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..ADLIB.. 10-21-04 04:55 AM

Most vs Spektikul
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No DR
No Bullshit Votes

aight here we go.

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-21-04 at 06:55 AM

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System 10-21-04 05:02 AM

Most has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 05:02 AM.

System 10-21-04 05:07 AM

Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 05:07 AM.

Spektikul 10-21-04 05:10 AM

This aussie kat is wack, cause aint no one got his back...its true
Closest he came to a crew, was the crocodile hunter, an a kangaroo
I might wait for this light weight to write great, but I aint got all year
Think I smell ya fear, WAIT *sniff sniff* that smells commin from ya rear
Gave your other battles a chance, like your pants, they look like shit
You like dick, so its sick when your on the mic, do you swallow or spit
You lost, like your avy im scratchin ya record, time to pull the plug
How can you call yourself Most, when your in a battle with Ruff Tuff Thug
Why dont you quit this site tonight, an go write something thats tight
Cant do battle harm, try a cattle farm, cause all you drop is bullshit,right?

..ADLIB.. 10-21-04 06:18 AM

respondent to my callout, feinin for newbs is what u about...
dependent on fallouts, to increase ya 'speks' coz u lack clout...
i'll shatter ya frame like the lens in ya thick arse spektikals...
y u got such a gay name? u got bad vision? coulda made it skeptikal..
sight ya only weakness? no, u lack brains,u like a lamb ima slaughter ...
ya rhymes r all burned out, u vulnerable like a fish out of water...
i gave birth to half ya styles, u should be paying me rhyme support...
like billy jean sueing michael jackson for child support...
yo spek i know u Feed your girl aphrodisiacs and hide your viagra..
peep how u suffering to a newb, ya self esteem crashin down like niagara..

..ADLIB.. 10-21-04 06:24 AM

yo my battle with ruff tuff thug is old! yes i know its embarrassing but that was before i knew RV politics. neways straight drop.....g'luck.

Spektikul 10-21-04 09:56 AM

^^^hahaha, fo sho homie, GL...upping..............

..ADLIB.. 10-22-04 10:07 PM

uppin................

..ADLIB.. 10-26-04 07:34 PM

uppinnnnnnnnn.......

..ADLIB.. 10-27-04 07:23 PM

uppinnn for spek.................

Parallel 10-27-04 08:26 PM

Voted For: Spektikul

Most:
meh yours wasent that bad alright punches nice stucture and flowed a few multis no wordplay but not many people understand it:) atleast i know it:)...you had some pretty key punches that came hard..not bad vocabulary i think you took the division...7/10 coulda been better try workin on punches a lil more nothing suppa dope here..

Spektikul:
not bad not bad...nice punches some pretty key punches that came hard man you got the punches down and stucture...and it also flowed good job your elevating pretty fast keep it up...vocabulary didnt coem to hot you lost in that...but you had some pretty good witty metaphores in there that were dope...8.1/10

return the favour here:
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Implicit 10-27-04 11:59 PM

This was feedback posted for Spektikul
 
...........jus checkin the polls....................

Capital Punishment 10-28-04 01:34 AM

Voted For: Spektikul

an ok battle


Most: opener was ok, i think u tired to hard to play off his name, meta's was tight, tight multi but u rymed support with support (kinda herbish), punches was good (some of em), flow was ok, structure was kinda off, ok personals, fave line was the fish out of water, overall 5.5/10


Spektikul: opener was tight (found it funny), didn't go overboard on the same personal (good personals), punches was taggin em, meta's was ok, flow was on point, structure was pretty good, fave line was ya opener and ya closer, overall 7/10



vote: Spektikul

no hate, return the honest votes, battle links are in my sig

Spektikul 10-28-04 02:32 AM

Thanks for the honest feed/voting ya'll, ima hit up your links asap, uppin......

Spektikul 10-28-04 02:33 PM

Upping for more honest feed/votes ya'll, lets keep'em commin...

..ADLIB.. 10-29-04 05:46 AM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnn..............

Sik Wit It 10-30-04 01:05 AM

Voted For: Spektikul

Trauma’s Verse
respondent to my callout, feinin for newbs is what u about...
dependent on fallouts, to increase ya 'speks' coz u lack clout...
^decent opner

i'll shatter ya frame like the lens in ya thick arse spektikals...
y u got such a gay name? u got bad vision? coulda made it skeptikal..
^‘okay’ line…

sight ya only weakness? no, u lack brains,u like a lamb ima slaughter ...
ya rhymes r all burned out, u vulnerable like a fish out of water...
^no…work harder on yo punches

i gave birth to half ya styles, u should be paying me rhyme support...
like billy jean sueing michael jackson for child support...
^ …an ‘okay’ punch

yo spek i know u Feed your girl aphrodisiacs and hide your viagra..
peep how u suffering to a newb, ya self esteem crashin down like niagara..
^…a ‘hell no’ closer

Spektikul’s Verse
This aussie kat is wack, cause aint no one got his back...its true
Closest he came to a crew, was the crocodile hunter, an a kangaroo
^decent opner…

I might wait for this light weight to write great, but I aint got all year
Think I smell ya fear, WAIT *sniff sniff* that smells commin from ya rear
^an ‘okay’ punch hea…

Gave your other battles a chance, like your pants, they look like shit
You like dick, so its sick when your on the mic, do you swallow or spit
^an ‘hell no’ punch…

You lost, like your avy im scratchin ya record, time to pull the plug
How can you call yourself Most, when your in a battle with Ruff Tuff Thug
^pretty decent punch

Why dont you quit this site tonight, an go write something thats tight
Cant do battle harm, try a cattle farm, cause all you drop is bullshit,right?
^an ‘okay’ closer…

Overall
Spektikul took this one wit ease…
His punches came harder & landed…
Tha structure was pretty~decent…and
Tha flow & vocab were nice hea…

..ADLIB.. 10-30-04 03:57 AM

aiight. cant bitch about that vote^. uppinnn

Spektikul 11-01-04 12:10 PM

VOTE! VOTE! VOTE! VOTE! uppin ya'll, keep'em commin....

Justify 11-02-04 09:05 PM

Voted For: Spektikul

Trauma-you had some decent vocab..a few ok punches...no hard hittin personals...and not much wordplays, structure and flow were pretty good...a good drop but

Spek-ok, just have to say...almost all your lines made me laugh....A great opener, with a nice personal...structure and flow was tight...good punches...great closer...got multis, punches, personals...didnt see to much wordplay...but a great drop overall

V/Spektikul
Reason:Coming with better punches, personals...a better structure and flow...and multis

please return the vote against Khaos(link in signature)

Mc_BaD_bOy 11-03-04 11:46 AM

Voted For: Spektikul

punches-spek
stuture-tie
met-none
pers-spek
multi-none

spektikul da mor punches n pers he won dis 1 sided all the way
tra was ok had 1 good punch in there but didnt come hard enuf spek ins easyaly

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