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B.L.A. vs Kluez07
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6-10 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting check in in 30 minutes verse due in 24 hrs. Don't No Show BLA! Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-23-04 at 02:03 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
B.L.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 01:34 AM.
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Kluez07 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 01:48 AM.
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This pussy right here is tryin to be cool,but all his bitch ass is doin is lookin like a fool.You nedd to drop out and quit bcuz all ur freestyles sound like shit.Know i'm out now its ur turn to run ur mouth i'm a little wigga from the south.
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your wordplay's a mystery,even with the klues you sending me
your future on RV holds the wins that SINNER SEES!!!!!!!!! you collect energey,still you couldn't GENERATE a Phrase seven is a lucky number, but the zero left the GREAT drained I won't bte tounges to say,like cournal mustard your front's defaced like the game,your exit will leave a trace,see a happy face you resemble a room of heithen's..your rap is lacking praise explination is unnececery either get it or you don't... BLA! |
and PS.
I aint a newb basher he PM'd me and calledME out that is all |
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Voted For: B.L.A.
kluez07: it looked like you were writing a mini version of a paragraph and lines weren't effective dued to the played concepts and everything else.................... b.l.a: okay verse in my great opiniated mind:) but you had some self-glorification i think............... lines=much more effective then his also nuff said! vote: B.L.A. |
uppin for votessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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This was feedback posted for B.L.A.
cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here!
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uppin fo soe muthafukn votes! pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaase
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This was feedback posted for Kluez07
YOU SUCK NOOB!!!!!!!!!!!!1........Nuff Said.......
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Voted For: B.L.A.
lmao okay... if i just said.. b.l.a won. would kluez even complain? i doubt it.... but anyway, b.l.a's flow was well... it was a flow.. it was an actual verse, that rhymed.... kluez, watever u were thinkin when u dropped this verse, dont do it again... okay? punches, personals, flow, vocab, structure, well just everythin was better from B.L.A... Merikage in the highest orderd ........nuff said. b.l.a could u return the favor in my sig? thanx....... |
Voted For: B.L.A.
This pussy right here is tryin to be cool,but all his bitch ass is doin is lookin like a fool.You nedd to drop out and quit bcuz all ur freestyles sound like shit.Know i'm out now its ur turn to run ur mouth i'm a little wigga from the south. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ *AHEM* U DIDNT HAD NO FLOW NOR GOOD PUNCHES NOR HAD PERSONALS IAM SORRY MAYNE BUT YA VERSE WAS WACK~!!!!!!! ELEVATE ON STRUTURE,PUNCHES,FLOW,USING PERSONALS,USING HARDER PUNCHES, I MEAN EVERYTHING "OK" your wordplay's a mystery,even with the klues you sending me your future on RV holds the wins that SINNER SEES!!!!!!!!! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT FIX YA STRUTURE A LIL "OK" LINES ARE STRETCH MESSING UP DA FLOW BUT GOOD PUNCH you collect energey,still you couldn't GENERATE a Phrase seven is a lucky number, but the zero left the GREAT drained I won't bte tounges to say,like cournal mustard your front's defaced ^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD WORDPLAYS,GOOD PUNCHES,STILL WORK ON YA STRUTURE ITS MESSING UP DA FLOW BUT EITHER-WAY U HAD AN PUNCH like the game,your exit will leave a trace,see a happy face you resemble a room of heithen's..your rap is lacking praise ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WOW GOOD CLOSA NICE PUNCH AND FINALLY U GOT STRUTURE NICE FLOWING IN DIS PART OVERALL=B.L.A GOT DIS HANDS DOWN CAUSE KLUEZ CAME VERY WEAK,NO PUNCHES, NO FLOW,NO NOTHING KLUEZ-WORK ON EVERYTHING "OK" PUNCHES,FLOW,PERSONALS,WORDPLAYS,I MEAN EVERYTHING CAUSE IN DIS BATTEL U JUST CAME WACK AND NOT AN VERY GOOD VERSE,,,,,,,SO I VOTED FOR B.L.A CAUSE HE HAD PUNCHES AND SOME BAD FLOW,,,AND STRUTURE,BUT EITHER WAY HE PICKED UP DA WIN WITH THA PUNCHES ~~~~~~~~~WORD |
uppin for votes please
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damn can dy please vote
geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesh |
Voted For: B.L.A.
aight, BLA, ya verse wasnt that great...when i first looked at it, i was like wtf? but then i looked at the other cat's 'verse'...Klue, wtf was that?! ya verse was jus a few sentences put together...u need to elevate in every aspect....no hate, but u really need some work...that was prolly the most basic verse i've ever seen... V/ BLA easy... |
Voted For: B.L.A.
Kluez: the stucture was pretty off man...try working that out..flow i guess...weak punches damn thats weak..get some elevation and tey harder your vocabulary was pretty weak to... InDepth: good verse ive seen better form you but i guess you didnt need to try lol...good punches...came out pretty damn hard dawg...good vocabulary damn came hard... VOTE: InDepth |
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