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GKillaz05 10-23-04 12:49 PM

..kontroverzey.. vs GKillaz05
 
Battle Rules:

20-25 Lines - If you can last that long
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good Luck..

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-23-04 at 01:19 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 10-23-04 12:50 PM

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 12:50 PM.

K.ontroverz.Y 10-23-04 12:50 PM

20 FUCKIN lines Heyll nawww cuzz..we aint writin books....16 lines...lol

System 10-23-04 12:55 PM

..kontroverzey.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 12:55 PM.

GKillaz05 10-23-04 01:04 PM

Put da gat to ya dome and pull da trigga in a minute...
Leave you wit a hole so BIG - Notorious could jump in it...
You already got merked dawg dats why your crews heaven...
Your like a courner store... records soon gun be 7/11...
First time we clashed...we both battled like some titans...
After that battle was done, to call me out left ya frightened...
Now you think you got SKILLS and a new set of BALLS...
But they stink must have picked em up in a washroom stall...
Beggin me to join your crew - NO... Your-Crews-Lame...
Boo's came so you had to run and get yourself a new name...
Kontroverzey battlin vs me Ima leave ya in a hearse B...
Smokin' this herb like to many times leavin me thirsty...
Tryna be a "G" but even your keyboard dont got the letter...
Change ya name 300 times but ya still wont get any better...
Used to be from NYC - Now your only weapons on X-Box...
Merkin' you faster then the yanks got by the red socks...
See your like Disney... the way your raps are G-Rated...
Seen ya pic now think you and Mike Jackson are related...
Got somethin up ya ass?.. lines stretched out like a thong...
www.whackbattlers.com is where this punk ass kid belongs...

K.ontroverz.Y 10-23-04 01:09 PM

You Beatin me? Nigga Please, Let's get Back to reality...
Have you runnin from Beef like you changed Nationalities...
Spittin' Automatics, Dump Gkillaz Body in the Attic...
Electrifiying Lines'll Shock You, Hair stuck up from static..
20 Lines in 30 minutes, If anything he spit is sick,
......................................then it's pre-written...
In The Herb Column, your takin up the whole space
..............................like fat bitches sitten...
His Dream, Was to be a successful rapper, That didn't work..
The Next Night, i saw him on the, gay men network..
These Nines'll Pop ya Eardrums, But really thats a benifit..
Now You Can't hear the crowd boo, give me credit bitch..
Like Stick Keyboards, each battle, dude talks about the same thing,
How He's a suberbian white man iced-out in bling bling..
But thats all the better reason for me to stick you up..
So You can Kiss "ya ass so long" like pick-up trucks..
Your road to victory, What road to victory all i see is a cliff..
Leave This Kid Rolled Up like Jamaicans and Spliffs..
thirty minutes who would of thought that excuse was bought..
he obvi been writin this verse for the past 2 years,
.........................atleast that's what i thought..
He's been writin this verse for 3 years and still about to lose..
Lasers all over this Bitch, Like Ugly Women and Tattoos
It's Over Nigga, I freestyled this whole thing and imma still win..
The Great Gkillaz was just a myth Like Aliens and Dragons


holy shit i did that whole thing in 15 mins.... 20 lines

Ikynovel 10-23-04 02:01 PM

This was feedback posted for ..kontroverzey..
 
just checking ... the battle... im in Angelz

pz.

GKillaz05 10-23-04 02:58 PM

UPPIN.. lets get some votes on this battle... see if Im "good" enough for this crew.. lol

Dirty Nigga 10-23-04 03:03 PM

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

aight
this was a tight ass battle...
G, ya flow was aight, puns wasnt as hhard as they could have been...
few hard hittin personals
some dope wordplat, wasnt feelin ya finisher, but overrall it was a pretty decent drop....

Kon, ya flow was nice, nice connection of punches, flow was tight, personals hit there spot, that suberian line was dope, for overrall content in the verse, Kon gets my vote...

no hate tho, just tellin it like i see it
could yall return the fave in my sig?
peace

K.ontroverz.Y 10-23-04 04:00 PM

uppin............................................. ..

K.ontroverz.Y 10-23-04 07:05 PM

uppin this shit ya'll ill return da favour............

