warrior vs *murkage*
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-25-04 at 07:56 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

*murkage* has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 07:57 PM.

warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 07:58 PM.

fags like you get shitted on by the Supreme Ballers
Ima Playa hata got more head than abes face on $20 dollars
Yo warrior wil get Shell shocked-Aim locked-Gonna get his Dome rocked
soon as you step out side-you hear me fully fledged shotgun get cocked
Lyrically beat ya wit any instrument available-includin my shoe-
Bitch no one could smell ya flows even if u brought the canines thru
your finnished-your done with uve been lyrikly injected with flu
this is just a taste of me-no wonder yo mam rejected you***


(*** = at birth)

upinnnnn
just w8in 4 this lil bitch 2 cum back @ me with a lame ass verse that im gonna print out and use as toilet paper :thefinger:

cmon biyotch r u scared hahahaha uppppiiiinnn ppl

jus a lil somtin to see wut u workin wit

battlein me herbs-get-scared ill rip ya words-apart/
dis lame needs to fix his name......and change "murk"-to-"garb"/(garbage)

murkage-is-a-homo im hurtin-kids-wit-no-hope/
u prolly had a betta chance of winnin if u no-showed/

see now im talkin crazy cause frankly u had no chance-at-all/
cause i could smell "defeat" in the air like u standin on ya hands-to-walk/

dis mans-all-talk and if he said somtin hot i prolly said-it-before/
dis battles ova cause "age" aint meet the requirements to be ready-for-"war"/

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Voted For: *murkage*

YOUR FUCKIN BETTER THAN DAT FAG WARRIOR HE SUCKS HIS MUMS CLIT BRUV AND I KNOW FO SHO U AINT GAY AND WARRIOR SUCKS HIS DADS PENIS-U FUCKIN FISH HOECAKE WHAT U GONNA DO?

Vote disqualified for Cheating.

lol i knew that u cheated to get votes in your own battle but dammn this is a freindly battle between me and murkage um can u go cheat somewhere else

Voted For: *murkage*

FUCK WARRIOR MURKAGES BETTER WARRIOR IS A PUFF GO FUCK YA DADDY

Vote disqualified for Cheating.

Voted For: *murkage*

JUST FUCKIN SPECTACULUAR GOOD ONE MATEY WARRIOR U GAY FUCK FACE U RAPED YA DAD!

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who the fuck was that lol
oi if uve got problems with other people then dont come on hear coz this battle might b stopped now man u fool i dont care that was your own fault and i dont think this should b stopped

oh yea i forgot to say snap-shot so it snap-shot, verbal vision, pitt-ball, mr.freeze, and spectre lol all u need is one more and u can KO anyone fuckin cheater

Voted For: *murkage*

U FUCKIN MERKED HIM BLUD WAY TO GO WARRIOR YOU GOT RIPPED BY MURKAGE AND VV I WILL FUCKIN RAPE YOUR MUM AND SLIT HER THROAT U LITTLE CUNT....DEN ILL CUT U OPEN

Vote disqualified for Cheating.

dont worry ill jus get these votes removed cause they were all by his gay ass sorry for the inconvenience but the battle will still go on dont worry

nooooooo
 

nope sorry but no can do if you wana get your self into beef with other ppl on hear youve gotta suffer m8 it aint my problem its yours deal with it all i can do is watch btw who eva is doing this stupidness can you please stop

This was feedback posted for *murkage*
 

Gay Gay Gay Is All I Can Say To Warrior He Really Sucks Dick

Voted For: warrior

ok first of murk you bit fabulous hard core with this line

"Bitch no one could smell ya flows even if u brought the canines thru"
fabulous didnt say anything about smellin flows but in his new single "breathe" off his new album "real talk" he specifically says
"Like they say Wine do
Cops couldn't smell me if you brought the canines through"
hear is a link to az lyrics if ya'll wanna check it out.
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/fabolous/breathe.html
the n murk you go off about your shoe bein an instrument no sense what so ever.

i dont like how war used "garb" but he had clean lines so did murk, hits for both werent to hard but war gets this.
oh and murk you might wanna read the rules next time before you lay a verse down. no bitin.

Voted For: warrior

warrior i was doubtin you cuz of the corny name but you brought it harder better structure better vocab and funny i liked the walk on your hands line

return the fav

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Voted For: *murkage*

murkage got this, far better puns, the flow n bars connected better too
warrior, ya verse was aight, finisher wasnt hard hittin at all, pretty deceny opener tho, but ya structure is whack as hell, still it was a decent battle but murkage got my vote

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This was feedback posted for warrior
 

cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here!

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Voted For: warrior

hmmm not dat great of a battle
but let's see...
i gotta say warrior took dat one
because
of a nice openin verse
wordplay dope
punchlinez good they was hitten better then Murkage
over all flow was good
keep at it warrior

no hate on this vote

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up up and away.

