~DESTINY~ vs *murkage*
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-26-04 at 07:41 AM

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*murkage* has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 07:42 AM.

yo- you wana battle me you must b on crack
my lyrical rorce will leave you wiv a snapped back

leave you in a wheelchair with a destroyed spin
dont even bother spittin back this batle is mine

you might have a crew - ive got an army barracks
bring your boyz ill leave em sliced up in black sacks

your lyricks are week - ill chew em up like wrigglys
ill leave you beheaded - you family distraught like ken bigleys

~DESTINY~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 11:39 AM.

*Pulls down Murkages Pants as he walks on stage*

Hey mr.murk, Iwil btich slap that smrek off ya face,
I will tangle your style worse my avirex shoelace,
I will sleep on you, diss on you take a huge shit onyou,
And whenyou say IAMTHEKING. I will say I AM TOO
I will help you a littlebit, Start off with the wordshit,
Cuz thats all you madeof, andwhen you blow you dontspitt,
I busted you for stealing tampons andsuch at KMart,
Well in rap, I am way higher on the "Flow" Chart.

ha ha.... fuck you!!

How Original
 

I WILL -BLAH BLAH BLAH
I WILL -BLAH BLAH BLAH
I WILL
I WILL

IS THAT ALL U CAN SAY I MUST ADMIT IT STARTED GOOD BUT THERE IS TOO MANY SENTANCES BEGINNING WITH I WILL

FUCK YOU 2 HOMI YOUR BORING :thefinger

Lol ha ha ha ........

Fuck you 3 home slice~

Lets get some votes for this....

May the best man lose~

lol .... ha ha

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Voted For: ~DESTINY~

Lol.... I like the beginnning...... Nice... Destiny got this one.. he had better flow and better structure... you both tied in the punches ......

Destiny ... I like your ending ha ha....

Murkage.. you did pretty good.. I like it .. but destiny came harder...~~~

Peace~~

Yeah He Came Harder Coz Hes A Bigger Wanker Than Me Lol Jokes No H8 M8

Voted For: ~DESTINY~

Destiny - Good spit, you had a good flow and your punches were hitten hard.

Merkage - iight flow, your punches need a little bit of work.

OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to Destiny, better flow.. and harder hitten punches, yo.. merkage work on some better punches and better wordplay.

Vote - Destiny

Thanx for tha vote.... Uppin for votes~~~~

Peace~~~~~

Voted For: ~DESTINY~

Here to clear this bullshit

I busted you for stealing tampons andsuch at KMart,
Well in rap, I am way higher on the "Flow" Chart.
^^^Best line. Sipmple and slightly ont he wack side. Punches were mediocre at best. Flow was ok 4/10

leave you in a wheelchair with a destroyed spin
dont even bother spittin back this batle is mine
^6Best line, and its whackas fuck!!! waste of space and time/ Not worht the spaceo nt he website not a punch in the whole thing. 1/10

One

Thanx for the vote... Uppin for votes~~~

This was feedback posted for *murkage*
 

nice flow, checking polls

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Voted For: *murkage*

wat a pethetik battle man but if i had 2 pick murkage took it man none of u guyz spat punches they were pretty weak,,,,,,,,,,crazy but merkage had flow and strcuture a 7/10 not bad. return the favour wit a vote below for my battles

man wata WACK battle yo destiny battle me later you set the shit up so pethetik

Voted For: *murkage*

this was a weak battle all around but merkage came harder
best line: your lyricks are week - ill chew em up like wrigglys
ill leave you beheaded - you family distraught like ken bigleys
worst:you might have a crew - ive got an army barracks
bring your boyz ill leave em sliced up in black sacks
destiney bad flow choppy aight rhymes n wordplay
worst line line:I will help you a littlebit, Start off with the wordshit,
Cuz thats all you madeof, andwhen you blow you dontspitt
best:I will tangle your style worse my avirex shoelace,
I will sleep on you, diss on you take a huge shit onyou,
elavate

Voted For: ~DESTINY~

this battle was horrible
vote destiny for noy sucking as much as murage

Voted For: *murkage*

~DESTINY~ - Decent flow...punchez weren't very hard hittin...no personalz...didnt see any real multiez...a lil bitta wordplay...

BEST LINE(Z) -
busted you for stealing tampons andsuch at KMart,
Well in rap, I am way higher on the "Flow" Chart.

*murkage* - aite flow decent...punchez weren't hittin hard at all...personalz none...multiez none...wordplay not really...btw i hated dat ken bigley line...dat was just disrespectful...but yeah fuck it...

BEST LINE(Z) -
leave you in a wheelchair with a destroyed spin
dont even bother spittin back this batle is mine

VOTE - Destiny

...aYo...ma bad i meant to vote for destiny...someone get a mod to clean dat up or sumthin...

..... Uppin for votes~~~~~

peace~~~!!~!!~!~!~!~!~!~

Voted For: ~DESTINY~

yo- you wana battle me you must b on crack
my lyrical rorce will leave you wiv a snapped back
^^^^^^^^^^ ERM TOO BASIC MAYNE ELEVATE USING CREATIVE PUNCHES


leave you in a wheelchair with a destroyed spin
dont even bother spittin back this batle is mine
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DIDNT RHYMED MINE&SPIN NOT AN GOOD FLOW PLUZ DA PUNCH DIDNT CONNECTED

you might have a crew - ive got an army barracks
bring your boyz ill leave em sliced up in black sacks

^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM "OK" PUNCH NOT DAT GOOD BUT OK PUNCH

your lyricks are week - ill chew em up like wrigglys
ill leave you beheaded - you family distraught like ken bigleys
^^^^^^^^^^ LINES A LIL STRETCH MESSING UP DA FLOW AND DA CLOSA WAS "OK" NOT DAT GOOD BUT ITS COOL \






MURKAGE-HE CAME A LIL WEAK WIT DEM PUNCHES MADE AN "OK" PUNCHES VERY WASNT HARD HITTIN GOOD FLOW,,,,USE CREATIVE PUNCHES NEXT TIME AND PERSONALS










Hey mr.murk, Iwil btich slap that smrek off ya face,
I will tangle your style worse my avirex shoelace,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM PUNCH HARDER


I will sleep on you, diss on you take a huge shit onyou,
And whenyou say IAMTHEKING. I will say I AM TOO
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM WACK DONT LIKE DA PUNCH AND TOO BASIC


I will help you a littlebit, Start off with the wordshit,
Cuz thats all you madeof, andwhen you blow you dontspitt,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DIDNT MAKE SENSE AND PLUS WASNT AN GOOD PUNCH GOOD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES IS LACKING



I busted you for stealing tampons andsuch at KMart,
Well in rap, I am way higher on the "Flow" Chart.

^^^^^^^^^^^^ "oK" GOOD CLOSA





DESTINY-YA VERSE WAS KINDA WACK NOT AN GOOD PUNCHES WERE HITTIN IT AND PLUS IT DIDNT MAKE SENSE NOR CONNECTED BUT GOOD FLOW THOUGH

OVERALL= I HAVE TO GO WITH DESTINY WITH THIS ONE SHE CAME WITH A LIL HARDER FLOW AND GOOD STRUTURE UM WORK ON PUNCHES DESTINY DIDNT REALLY CONNECTED IN DIS PART BUT U NEED TO WORK ON THAT


MURKAGE-U HAD AN "OK" VERSE BUT DA FLOW YOU JUST LOST POINTS ON THAT

BOTH OF U HAD LACK OF PUNCHES,,,,,ERM PLAYED OUT

SO I HAD TO GO WITH FLOW AND

DESTINY WON THAT ROUND

~PEACE~