K.ontroverz.Y 10-23-04 07:57 PM

uppin....................................
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GKillaz05 10-23-04 09:28 PM

votes needed.. I will return the fav.. drop a honest vote

4fil 10-23-04 11:31 PM

This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
 
cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here!

K.ontroverz.Y 10-23-04 11:46 PM

uppin ill return da favour one more gen come on cuzz

GKillaz05 10-24-04 02:53 PM

dont sleep o this.. we need some more votes.....

GKillaz05 10-26-04 07:43 AM

vote on this battle.. drop a link n I will return the fav...

GKillaz05 10-27-04 07:11 PM

UPPIN this battle... lets get some more votes!!!!

K.ontroverz.Y 10-27-04 07:53 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuupiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Ill-Grammatix 10-28-04 08:27 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

You Beatin me? Nigga Please, Let's get Back to reality...
Have you runnin from Beef like you changed Nationalities...

hot ass opener!!!...

Spittin' Automatics, Dump Gkillaz Body in the Attic...
Electrifiying Lines'll Shock You, Hair stuck up from static..

ehh...no real punch

20 Lines in 30 minutes, If anything he spit is sick,
......................................then it's pre-written...
In The Herb Column, your takin up the whole space
..............................like fat bitches sitten...

stretched lines here... flow was off

His Dream, Was to be a successful rapper, That didn't work..
The Next Night, i saw him on the, gay men network..

blah... filler line

These Nines'll Pop ya Eardrums, But really thats a benifit..
Now You Can't hear the crowd boo, give me credit bitch..
Like Stick Keyboards, each battle, dude talks about the same thing,
How He's a suberbian white man iced-out in bling bling..

pointless... let's get some real punches and personals in here

But thats all the better reason for me to stick you up..
So You can Kiss "ya ass so long" like pick-up trucks..

ok ... coulda been worded better

Your road to victory, What road to victory all i see is a cliff..
Leave This Kid Rolled Up like Jamaicans and Spliffs..

ehhh.. not strong enough... but ok

thirty minutes who would of thought that excuse was bought..
he obvi been writin this verse for the past 2 years,
.........................atleast that's what i thought..

stretched... already brought up the 30 minute thing before...

He's been writin this verse for 3 years and still about to lose..
Lasers all over this Bitch, Like Ugly Women and Tattoos
It's Over Nigga, I freestyled this whole thing and imma still win..
The Great Gkillaz was just a myth Like Aliens and Dragons

kinda forced that last bar but the fat lady / tattoos line was funny shyt... overall 6.9/10



Put da gat to ya dome and pull da trigga in a minute...
Leave you wit a hole so BIG - Notorious could jump in it...

funny shyt.... good opener

You already got merked dawg dats why your crews heaven...
Your like a courner store... records soon gun be 7/11...

woulda been a dope line if it was worded better

First time we clashed...we both battled like some titans...
After that battle was done, to call me out left ya frightened...
Now you think you got SKILLS and a new set of BALLS...
But they stink must have picked em up in a washroom stall...

lmao... that's some funny shyt... small personal thrown in about last battle

Beggin me to join your crew - NO... Your-Crews-Lame...
Boo's came so you had to run and get yourself a new name...

nice!!! personal with a punch

Kontroverzey battlin vs me Ima leave ya in a hearse B...
Smokin' this herb like to many times leavin me thirsty...

boooo at this line

Tryna be a "G" but even your keyboard dont got the letter...
Change ya name 300 times but ya still wont get any better...

already used the name change line...

Used to be from NYC - Now your only weapons on X-Box...
Merkin' you faster then the yanks got by the red socks...
See your like Disney... the way your raps are G-Rated...
Seen ya pic now think you and Mike Jackson are related...

seems filler

Got somethin up ya ass?.. lines stretched out like a thong...
www.whackbattlers.com is where this punk ass kid belongs...

closer shoulda ended stronger but it was ok

overall 7.4/10

this was a pretty close battle considering... both had moments where they shined but Kon stumbled just a bit more than G did... watch the line stretching... try not to repeat the same ideas throughout the battle... ya both did it at least once... but yeah... good battle and keep doing y'all thang

V/GKilla

Ill-Grammatix 10-28-04 08:34 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149439 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=154307
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=154272
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=156972

word...RTF

K.ontroverz.Y 10-28-04 09:35 PM

dawg dont hate too much this was a 10 min drop.......

GKillaz05 10-29-04 04:16 PM

UPPIN... lets keep the votes comin' .....

