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PayDay vs Kwell
Battle Rules:
5 Barz - 10 Linez No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No half ass votes, they must be explained WELL... aight...Godd luck mayn...~1~ Minimum posts to vote: 75 Check in by: 10-23-04 at 08:58 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
PayDay has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 08:59 PM.
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Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 09:26 PM.
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i'ma jus key somethin now...
It damn sure aint hard ta' tell this is one of RV's shadiest geeks n wit these lyrical shots, ..............i've got the kinda arms that'll rock this baby ta' sleep u crazy ta' see a win in your future, son........foo it's impossible ya too stupid...u wouldn't have IQ if i played pool wit ya opticals i'm eludin this obstacle...u've been slow since the damn beginnin yo, like mute people at sports events...u've got no chants of winnin i already demoralized u dawg...now u better off steppin in stealth u the laughing stock of RV, n it's bout time that u invest in yourself i didnt wanna stoop to this dude's level, cuz thats a loss of respect but next time PayDay comes thru, i already know i've got him in check... |
Ha – Ha – Ha…Aight - Aight…its been a while…but ay’ Yo’ – Check it…
Punishment is painful when you know you deserve it// 1 It's like a hustla on a clucka ~ let me show you how I serve it// 2 You Already Know I defeat the room// 3 Then I be all over your girlfriend like some Cheap Perfume// 4 Kwell I pull more strings than 10 guitars// 5 and I will leave u dumped in the dumpster wit More than just Scars// 6 I’ll Stab n’ Lynch you with a Pad n’ Pencil// 7 A Lyrical god ~ I got mad skillz but you don’t even Have Potential// 8 PayDay is a Rappin Monsta ~ like the sopranos I’m a mobsta// 9 I Have you eatin shells n’ I aint talking bout Crabs n’ Lobstas// 10 Clucka – Slang for hoe, or prostitute Menace – marlon waynes (don’t be a menace in southcentral) |
Voted For: PayDay
nice battle Pay and Kwell...it could have been better if you both came harder...lmao...no hate...n e ways...PayDay took this...he had better flow, his punches and lines werent overplayed, and his structure was spactacular...i liked the lines he used as well...i havent heard n e one use marlon waynes in a diss before...he did that well...and a clucka? never heard of that but it fits the meaing i spose...lines 5 and 6 were good...pulling more striings than 10 guitars is a creative line...and he ender the bar with ~ "and I will leave u dumped in the dumpster wit More than just Scars" ~ a good ender to that but it could have been said a little bit more effective...okay...kwell...you are obviously new to the game...but u do have some tallent...first...your structure was horrible...it was choppy and overplayed...you did have some good lines but they were weak...in the rules it says 5 bars...you have a little bit more than that if you were to structure it the way it should flow...you have to get that str8 cause some cats will have u dq for not following the rules...both of you had good vocab as well, it was good...kwell you very last line was the best line..."but next time PayDay comes thru, i already know i've got him in check"...that is a good one...its not real hard or creative but most peeps would over look his name...props...okay to the voting...PayDay takes this with better vocab, flow, punches, creativity and STRUCTURE... |
aight, very good feedback....jus lettin u know i aint "new to the game" as u said...n i knew that there was a 10 line limit, it's jus that the second line had a pause in it, n i didnt want that line to be extra long...anyways good vote....uppin for more...
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yup yup...thanks for the good vote lyrikal...and i personally dont care how many lines he got...as long has he meets the minimum...any ways...still uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin for them votes...~1~
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upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppinnn nnn for votes
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still uppin for votes people, i need to get this shit closed...dont let this sleep
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Voted For: PayDay
In my eyes, Kwell only had one decent punch...his closer...and it still wasnt that great...Payday came way harder and had good punches throughout his verse...both flowed well, but Payday came harder with the good wordplay and punches. Good battle though y'all |
thanks for the vote magik...still upppppppppppppin for them votes...dont let this sleep
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This was feedback posted for PayDay
cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here!
