VIvID vs Poetikal Panda
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R


Topical:Death (since we're Noobs)10 Line's

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-23-04 at 03:43 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Poetikal Panda has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 02:45 PM.

Vision's Of Serenity & Hope Flutter Softly Away
Light getting More Luminous..Shook ill never see the Light of Day
The Dude Vowed he Would Pay me..Pay me back for My Sin's
Living a Thug's Life Didn't Know which Episode to Begin
Struggling to Grasp the Last Breath that Attempted To Evade
Did'nt see the Bullet's that Originated from the Crip's Escalade
My throat Dryed up like Water Drop's In the Desert Of Sahara
Life & Soul Rapidly Fading Away-Dayum My son Will never Know His Father....
Aight that Shit was Just off the top of Dome...Definely Not my Best shit....G'Luck......

VIvID has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 03:26 PM.

death is certain, it's justified by life
alive or dead still surpassed by strif
your here today your gone the next
lose of words dyin the ultimate test
cold an stiff your lifeless body rests
u afraid to lose the little u have left
ur legacy forever in peoples memory
if there is a god i beg you for mercy
exhault thee, hold your name high
but question why do people die.

Hey Vivid sorry i didnt meet the Line Requirements do u wanna DQ me or just Keep going?It's up to u .......

no its all good im not a topical battler anyways im more the punch's

i say let the battle go on, nice drop by the way

Voted For: Poetikal Panda

Vision's Of Serenity & Hope Flutter Softly Away
Light getting More Luminous..Shook ill never see the Light of Day
The Dude Vowed he Would Pay me..Pay me back for My Sin's
Living a Thug's Life Didn't Know which Episode to Begin
Struggling to Grasp the Last Breath that Attempted To Evade
Did'nt see the Bullet's that Originated from the Crip's Escalade
My throat Dryed up like Water Drop's In the Desert Of Sahara
^^^^^^^^^^^ BEAUTIFUL IMAGINARY GOOD DEEP STUFF HERE MAYNE NICE SHIT


Life & Soul Rapidly Fading Away-Dayum My son Will never Know His Father....
Aight that Shit was Just off the top of Dome...Definely Not my Best shit....G'Luck......
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA MAYNE GOOD PIECE HERE

POETIKAL-U HAD AN BEAUTIFUL IMAGINARY I LIKE YA FLOW GOOD WORD-CHOOSIN



death is certain, it's justified by life
alive or dead still surpassed by strif
your here today your gone the next
lose of words dyin the ultimate test
cold an stiff your lifeless body rests
u afraid to lose the little u have left
ur legacy forever in peoples memory
if there is a god i beg you for mercy
exhault thee, hold your name high
but question why do people die.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ THIS IS NOT AN GOOD VERSE ELEVATE USIN MORE IMAGINARY,CREATIVE,AND WORD'S VOCAB

VIVID-U NEED TO ELEVATE THAT WASNT AN GOOD VERSE STR8 LACKED,,,,,,,DIDNT RHYMED PLUS HE DIDNT MADE SENSE
U NEED TO ELEVATE ON USIN WORDS-VOCAB-IMAGINARY-AND CREATIVE-LIKE PAINTIN AN PICURE,,,,,,,THA VERSE WASNT GOOD LACKED

V-POET CAUSE HE HAD BETTA IMAGINARY,CREATIVE,GOOD WORDS,VOCAB IN HIS VERSE

VIVID-ELEVATE ON EVERYTHING ON TOPICALS

~PEACE~ POET RETURN AN FAV IN MY OPEN MIC

THE LIGHTNING DA LINK ITS IN MY SIG MAYNE

Voted For: Poetikal Panda

poetikal panda:

are you a alias.....because i'm a panda too woot woot!:)
nice emotional depth in there...........................
story went nice and your vocabulary was good aswell...

vivid:

i really think you should of made the lines longer
so it could become more understandable and better story
but other then that pretty good emotion and depth
was there and everything nice battle:)

but i have to choose.....ummmm poetikal panda

ah well what can ya do im not a topical battler

but BK how about u set up a thread n let me son u in a real battle :)

Upping for this I'll Return the Honest Vote...Pz .......

