Monolo vs Notorious PIMP
 

Battle Rules:

8lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-26-04 at 05:27 PM

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Notorious PIMP has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 05:29 PM.

Monolo has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 05:32 PM.

i know how to fight, you can use a knife right?
don't act like ur windpipe, can't be ripped out of ur neck
don't act like you can't get a bullet right through ya head
i'm here for the bread
the butta' the juice
the butta on treis deuce, can knock ya tooth right loose
still in my youth
i've been actin the same daddy, some call me insane
they say i need help badly
you better not half-ass if u tryin to get at me
you pull a knife on me then u better stab me
or if u cockin that toast back then u better blast me
but if u don't want shit then u better just walk past me



Why Am I So Nasty?

This faggot cant win one distinctive battle and he is Monolo.
Man you don’t have a abode you live in the lavatory of Conoco.
The reason you live in there is cuz I come around you gotta go.
So I don’t diss you I feel sorry for you cuz you aint gott no dough.
But I’ll still merk you and hit you where it hurts player.
I’ll make you crumble every where bitch layer by layer.
I leave you with no finale at all just bitter life for ever to the end.
Well I’ll notice you on the wall of shame while I’m on the wall of fame.
Until we battle again.

good luck.......u wanna start a crew or not cuz ill ask some-1 else if not..........

Voted For: Notorious PIMP

om bout to battle this kid but ill give em props he nice flow word lay n structre good battle on ya part the other guy was weak but its all good no hate

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thats bull-shit, if ur gonna vote then vote 4 reel

aight i'll battle youu illusion 2morow man i cant do 4 battlez at the same time. my head hurtz.

Voted For: Notorious PIMP

Notorious got this.... PIMP... your structuer was really good....Ilike it.... A few linez streched........ But its allgood.....

Your punches hit really hard!!!.... Ilike em .....IF i were mono...i would consider myself merked... ha ha

Your flow was reaLLY GOOD ........ i could follow along real well~~..

And your wordplay was realy good...i like it!...

Mono>>>>>

Your structrue was horrible.. sry i hafta lay it down like this ...but yeah it was terrible.....

Your punches didnt relaly hit all that hard but they were in there.. nicetry....

Your flow...i didnt relally feel it.... Wasnt all that prettyy..

Overall I am going to giev this to Notorious for .... Well everyhting... lol...

Peace~~~~

sweet i'm getting votes. playing around.

Voted For: Monolo

Notorious PIMP: This faggot cant win one distinctive battle and he is Monolo.
Man you don’t have a abode you live in the lavatory of Conoco.

good 8/10

The reason you live in there is cuz I come around you gotta go.
So I don’t diss you I feel sorry for you cuz you aint gott no dough.

ehh not that good 6/10


But I’ll still merk you and hit you where it hurts player.
I’ll make you crumble every where bitch layer by layer.

good... 7/10

I leave you with no finale at all just bitter life for ever to the end.
Well I’ll notice you on the wall of shame while I’m on the wall of fame.
Until we battle again.

great! 9/10

Monolo: I leave you with no finale at all just bitter life for ever to the end.
Well I’ll notice you on the wall of shame while I’m on the wall of fame.
Until we battle again.

GReaT! 9/10

i'm here for the bread
the butta' the juice

its okay.. 6/10

the butta on treis deuce, can knock ya tooth right loose
still in my youth
i've been actin the same daddy, some call me insane
they say i need help badly

another Great! 9/10

you better not half-ass if u tryin to get at me
you pull a knife on me then u better stab me

its good 8/10

or if u cockin that toast back then u better blast me
but if u don't want shit then u better just walk past me

hot 9/10

Overall: Monolo

man you dont kno shit we aint the same person.

i still think mine was betta, no offence..........

none taken its good to think that but dont let it go too far.

upping this bitch.[ votes are needed to win battles.

Voted For: Monolo

Ayo sortin it out.......

the butta' the juice
the butta on treis deuce, can knock ya tooth right loose
still in my youth
^^Best line. FLow was alright soem ok multis no real punches but not bad. Much elevated from ya first battles. closer was ok. 4/10

But I’ll still merk you and hit you where it hurts player.
I’ll make you crumble every where bitch layer by layer.
^^Best line. Whack fuckin punches. no dough? Conoco? Whack as hell. Elevate like a ma fucker. Strutture n flow was off and no multis. 3/10

Ayo nice elevation by monolo. Keep elevatin

One

good looks 3rd-degree, at least one person knos wyd ther tlkin bout, uno.

what that was a unexplained vote shit he posted like he didnt even read it. i didnt have punches but you seem like you dont notice what vocab and wordplay is and why the fuck did you vote. I'm going to DQ that. no questionz.

Voted For: Notorious PIMP

ok for real im'a lay it out,pimp you rhymed "me" four times thats gonna kill you if, people who know what there talkin about are voting, and the first and last line have gotta be hard and yours wasnt what so ever, leg got this one easy, rhymes a lil to simple but cant always break out with some fantastic shit, but has alot more talent to know not to rhyme memememeemememememe.

yo third can you read, mono rhymed me four times. dick vote.

get at-stab-blast-those all rhyme, jus cuz i put me afta doesnt mean nuthin, why u hate so hard fam?

dont take that the wrong way, im not tryin' to hate at all, i just have a different style so i be feelin' wierd sayin "me" so many times, and you just never reall dissed him dogg,
you said alot of, dont do this, and, if you do this you better, nothin really like, if you do this, then this is what is goin to happen to you, really the only thing i can kinda see as hard diss is the "neck" line and the "bullete" line, no disrespect homes, sorry if i came off that way, but third does need to explain a lil more better, atleast i explained mine.
again no offense was to be taken, my bad cuz. good luck.

Voted For: Monolo

Aii This IS What I Feel

You Both Have Some Good Linez And Flow But My Overall vote Is:MONOLO

It Was Hard Bcuz Yall Verses Was Very Similar And I Was Surprised To See You To So Evenly MAthced But In The End Monolo Came Out On Top(Not GAy like) But N E Way Can YAll Do ME A FAvor Go And Vote On My BAttle Bcuz I Jus Need two More Votez To Win So Yall Plz Return The Favor,

Overall: MONOLO

My Battle link is At The Bottom On My Sig Thanx

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Ayo Dick ridin is not my deal ma fucka. And Real MC knows that the alst word is not always the important one in a verse, only Netcees always make taht ssumption.

You just ain't got enuff real world expierience.....

Anyway listen to any Artist they use the same word occasionally but the word before it changes. Even eminem does it.

And ghetto there rhymes were dead even. I gave to what i felt was better. I voted against monolo b4. Hes voted agaisnt me?

WHY THE FUCK WOULD I DICK RIDE FOR HIM?!?!?!?!??!?!

Fuck it, its moot.

One

This was feedback posted for Notorious PIMP
 

This is tight, you got monolo by the bollox for the first round!!

Voted For: Monolo

vote for monolo
breakdown:
punches:monolo
structire:tie..both was bad
multies: neither had any
personals:monolo..eventhough hardly none at all
vote goes ta monolo..but ma advice is ya both need ta elevate n improve majorly coz ta be honest ya both wack...peace out

unexplained vote damn if i see one more unexplained vote theres no telling what i'm gonna do.

Voted For: Monolo

monolo took this out no doubt had punches 6/10
had petetik vocab/4/10
but some aight flo 8/10
man the otha kid ,,, need 2wrk on vocab punches and the rest

man com on get a day job homies monolo ate this kat