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Dead Aim vs Lil Kid
Battle Rules:
6 Lines (3 bars) No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-23-04 at 10:48 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Dead Aim has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 10:00 AM.
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Yo Yo Yo Check it...........................
Lil Kid's Still Refers to His Pre-school days at his cresh// My rhymes upon Impact Tears and Ravages ya Flesh// Ya Deceased-Terminated Prematurely Like an Abortion// Surprise Ambush Wit my 0-0 record didnt have time for a caution// The way Ive Merked This dude he'll b trippin and Regurgitatin His Food// This Battle was over before it begun It was jus easy to Conclude// Very Weak Verse..but whatever.....G'Luck |
lil kid has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 10:14 AM.
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...aite lez just kep sumthin up...aYo...
...I Hurt-Foolz...so i'l have you "Covered Wit Shellz" likez "Turtlez"... ...I laugh when I See-You-Spit...have you "Stutterin" like your from "G-Unit"!...lol... ...Beat me? You On-Jointz?...have ya "Sit On Knivez" just so you "On-Point"!... ...This guyz soft like Furry-Kittenz...i'ma leave "Dead Aim" wit "Blurry-Vision!"... ...I'll Smack-Ya-Crew...i'm still young but i've never met anybody as Wack-As-You!... ...You got Lead-Mayne?...well i'ma "Break Ya Gunz" so ya really "Dead-Aim!"... |
Voted For: lil kid
Lil Kid - Even though none of your lines rhymed.. you still had some good wordplay in there and punches. Best Line - ...I Hurt-Foolz...so i'l have you "Covered Wit Shellz" likez "Turtlez"... ...I laugh when I See-You-Spit...have you "Stutterin" like your from "G-Unit"! Worst Line - NONE Dead Aim - Good verse man, your flow was iight.. and your punches were ok. Best Line - Ya Deceased-Terminated Prematurely Like an Abortion// Surprise Ambush Wit my 0-0 record didnt have time for a caution// Worst Line - Lil Kid's Still Refers to His Pre-school days at his cresh// My rhymes upon Impact Tears and Ravages ya Flesh// OVERALL - I gotta give this battle.. to lil kid, I liked his verse more.. his flowed better.. and the punches were hitten harder. Dead your shit was to simple.. you had one good bar in there.. work on some punches/personals. Vote - Lil Kid |
...thanx...btw it did actually rhyme...if you split up each line...cuz da rhymez are IN da linez if you get me...but yeah thx 4 votin...
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uppin............................................. .
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Voted For: lil kid
Back for your voting pleasure. Ya Deceased-Terminated Prematurely Like an Abortion// Surprise Ambush Wit my 0-0 record didnt have time for a caution// ^^Only good line. The rest of it was some wahck shit with no persoanls, metas, or sanity. Wack as hell. Thank jesus it was short. 4/10 You got Lead-Mayne?...well i'ma "Break Ya Gunz" so ya really "Dead-Aim!"...^^Best closer. verse had metas n wordplay. Personals were okay. there was onyl one but more than above. 6/10 Ayo not bad for a short one. One |
Voted For: lil kid
lilkid got this,,,,, his verse was better al round i think....Your flaw was really nice .. Ilike it 8/10 Dead aim...you wree alright.,...somealright punches and yeah... ill give tyou a 6/10 Return tha fava in my sg~~~ |
This was feedback posted for Dead Aim
cant vote!! not enough posts, but it was a tight battle
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...aite yo thanx for da votez...i'ma return da favour soon cuz i gotta go out right now...uppin...
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Voted For: lil kid
lil kid he got my vote cuzz he came harder good punches line was on target just coming good shit kid was on it like wet paint good structure not really personals but flow made up for it good flow kid |
...thanx for da vote...aite we just need 1 more...unless u wanna vote for him....
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...i wanna get this done...........................
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...uppin 4 da last time................................
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Voted For: lil kid
Lil Kid's Still Refers to His Pre-school days at his cresh// My rhymes upon Impact Tears and Ravages ya Flesh// ^^^^^^^^^^^^HMM KINDA PLAYED PUNCH GOOD FLOW GOOD STRUTURE BUT IT WAS PLAYED Ya Deceased-Terminated Prematurely Like an Abortion// Surprise Ambush Wit my 0-0 record didnt have time for a caution// LINES A LIL TOOOOO STRETCH BUT IT WASNT AN GOOD PUNCH THOUGH The way Ive Merked This dude he'll b trippin and Regurgitatin His Food// This Battle was over before it begun It was jus easy to Conclude// ^^^^^^^^^^^ YA MESSING UP DA FLOW.LINES A LIL TO STRETCH NOW U HAD AN PUNCH ON THIS BUT IT WASNT HITTING DEAD AIM-YA NEED TO WORK ON PUNCHES IT WASNT HITTING VERY WELL ENOUGH,USE MORE CREATIVE ONES,LINES WAS TOO BASIC I Hurt-Foolz...so i'l have you "Covered Wit Shellz" likez "Turtlez"... ...I laugh when I See-You-Spit...have you "Stutterin" like your from "G-Unit"!...lol... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCH Beat me? You On-Jointz?...have ya "Sit On Knivez" just so you "On-Point"!... ...This guyz soft like Furry-Kittenz...i'ma leave "Dead Aim" wit "Blurry-Vision!"... ...I'll Smack-Ya-Crew...i'm still young but i've never met anybody as Wack-As-You!... ...You got Lead-Mayne?...well i'ma "Break Ya Gunz" so ya really "Dead-Aim!"... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ I SAW NICE MULTI'Z GOOD FLOW GOOD PUNCHES LIL KID-HAD MULTI'Z GOOD PUNCHES GOOD FLOW,,,,,NEEDS TO WORK ON STRUTURE AND VOCAB AND USING PERSONALS OVERALL-LIL KID TAKE DIS HANDS DOWN HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES GOOD FLOW,BUT DA PUNCHES JUST WON DIS CATEGORY DEAD AIM-YA NEED TO WORK ON YA PUNCHES A BIT PLAYED AND TOO BASIC,,,,ELEVATE USING CREATIVE PUNCHES ,,,KEEP DA LINES LENGHT UP,,,,,,,,PLUS USE PERSONALS "OK" WORK ON HARDER PUNCHES BASICALLY ~PEACE~ |
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