Upping for this I'll Return the Honest Vote...Pz ....... :thumbup:

Voted For: Poetikal Panda

poeitkal took this hands down

vivd: what the fuck was that..only good thing about your verse was your flow..it was dope and it all flowed well together ...other than that...it was SHIT

poetikal...ur decent im feelin ur shit....visionary was ok.....i was feelin this too da fulllest.......

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

return da favour......
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=156859

Voted For: VIvID

hmmmmmm, i liked both, but some of pandas lines seemed kinda streched, or thats just how i red them neway. they were both good, but i just liked vivids a little better. no hate, peace

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

This was feedback posted for Poetikal Panda
 

cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here!

Upping for more Vote's People!!!!Don't Sleep On this........

This was feedback posted for Poetikal Panda
 

well an easy one to judge here...
vivids verse was too short to get enough imagery or depth into this battle.
what vivid put was actually quite good,but you blew it by not getting enough into it,flow,struc and vocab was pretty good...

oops i aint got 20 posts....so ill holla back shortly,
meanwhile can u both reurn tha fav...much appreciated
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=156905
however panda had more depth and imagery,and his vocab and complexity were jus on a higher level..
not bad for a quik drop at all.

Upping for This Battle C'mon Peep's Don't Sleep On This.......

Upping for this Batte Ya'll Needing this Closed Pz...!!!

Voted For: VIvID

what the fuck????
are u guys even battlin against each other or just tryin to rhyme whatever u want?
this was 1 of the worst battle iv seen
thats all i got to say

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Fuckin Cock-Face^^^^TOPICAL u fag...Anyway Uppin for vote's don't Sleep ...

Voted For: Poetikal Panda

man im not even gonna do those big votes like al the rest of the battles coz this one is soooo short lol...why cant all battles be this short...anyways..

i think that you won because you had better vocab and in topicals that is what paints the picture in peoples mind.

vivid i thikn you lost because of lac of vocab...go read a websters or something......pz

V/conclusion

:thumbup: return the favor in my sig....much appreciated.

Voted For: Poetikal Panda

ok i dont know were you came from panda but damn its like you came outta nowhere, and just started battlin and you have great wordin and damn. vivid i really liked yours you killed it with that ender i was likin that
"exhault thee, hold your name high
but question why do people die."
and panda that crip line damn. im'a have to give this to p both of yours was good though.

WTF!? I won, even with Vivid's Unexplained Vote's....Fuck it Upping for vote's...

either this guy is an alias of a mod or a mod's his friend why the hell did all my votes get dq'd dude already won like 5 -2 or 3 i dont remeber but thats pretty stupid that they didnt count certain votes

Voted For: VIvID

Aii This wHAT IT IS

OVERALL YO BOTH DI GOOD BETTER THAN I COULD DO IN A TOPICAL BUTI FELT VIVIDZ VERSE MORE ITS LIKE IT HHAD MORE MEANIN AND THE STRUCTURE WAS NICE ALTHOUGH *P~P* TOOK FLOW AND TECHNIQUE AND RAN WIT IT IT SEEMZ SOMETHIN TOL ME TO VOTE FOR VIVID SO MY VOTE IZ
VIVID

(CAN yOU GUYZ PLZ RETURN THE FAVOR BE NICE I VOTED FOR YOUR BATTLE SO PLZ CAN YOU VOTE FOR MY BATTLE AGAINST UNTOUCHABLE SO I CAN GET IT OUT OGF MY WAY I KNOW IMA WIN ITS JUS NOONEZ GIVIN DAT LAST VOTE IM NOT SAYIN VOTE FOR ME BUT JUS VOTE PLZ PLZPLZPPLZPZPZPLZPLZPL

PRETTY PLZ) lol

Voted For: Poetikal Panda

i liked conclusions verse better then vivids his was ight but conclusin was lil better at this topical but u should have put it in topical forum

Upping for votes peeps lets get this closed

Voted For: Poetikal Panda

MAN GUD BATTLE GUD FLO AND SRUCTURE BOTH COMPETETORS GOOD BATTLE BUT CONCLUSION TOOK IT OUT CUZ OF FLO MAYB WE KAN BATTLE SUM TIME