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come one people...lets get this closed...uppppppppin
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Voted For: Kwell
kwell got this one cause of harder hits for sure and came with alot of disses pay cam aight hard not hard enough hits though his structure was good but kwell get thsi |
Voted For: PayDay
aight.. payday, dont space ya bars out like that, makes em seem like they dont connect in places, an dosent flow as well... but.... Punishment is painful when you know you deserve it// 1 It's like a hustla on a clucka ~ let me show you how I serve it ^^^ thats a real nice opener, ill wordplay.. You Already Know I defeat the room// 3 Then I be all over your girlfriend like some Cheap Perfume ^^^ defeat the room line was a lil self glorfyin but the cheap perfume line was pretty humouress... Kwell I pull more strings than 10 guitars// 5 and I will leave u dumped in the dumpster wit More than just Scars// ^^^ wasnt feelin it, seemed a lil forced... I’ll Stab n’ Lynch you with a Pad n’ Pencil// 7 A Lyrical god ~ I got mad skillz but you don’t even Have Potential// ^^ not bad, decent wordplay, but a lil self glorying an again seemed somewhat forced... PayDay is a Rappin Monsta ~ like the sopranos I’m a mobsta// 9 I Have you eatin shells n’ I aint talking bout Crabs n’ Lobstas// ^^^ wasnt feelin ya closer.. lacked creativity.... kwell......... t damn sure aint hard ta' tell this is one of RV's shadiest geeks n wit these lyrical shots, ..............i've got the kinda arms that'll rock this baby ta' sleep u crazy ta' see a win in your future, son........foo it's impossible ya too stupid...u wouldn't have IQ if i played pool wit ya opticals ^^^ the optical line was the only thing i was feelin in those bars i'm eludin this obstacle...u've been slow since the damn beginnin yo, like mute people at sports events...u've got no chants of winnin ^^^ prettyy decent vocab, nice punch in there too, an nice wordplay.. i already demoralized u dawg...now u better off steppin in stealth u the laughing stock of RV, n it's bout time that u invest in yourself ^^^ decent shit, nice wordplay an punch, hard hittin personal too.. i didnt wanna stoop to this dude's level, cuz thats a loss of respect but next time PayDay comes thru, i already know i've got him in check... ^^^ noit the strongest closer, but it seemed more creative than paydays closer... on the whole, kwells verse was more creative an had the hard hittin punches, an payday seemed to self glorify in his verse, so my vote goes too kwell no hate to neither of ya... can i get a returned vote in my sig? thanx peace Vote switched |
shit, i posted that in the wrong box
kwell get that vote changed by strobe........... ...an return the favor, peace |
Voted For: PayDay
payday took this one...betta punches...betta flow...structure...an overall better battle verse... wusnt' feelin' kwell...less flow... v/ payday |
Voted For: Kwell
Kwell won no doubt had flo srtucture and sum good vocab but sum shit dnt really rhmye man cmon,,,,,, lookin forward for outr battle kat...........betta accept |
Voted For: Kwell
u killed him...better punches, but structure, better wordplay, and more creative rhyming payday had a nice verse, but the structure was out of it...and his bars werent complete to me...some bars had add-on's and some need more words... kwell had a wayyyy better verse...his shit made since ,and it was creative and different from what i usually read...good shit return HONEST votes on RED BEAM battles...ya feels...in sig |
Voted For: Kwell
ok~good battle both kwell: your verse was dope, you had good flow and some hard hitting lines, original quality to your verse too, and style here, i like your opener, good way to start"i've got the kinda arms that'll rock this baby to sleep".dope line,,,and the sports event line was a dope punch too, your closer was a nice way to finish it,,strong lines and punches here....nice job payday:your lines were good here too, but i dont think they were strong enough to take the win, i just think your opponent came harder and i liked his flow better.....but tight battle both..1 |
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