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Direkt-Threat vs. Vast K.
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20 Bars or Less... No D.R... No crew votes... If verse is not in by today, D.Q ....And if your willing to spit first, tell me... Good Luck. |
bet...
you go first because i'm finna go to lunch...verse will be on around 1:00 central time
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Aight, verse will be up in about 30 min.
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Aight, Goodluck...Here's my verse...
On the real...Vast Knowledge got to be insane if he want sto "Battle me"... Im the type to cut legs off and make emcee's jump off "Balconies"... If your the kind to talk about "Hoes", well my "Knife's on ya Dime"... Must be calling "Peramedics" the way you got your "Life on the line"... My verse is in, his comment is "Damn... He's Raw"... Your style is 'bout to break like Obese cats on "See-Saw's.... Vast's Verse is "Blah, Blah, Blah" to me...STOP! "Your not Real"... He could "Bribe" with "5 O" and still couldn't "Cop a Deal"... Infecting Venom into this to this wack cats bloodline... he ask's why am "I Lethal"... Your verse doesn't Appear" to me like the vision of breast to "Blind-People"... With Direkt Threat spitting, Vast knows when "Trouble Comes"... Wouldn't "Last Long" attaching your verse to Wriggles "Bubble Gum"... I Guess you Couldn't of predicted the outcome, Vast Knowledge must have a "Dumb-Personality"... Don't dry my hands when im dropping verses, people say im "Kareless" like "Thug Mentality"... Promised!...I'll keep "Kicking" verses till you become weak and your "Knee's begin to Shatter"... Direkt-Threat got battles Waiting in Line" like HIV candidates with "Weak Kidney and Bladders"... Answering call outs in Bitched Slapped with me..."Your Days'll Become Less Son"... Your no competition on the mic in text like Nelly in audio against "KRS One"... Build collisuem's... breaking my walls, i'll beat you with a "Brick Badly"... I hate cat's like Vast Knowledge cause they're a former "Trick Daddy"... |
why did you have to edit the verse???
oh well....let's go...
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My finger hit another letter and it fucked up somin..
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somebody gonna die...
yo' fuck wit ~VaSt~KnOwLeDgE~dog he got the hughest tools/
that'll make the hughest dudes cop a bitch attitude// and speakin of you- i don't mean to be rude/ but, i'll twist ya' face just like a "Rubics Cube"// ayo' my aptitude is known to bend spoons/ I'll point sharp objects at ya' body and walk through the "exit wounds"// ~KnOwLeDgE~ bold enuf to walk in ya room/ and destroy the foundation of ya house usin' a "Sonic Boom"// I carry weapons of mass destruction that's un-tuckable/ so i gotta wear black trench coats like the "UNTOUCHABLES"// Direkt-Threat catch a direct tek to his neck/ after i push his legs perpendicular to his fuckin' chest// i teach this fag emcee some Rapbattle Etiquette/ after i dismantle his body usin' verbs, nouns and a few predicucts// ~Vast~Knowledge~ not loosin' this battle/ my mind frame so deep that when i speak the rictor scale shake, shiver, and rattle// "Direkt" catches "Erekt" peni between his teeth/ he one of them "Anti-Heteresexual Emcee's"// and i could let you borrow my style to use against me/ and you'd still get ya' ass killed in "VVV"// I'ma verbal mercenary wit enuf artillery to make you drop a kidney/ you must be kiddin' me~you beatin' this Emcee~it's like i'm throwin' pitches to some sandlot kids when i belong in the major leagues// my verbal styles decimate ya'll/ detonate on all~leavin ya' neck and chest "Direkt-ly" next to ya balls// ~KnOwLeDgE~ rhymes will shatter fault lines inside ya' mind/ and crack ya frame untill you shake and convulse from a brain quake// i make ya vein shake~you feel like ya' heart was ripped from ya' chest and stepped on after it fell// i send consecutive infections to ya' body until you form advance "sickle cell"// starin' in my eyes is like lookin at death/ cuz just for fun i'll staple ya' hands to ears and beat your ass cus you act deaf// continuiosly speakin'~leavin' ya body covered wit' steel/ until you squeal` like you just recieved an anal "Papsmire" ~VaSt~KnOwLeDgE~ |
vast had better punches and meta's . in that prespective he getz my vote. but that wz a long ass vs.
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ohk this is sad..
direkt threat, had FAR superior PUNCHES and WORDPLAY. his ish, was definetly harder hitting. pz |
yo my vote goes to direkt cause 1. i was likin his verse a whole lot more ten vast but vast came pretty ill wit his verse but i like direkts punches so vote goes to direkt
yo could u guyz vote on my battle wit dark skyz thanx |
Uppin...
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Pre-school kids have votes more self-explaintory than this shit,fuck you're voite doesn't count unless you explain how he won and back it up...... |
Uppin...
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shake something
2-1 him
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vote= direkt
way better wordplay, way harder punchs... RHyme scheme was iight, vocab was ok.. took it with his metas tho Quote:
was feelin that line one |
3-1, Uppin...
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Both good battles,but without a doubt Direkt took this,he was more DIREKT with his punches and had way less fillers.Followed with better flow and multis....For example
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Now take a look at Vasts opener Quote:
too many fillers,no real hard punches in their... Now here is Direkts next few bars Quote:
Look at his first line,awesome wordplay right their,and the second line is hot......plus he has a lot of multies.. see how raw rhymes with saw and obse with see,and that works with real,and blah with saw and so on....good muties.. and hard punches,the third line in their is the best punch out of the battle in my opinon... now lets take a look at Vasts Quote:
the first punch was good,next one is a pretty good filler,third punch was real good,next was a filler leading up to another filler/punch..... those were good,just too many fillers,the flow was nice,but it wasn't like Direkts,he had the multies to ease the reader from line to line to give a better flow Now to skip past the rest and look at the closing lines Quote:
The first line was a decent punch,the follow up wasn't to strong,and the finisher was a pretty good closing...... It didn't have the multies like the other lines,but was a pretty good closing Quote:
So therefore My vote is for Direkt Threat who I found had better flow,more multies,less fillers,harder punches,and better metaphors vote=Direkt Threat This was a good battle but Direkt came out better |
4-1...Uppin!
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Uppin this for the last! One more vote, c'mon people!
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ok....im not sure what you guys are goin to...but direkt already has 3 and vast gots none....didnt you read konfidentials reply?.....the only vote you got doesnt count....so right now its 3-0.......and my vote goes to direkt.....when i saw one of his replys in another thread....it said "rb vet comin back to reign" or something like that....i was like "shut the fuck up"...but this guy is good......heres my vote breakdown.....vast verse was way too fuckin long.....i did like the line "twist ya face like a rubics cube" that was hott.....but i mos def dug direkt flow.....nice wordplay.....all around hotness... vast was decent...but not good enough....vote for direkt threat.....one
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oops...my bad....didnt see the other page....lol....so that was the decidin vote......and i guess the vote you got did count (vast)....my bad......5-1.....its a wrap.....one.....
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Aight, good battle, till next time, one.
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