~DESTINY~ vs illmatico
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 linez
No Recycling
No Biting

Lets go...

3-0 = KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-22-04 at 10:55 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

~DESTINY~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 10:26 PM.

illmatico has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 10:46 PM.

illmatico, Take you to a gas station, let my baot row, Let my anger go ,
Listen to my barz take notes on my flow, they better than you know!
I'll merk your ass one way or another, So could my lil bother,
as soon as I win this battle, I be merkin your mother~
Cover her with buter, Make you jelous, Add some relish,
I merk you worse then your mom on ya bat,When shes finished,
You've been sonned by a real rapper instead of darth vaders son,
If you think you like Mike watts, Then I'v just begun, Your about to get runned.
If you think you godlike, think again, while your funking agian,
Should i write thie fuck werse for you in the font size 10?

ha ha... MERKED~

This guy is "off topic," "in the wrong thread," man i wonder why he boasts
Just by definition this cats whole verse is a "freepost"...
You shouldn't let men play with your balls... we need a "straight plan for the gay man"
Didnt ya pops tell you never leave yo ~Destiny~ in another man's hands?
You gettin overshadowed- this "child's" skills could cheaply go for auction
but even "beyonce's ass" couldn't fill the seats in yo audience
If this was a tag... I'd have yo "fate" and you and P.M. "Hope"
You gonna need an Ace up yo sleeve cuz yo whole rap is a joke
Its a "fortune" "gamble"- "destiny's child" must be a "naughty girl..." to play my game
You gotta get d/r votes from "kelly and michelle" to "say your name"

ummm for explanations...
you should get it all...
destiny's child... HOPE is a girl on RV...

this made no sense... :huh:

Ok ... Lets get some votes on this!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I nkow ... it sucked... Oh well..

THAT MAE NO SENSE!!!

IT SUCKED!~

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^^^ well... lets let the votes do the talkin... im lookin for a K-O

Voted For: ~DESTINY~

DESTINY i know im in a battle with you as we speak but i do think u got this one better structure not by a lot but it was better and you had harder punches flow was great and vocab was easy to read sorry illmatico keep workin on you punches and srtucture and lay out more neatly

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Thank you.........

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Voted For: ~DESTINY~

Yeah... I think Destiny won this....

He had better flow... nice wordplay and the wordplay was easy to understand,

I like your punches... they are creative..... And your structure is really good ... i like it......

Ill... you were really good too ... but Destiny got this... he was just a lil better in alomost everything....

Paece~~

Return tha fava~~~

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This was feedback posted for illmatico
 

cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here!

Voted For: illmatico

aight well this wasnt even a close battle...

Illmatico~ nice way to use his name and destinys child as a personal... i liked your verse and your punches because they just hit harder... 8/10

Destiny~your verse was just too basic for me... weak punches, bad structure (it kept changing actually), you need to get more personal and stay consistent and you'll do better 6/10

v/illmatico

This was feedback posted for illmatico
 

i am definately not postin feedback... i jsut wanna se the rest of the votes

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^^ garbage as hell and he knows it... d/r votes...

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Voted For: illmatico

v/ illmatico
destiny you were all over the place with your topics, some of them didnt make sense at all to me, you also really lacked on the punches and illmatico had some nice personals to throw at you, so im givin this to illmatico

Voted For: illmatico

LilMatico
Better Flow Good WOrdPlay Saw Some Good SHit Punchlines Was Hitting Came Hard Structure Was Decent Vocabulary Was Cool Came At It Good Fam Big Ups

Destiny
Pretty Good Not Good Nuff Bro Stay On Ya Level

Voted For: illmatico

l0l vote goes to illmatico

Relish- What were you thinking?

"Cover her with buter, Make you jelous, Add some relish,
I merk you worse then your mom on ya bat,When shes finished,"
-Your rhyme was off and on.....Would go and freeze up go and freeze...which never got me into the flow. Seemed like you just wanted things to rhyme didnt care about the quality of your writing.

Illmatic- The flow wasnt sick, but I felt it more the above. The punches were better and not as preschool. Still the quality was not that great. BUt since I have to vote it goes to you ill.

Voted For: ~DESTINY~

u suck nef i cant tell u enuff but if u wanna battle wuz good cuz i'll do u worse den he jus did u

Voted For: illmatico

Ack, this battle was awful. The flow was off in both verses, work on syllable count- both of you. But my vote goes to Ill because he came slightly harder. I saw more personals and a hint at wordplay and multis.

But, whateva.

Peep my dead battle. :(