GKillaz05 10-30-04 12:25 PM

lets get some votes comin... only 2 votes in a week?... hmmm.....

GKillaz05 10-31-04 02:03 PM

votes needed.... lets keep em comin' ..........

GKillaz05 11-01-04 07:00 AM

sick of uppin this, when did this site stop votin for battleS?...

K.ontroverz.Y 11-01-04 07:09 AM

i know this is becoming a throwback thread before it even gets completed LOL

GKillaz05 11-04-04 12:50 PM

This battle needs some votes.. so lets keep em comin

GKillaz05 11-07-04 01:23 AM

UPPIN this FAV.. what we gotta do to get some votes?..

GKillaz05 11-07-04 01:10 PM

UPPIN we need some more votes so lets keep em comin

GKillaz05 11-08-04 12:09 PM

Uppinb>................

GangsStarShit 11-08-04 04:47 PM

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

I think that ..kontroverzey.. got this battle because i feel that ..kontroverzey.. came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt ..kontroverzey.. got it they were used effectifely and were on point G'05 u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to ..kontroverzey.. good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to ..kontroverzey.. and flow and structure i'll give to ..kontroverzey...

V/..kontroverzey.. There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly

Dex 11-09-04 05:02 AM

Voted For: GKillaz05

open: gkilla
close: gkilla. -both closes were not as good as ive read you both do
personals: kontraversy
metas: kontraversy
punches: gkilla
multis: even

win: gkilla

Sorry Kontraversy, these were both good verses. It was close. -Very close but i went wih Gkilla cos i think his punches were a little better.

Kontraversy's best line: "His Dream, Was to be a successful rapper, That didn't work..
The Next Night, i saw him on the, gay men network.."

Gkilla's: "Put da gat to ya dome and pull da trigga in a minute...
Leave you wit a hole so BIG - Notorious could jump in it..."

GKillaz05 11-09-04 12:02 PM

iight ... UPPIN' lets get some more votes on this shit....

Know-Gimix 11-09-04 12:35 PM

Voted For: GKillaz05

Tryna be a "G" but even your keyboard dont got the letter...
Change ya name 300 times but ya still wont get any better...
Used to be from NYC - Now your only weapons on X-Box...
Merkin' you faster then the yanks got by the red socks...
My favorite two bars from you--

You Beatin me? Nigga Please, Let's get Back to reality...
Have you runnin from Beef like you changed Nationalities...
20 Lines in 30 minutes, If anything he spit is sick,
......................................then it's pre-written...
In The Herb Column, your takin up the whole space
..............................like fat bitches sitten...
Favorite 2 bars from Kontroverzy

Thing is, I liked alot of bars from both of you tho... I keep re-readin the verses cuz shit is close. after lookin back over em it just looked to me like G-Killaz was a little more consistent... I wasn't really feelin the gay mens network bar, that give me the credit line was off... I felt like GKillaz didn't really have the weak spots like urs - even though i think both verses were real nice... this is probly the best battle I've seen from two opponents collectively in a while... Vote GKillaz.

Parallel 11-10-04 01:22 PM

This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
 
just checking the polls and shit....cuz me g in the same crew.

GKillaz05 11-10-04 01:29 PM

yo... we need some more votes.. lets keep this comin....

Tha Q 11-11-04 06:42 AM

This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
 
The notorious BIG line was funny...but, he's not the only fat person in the world...kinda filler-ish

First time we clashed...we both battled like some titans...
After that battle was done, to call me out left ya frightened...
Now you think you got SKILLS and a new set of BALLS...
But they stink must have picked em up in a washroom stall...


^^Corny

Merkin' you faster then the yanks got by the red socks...
See your like Disney... the way your raps are G-Rated...
Seen ya pic now think you and Mike Jackson are related...
Got somethin up ya ass?.. lines stretched out like a thong...
www.whackbattlers.com is where this punk ass kid belongs...


^^Sounds like ur talking and not flowing...


Verse was nanny-panny...decent, but needed development and more complexity in punches

Tha Q 11-11-04 06:43 AM

P.S. My vote goes to Kon for flow/better punches and set-ups



1...I always fuck this new voting system thingy up...

GKillaz05 11-11-04 12:25 PM

UPPIN.. we need some more votes - lets keep this goin...


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