Lyriclesolja vs blackwell
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-23-04 at 06:26 AM

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Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 06:30 AM.

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blackwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 07:57 AM.

blackwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 08:25 AM.

blackwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 08:26 AM.

Ayo Ima leave ya bleeding like ["fresh-lamb"] so dont even ["test-man"]
Ill be da ["best-man"] after i leave this bitch smokin like hostages in ["bethlan"]
These depthes are gettin *colder* as these miracles ["unfold-ya"]
Havent dey "told-ya"?. dat usin ya mouth in da army only way youll be a ["lyricle-solja"]
I spoke to sum dude yesterday..weirdest guy on da ["earth-man"
Infact it was on msn..hold up.. I think his name was ["durfman"] (his msn name)
As these words "deploy" dey tell me his sumfin dat I ["gotta-destroy"]
N detach him from his twin..ass from ass...for ever thinkin he ["shotta-boy"](his pal)
Its over.. enough been said ..readin dis the audience prolly ["made-a-frown"]
Knowin dat i got lyricle solja sweatin more buckets den a peodaphile ina [play-ground

Yo theres a million things i could do but ima do personals,
hes 5-11 and was challenger every time he's not versitile,
he got merked by Riff Raff nik nack this dude wants a bone,
so Black wack patty smack ima send his ass home,
soon as i saw his record i knew he was in fo a KO,
even his OM's are wack and he could pre-write those,
he droped a OM called time flys and i couldent believe my eyes,
how could a person this wack be considerd nice,
on another OM called Verbal Attitude,
the only word he could rhyme wit it was lattitude,
well ima lay him down and beat the shit out this dude-im mad at chu,
then he got merked my Shottaboi and had a chance to pre-write and admitted he was gay,
and had nothing to say and choked on the third day.
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its Ova....Holla....

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

I'm sort this bullshit out....

These depthes are gettin *colder* as these miracles ["unfold-ya"]
Havent dey "told-ya"?. dat usin ya mouth in da army only way youll be a ["lyricle-solja"]
^^Blackwells best line. You had multis, but they was fuckin whack. You took shots at his homies and his mesn handle. They didn't land at all. Ya mulit sillable shit didn't land either
4/10


he got merked by Riff Raff nik nack this dude wants a bone,
so Black wack patty smack ima send his ass home,
^^Points for originality. Other than that ya had a lot of weak punches, no real great multis. No metas at all. Bout otha than that not bad and i liek ya structure much more.
6/10

Close battle but Lyriclesolja took it.

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

lyricle took diz, diz wuz a hot verse lyricle from ya opener 2 da hot closer it wuz consistent an personals n puns hit hard, i liked da verse

blackwell, ya structure wuz fucked, u had sum decent lines, but some unoriginal stuff too, lyricle got my vote

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lol nice punches bo' , checking polls

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

soon as i saw his record i knew he was in fo a KO,
even his OM's are wack and he could pre-write those,
^nice bar... lmao

^lyrical had the harder verse.. he had punches a lil' bit of hilarious stuff here and there.. the nik nak part wasn't too fascinating but original cuz how many people's verses do u see it in..? none.. but uhmm you got on his open micz.. lol and the gay part was hilarious but your endin' should be as strong as your opener if not more.. blackwell you had sum aight punches in your verse but the brackets mess up your flow.. you took his name in ur verse, nice personal but you structure was kinda off.. well both of y'alls were but lyricle had the better flow.. blackwell work on your punches and adding wordplay, you have nice metas but u need to put that shit together.. :)

my vote/ lyricle good luck and pz..

Voted For: blackwell

gotta go with blackwell...nice verse. how come u couldnt show up for our battle?!? (i wonder)...nah, but u came wit it with personals, and punches, and mettas..
soulja got u on personals tho, because there were more, but i think ur were better, so i will give that to u. u got punches in my category too...u killed him. soulja, i couldnt give this to u cause u kept repeating the same words. and blackwell, suggestion, type ur words in english, its text. we need to read em right. they looked all gay. but overall good battle. i thought soulja had u cause of his personals, i thought u couldnt rhyme blackwell, cause u was a no-show for my battle, but u came wit it...dropped harder punches, and a better structure. soulja, yo structure fell off near the end. work on that dawg...

overall a good battle, but gotta give this one up to blackwell. it seemed like yall gotta lotta hate, and yall tryna expose each other...suggest yall hit up them open mic's?

return votes on my battle against lyricaldon...find it, i found yall's. i up it everyday...good shit yall..keep it up

Voted For: blackwell

an ok battle

solja kinda weak..u did go for the personals but some of them were really wack..no punches from u..the only thing going ur way were some of the personals and ur flow...overall 5/10

blackwell u had an ok verse..went deeper into the personals..that was good..ur structure was good..u had some good multis also..ur closer was the only real punch in the battle and it wasnt too bad...overall 6/10


vote.....blackwell