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Ill-Grammatix 10-20-04 08:28 AM

Who remembers the first shyt the wrote and what it was about?
 
I was in middle school and my boy wanted to talk to this girl who happened to be like the most popular chick in the school. So i sent her a little message and shyt saying my boy wanted to holler at her... She practically laughed in his face... so ya know, i had to bring her ass back down to Earth... I wrote this joint called "A Bad Smell" that was patterened after Run D.M.C.'s "Big Mouth"... it was the worst shyt i ever wrote in my life!!! somehow i lost my rhyme book and little did I know that the shyt had circulated all over the whole school! She was crying and shyt... it was beautiful... and then the most popular dude in the school rolled up on me...lol... needless to say, i was quite the herb in my younger years and got picked on a lot back then, so I just knew I was about to get my ass whipped! He asked me if I wrote it... i was gonna say no but I got real bold and said yeah...lol... dude said the shyt was "fresh"...lol... he gave me back my book, told me he rhymed too, and said I was better than him... I been rapping ever since...

.Fatal Lyricist. 10-20-04 08:36 AM

lol dat shyt is hilarious how did she end up finding out

Ill-Grammatix 10-20-04 08:40 AM

somebody either told her about it or showed it to her... she really became a cool person after that... I helped her to become a better person by accident...lol

Terumoto 10-20-04 09:58 AM

LOL ... i remember an old thread like this... calamitys one stuck in my brain.. lmao

my best friend roachy../
he broky'd/

I dunno why i still remember that ...

The Militant 10-20-04 02:33 PM

i wrote it about a girl ta i broke up with that i didnt want her to see but her best friend was sitting next to me read t n told her but we were cool till she rated on me and i kicked out of school fuckin cunt

Implicit 10-20-04 06:12 PM

ha ha. funny stuff. the first time i wrote was when my homey got played so i wrote about 20 something barz jus clownin him. and like ill gramatix said it got circulated throughout the school. it was pretty funny. thats how i started. jus makin fun of people............

Lyriclesolja 10-22-04 07:56 AM

Im not sure but i think it was about school....man i hated that shit......just had to write about it.....

KiTTie 10-22-04 08:02 AM

my first shit was about a year ago, when i was in 7th.

it was just after my lowest point, depression, drugs, alcahol.

it was entitled "Fuckin Crazy"

my friends loved it, i hated it, so i trashed it.

it was about everything i had gone thru that year, with bullies, and ^^^

Myster.E 10-22-04 04:04 PM

In Primary school when we was meant to do a poem but I co-wrote a rap with a friend, Michael about the human racemostly killed words for rhymes but had meaning short as fuck tho.

TeamOne 10-23-04 02:40 PM

i wrote sumthin wen one of my friends got rejected and shit, and he made fun of me, so i did it back............ i unno, i cant even really remember........ the first time i wrote a song it was on that Victory beat and shit was ok...... juss self-glorification

MetEoR-K 10-23-04 03:01 PM

First shit I wrote I was like 12, It was some gangsta shit lol

KiTTie 10-24-04 03:18 PM

i mean, ive been writing shit since, o, i dunno..... 2nd grade or so.

but my real "gangsta" shit came just last year

Kawn Flixx 10-24-04 03:52 PM

1st shit I wrote

was back when jay-z

"Hard Knock Life" 1st came out

I loved that shit,s I wrote a song called

"Occur"

was about all the shit that happens...

People said I suck and should quit rappen

Well I didn' now look how good I am...

peace

For$akeN 10-24-04 04:58 PM

i couldn't find the first thing i wrote but i found the second....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=121390

Insight. 10-24-04 08:29 PM

girl pissed me off, i freestyled bout, and she hears bout it and i thought i wuz screwed. reported it to teacher, teacher didnt believe her since i wuz like 12, but i got respect from people for it

OrEo da cookie 10-26-04 12:10 AM

my first shit is on a track aand these are the lyrics song was called
(first song ever)

first song ever

So much I can tolerate,
To lil' in my mind state,
Put you to sleep while you still awake,
Keep going need to hit the brake,
Quiet IM in my rhyme state,
To much in the way,To much on my mind,
To many verses,not enough ryhme,
Never one to be a coward,
Dont like what you hear,go head,hit power,
cuz any coward,I devour,only grow with they power,
Do what you do,stat good doing it,
Dont stop what you diong over any kind of bullshit,
Im the king,whose gonna be the queen,
cut down the middle like a vicectimine,
kidny & splee,kidney & beann,
sppining your city like I was charlie sheen,
Red,whyet,and blue cells in my membrane,
Sudam Husane,Me and him is just as insane,
Bow your heads now and wait for my rain,
Kill you,bring you back to life and do it again,
only diong this cuz I love the rush of adrenerlain,
A kodak moment but Im taking you out the picture,
Started off as the loser now whose the victore,

Chorus(Ass,Honeys,came for the game,2
Cash,money came from the fame,1
Whips,hoes,came for the name,3
clips,foes,came frome the pain,4


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