i was a FULL Breakdown in each lines and with a following good explination for it..... |
Lol... Anybody on this site with over 700 posts knows what was in my sig... And they are the only ones voting... My bad though...
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vote..............................................
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You Rotten bastards Vote.......................................
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Lets go jackass's...
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Elevated is pretty much dead.......................................
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How hard is it to vote in ONE battle bitches.....................
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How hard is it to get one fucking vote... Or even one feedback... Do we even have any views?
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Voted For: Paramik
Alright, to be compleatly honest. I think Paramik won this battle. Some of his punches were pretty good, his flow was more or less on point. Some could of been worded better, like the Jpoll one, I got it, but yea.. Better worded could of made it one of those punches that make ya go "Ha!".. lol.. Also I didnt really like your closer, but you came pretty good and it was enough to take this. Ajax, lines were too short in some cases, opening bar was good, The personals about his open mics were well thought out and I was feelin em, but some I felt were only really basically references.. As opposed to dope punchlines.. If you know what I mean. I liked your verse too, but in the end I think paramik jus nipped the win with his consistance in punches n shit. No hate, just honestly what I thought. Peace. |
I'm so happy someone finnaly did vote.. im giving you 5000 RV money!!!!! and we had allota damn views
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Upping............................................
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If we dont get more votes, imma tell strobe to give this too you... i'll give it a week or so...
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Upping............................................ ....
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This was feedback posted for Paramik
yo this was a nice battle. But I really don't like to vote on battles when I'm cool wit both. So I'll jus give feed.
Para, I liked yo verse. I think the big weakness of yo verse was that you used too basic rhyming. Yo mosst non-basic one was "last" and "ass". Like Anx for example used "barely though" wit "scenario". But you 14 and young and got time to up that vocab. haha lol also, try addin' multi's maybe, and inners. but you had some nice lines.I liked that JP line. ill lol I got that shit. Nameplay was aiight, but that shit be soo played now, so it ain't ht ebest no more unless it's more witty, nah layins? but overall nice verse Anxiety, you had nice rhymin' words. I liked that. But in that LOT line, wtf? yo structure looked fucked there. But the line was good once I figured it out. nice lines, pretty good punches. Overall, this pretty close battle. could fall either way. Nice verses by both. props. and if you haven;t checked it out yet ,vote on my battle wit EyeDentikal in "frontlines" pc |
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Ive upping so amny times... anxciety said that if this isnt closed in a week i get the win....... and it passsed about.... 2 weeks since he said that....
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Voted For: Paramik
weak battle to me neither brought much or didnt care to paramik- opener was basic nothin that good there 2 bar played wordplay not a very good bar 3 bar was coo...... wordplay was there punch was decent best bar so far 4 bar lmaoo that was decent but funny punch missed a lil bit closer was ok didnt feal it to much on that it was ight though anxiety- opener was ????? dumb honestly not a hard punch or personal 2 bar not that good if hes ghostin for somebody then some1 thinks he nice right? 3 bar filler all day i see that 4 bar was good wordplay i think if u catch it nice punch there 5 bar was plain nothin there put words and a filler bar not a good verse overall liquor line was pretty nice though |
This was feedback posted for :.anxiety.:
If i did not just read the most played lines then played needs a new definition..
Seriously.. |
The Liquor line was the only line i worked on... I don't know why... Maybe because im whack at text battling... And you know what... I don't give a fuck...
But the Liquor line owned his whole verse, just so you know... |
so.. you want this polling to keep going or you wanna take the loss and i take the win... liek you siad.. if we dont get any moer votes??
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Voted For: Paramik
Paramik - ur verse was kinda good..your opener was creative but not really that good..you attacked his crew which is good and that second bar was funny..the only thing i didnt like about ur verse was ur closer... fav. line - CS is always Coming With Shit, but fuck ya crap aint the last….. Cause the only things that’s shit loaded…, is coming from ya ass. overall - 8/10 anxiety - honestly i dont know what the big hype is about you..everyone says ur really good..this verse wasnt too great..you had a clever opener using the personal..your second bar i understood but it wasnt really good..the priest line was lame..i liked the wordplay with the liquior..but ur closer was kinda wack... fav. line - On this site, ain’t no one whacker than Paramik… He couldn’t blow his shit up if he was an Arabic… overall - 7/10 vote - Paramik |
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