verbal vision vs warrior
 

Battle Rules:

3 bars 6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-22-04 at 05:54 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Verbal Vision has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 04:56 PM.

Aight....Didnt wanna do this But.....

Ima -Propel- a Golden -Shell- right thru his Tissue//
Breaking this Bitch's Ego & Confidence simply aint a Issue//

Ya name Is Mismatched "Warrior" Don't Fit Ya style//
Leave ya -Distraught- Emotions -Wrought- Sculpted in Denial//

Bitch's Rhymes Aint Complex They just Lack Interaction//
Even if ya Spat ya best Ya skills Dont even Equal a fraction//
Done Wit this Hoe......

warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 05:25 PM.

here comes ya first loss stupid

hey faggit listen up.............if u fuckin win its luck/
i should be known as pepper spray the way im fuckin Vision up/

fuck dis wack herb that lacks words he'll neva get his raps heard/
my respect list could resemble the dictionary and i still wouldnt adverb(add verb)/

this dude talked shit and accepted the nattle like he want-to-lose/
Verbal Vision could put his initials together and still wouldnt get a W/(VV)

This was feedback posted for warrior
 

checkin the poll? lol hahahha .........nice punches by tha way......

uppin ............................................

Voted For: Verbal Vision

Verbal..... you have this,......

I like your flow.... I cna really understand your flow as i read along.... Your rhymes are really Nice too....

Your punches were pretty good.... you could have came harder with some of them...... but i still liked em... Good job with them.....

Your structuer was pretty sweet ..... i dont think any were too short or too long.... I like it....

You wordplay........ I like it.... I had to look up Distraught... lol ... I am really feelin the wordplay.....

warrior.....

I liked... your punches a little but verbal cam e harder here.....

Your flow was alright .... you and Verbal were the same here...

U didnt really like your structure.... some of your linez were streched......

Over all...... Verbal got this right here.......

Peace~~~~...

Return tha fava~~~

thnx for the vote *cough*bullshit*cough *cough*dickrider*cough* dammn i must have a cold 1-0 your way

No need to get Annoyed for a Honest Vote Blud......If u cant take 1 vote against u U shouldnt be Doin dis Game.....any ways Uppin for this peeps.....

Voted For: warrior

Here to amke your voting easier.....

fuck dis wack herb that lacks words he'll neva get his raps heard/
my respect list could resemble the dictionary and i still wouldnt adverb
^^Best line great wordplay and multis for a short verse. The persoannals was pretty ill. I'm really impressed with this drop.
8/10

Bitch's Rhymes Aint Complex They just Lack Interaction//
Even if ya Spat ya best Ya skills Dont even Equal a fraction//
^^Best line. No wordplay, some perrsoanls i guess. Better structure n flow but not by much. Other tahn that not too great.
6/10

Yeah not bad for a short battle

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Voted For: Verbal Vision

right now this one was a hard one i looked at it and i have read the raps 3 times each and i couldnt come to a disision but finaly i have
v.v your vocab was exelent and u had a good structure and some hard hitting punches flow was nice and easy to read
all togather 5 out of 6 2 for vocab 1 for structure and 2 for punches

warrior you had a good structure and quite good punches although i thought they never hit as hard witch i think gave v.v. the win flow was good and structure was good all in all i think ild give u 4 and a half out ov 6 1 for for structure 2 for vocab and 1 and a half for punches sorry dawg i voted as fairly as i could i hope you understand

aight thnx for the vote son uppin 2-1 ur way..........

Voted For: Verbal Vision

disgoes to vv but only just..his vocab killed warrior..btw good spit by warrior for a nooby....evry area was tied except
warrior-7/10
VV-7.5/10
vocab which vv got...
Structure/Tied
Punches/Tied
Vocab/VV
Flow/Tied
Vote/VV but only just.....
return da votr

Thanks Homie.....^ Uppin for votes Please.........

Voted For: warrior

v/warrior both verses were pretty good but warriors punches hit harder then V.V. and i think warrior had betta wordplay but V.V. u got him on vocab which i liked but i just think warrior took this one. just returnin the favor to both of u thnx for the votes on my battle it was taken foreva to close lol

Voted For: warrior

verbal vision: hmmm... Your punches were weak... they had no hit.. nice vocab... fine flow... but BAD punches...

warrior: I think ya closer won this for ya... nice line. But fix up ya structure... flow was aight... Ya gotta get a deeper vocab.. the other two lines didnt hit hard as the closer, but they were decent..

Voted For: Verbal Vision

vv got dis 1 coz his vocab beat warrior...
warrior u had wicked punches but vv countered dem wif vocab..ur structure was a bit off
vv-good flow and sturcuture and ur flow was just gd but you vocab beat him even tho warrior had better punches
my vote goez to vv noh hate

Voted For: Verbal Vision

Ok warrior u droped a hott verse for nooby..ill giv ya dat..Punches hit harder...and good wittiness...structure wasnt vry gd...flow waz aight suppose..
verbalvision ur verse was more complex thats why u got dis in my eyes...vocab u beat him wit the complexion of ya words-structure was better and ya flow was a lil better but i cant believe how close this was...warrior u gonna be dopewhen u elevate..mayne dont let this bring u down..as for vv stop battling noobys!!!
Vote=Vv only just sorry warrior!