Voted For: warrior

*murkage*: ummm....1st bar was a self-glorification line and not a good starter completely wack. 2nd bar was not all that great not really feeling the gun lines at all. 3rd= decent. 4th bar was like ummm.... a filler not great pretty played at all points both lines....overall: 3/10 blah i'm harsh what can i say

warrior: 1st bar was ish...nah mean pretty played changing peeps name like that atleast. 2nd= was whack as hell i don't want to be rude or anything i'm just saying it as it is. 3rd bar ummm....was probably your best line i was liking it a bit....final was ummm filler like...overall: 5/10

vote: warrior

Voted For: *murkage*

murkage gets my vote for more punchlines and a better vocabulary. keep elevating warrior and up your vocabulary and maybe you will be worth something.NO HATE.just an honest vote.return tha favor.
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Voted For: warrior

Breakdown.
murkage:
fags like you get shitted on by the Supreme Ballers
Ima Playa hata got more head than abes face on $20 dollars
^weak opener, very played and unoriginal.
Yo warrior wil get Shell shocked-Aim locked-Gonna get his Dome rocked
soon as you step out side-you hear me fully fledged shotgun get cocked
^ ok second line, no personal or hard punch, just a filler line.
Lyrically beat ya wit any instrument available-includin my shoe-
Bitch no one could smell ya flows even if u brought the canines thru
^this bar was probly the best in your verse but still weak.
your finnished-your done with uve been lyrikly injected with flu
this is just a taste of me-no wonder yo mam rejected you***
^shit closer, weak, played and unoriginal.
murkage work on your punches and try to work on throwing personals in your verse.

warrior:
battlein me herbs-get-scared ill rip ya words-apart/
dis lame needs to fix his name......and change "murk"-to-"garb"/(garbage)
^good opener, nice personal, not too original of a concept but it works.

murkage-is-a-homo im hurtin-kids-wit-no-hope/
u prolly had a betta chance of winnin if u no-showed/
^lol this line made me line, good punch but the second line has been used often but its still really dope.
see now im talkin crazy cause frankly u had no chance-at-all/
cause i could smell "defeat" in the air like u standin on ya hands-to-walk/
^weakest line in your verse but decent nonetheless.
dis mans-all-talk and if he said somtin hot i prolly said-it-before/
dis battles ova cause "age" aint meet the requirements to be ready-for-"war"/
^Good punch and closer your verse was definatly better.

Overall warrior takes this for having a better solid verse.murkage you know what you need to work on and I hope you will achieve thatin the future.

V/Warrior.
return the fav.

Voted For: warrior

battlein me herbs-get-scared ill rip ya words-apart/
dis lame needs to fix his name......and change "murk"-to-"garb"/(garbage)
^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT NICE WORDPLAY GOOD PUNCH

murkage-is-a-homo im hurtin-kids-wit-no-hope/
u prolly had a betta chance of winnin if u no-showed/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK PUNCH DONT STRETCH CHA LINES THAT MUCH


see now im talkin crazy cause frankly u had no chance-at-all/
cause i could smell "defeat" in the air like u standin on ya hands-to-walk/
^^^^^^^^^^^^ ALRIGHT GOOD PUNCH CREATIVITY THERE


dis mans-all-talk and if he said somtin hot i prolly said-it-before/
dis battles ova cause "age" aint meet the requirements to be ready-for-"war"/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIGHT NICE CLOSA GOOD PUNCH



WARRIOR- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES WORDPLAYS AND WORK ON YA FLOW MAYNE


fags like you get shitted on by the Supreme Ballers
Ima Playa hata got more head than abes face on $20 dollars
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ EH DOESNT MAKE SENSE

Yo warrior wil get Shell shocked-Aim locked-Gonna get his Dome rocked
soon as you step out side-you hear me fully fledged shotgun get cocked
^^^^^^^^^^^ TOO BASIC AND PLAYED


Lyrically beat ya wit any instrument available-includin my shoe-
Bitch no one could smell ya flows even if u brought the canines thru
^^^^^^^^^^^^ PUNCH 'OK' FLOW


your finnished-your done with uve been lyrikly injected with flu
this is just a taste of me-no wonder yo mam rejected you***
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ EH NOT AN GOOD CLOSA


MURKAGE- "OK" YA VERSE WAS TOO BASIC NOT AN GOOD PUNCHES "OK" FLOW BUT CHA PUNCHES KINDA LACKED AND BAISC

OVERALL= WARRIOR GETS MY VOTE CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW

WARRIOR- HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW DA PUNCHES JUST EDGE DA BATTLE TO GET MY VOTE PLUS DA WORDPLAY


MURKAGE- YA VERSE KINDA LACKED NOT AN GOOD ONE WORK ON CREATING MORE PUNCHES MAKE DEM HARDER USE PERSONALS AND WORDPLAY