Menik vs ~DESTINY~
 

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~DESTINY~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 07:19 PM.

Menik has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 07:28 PM.

Im goona win this battle you know that Menik? Word.
Ha ha ha, flip my bird, your unrhyming lines are so ubsurde,
When you battle your style is plain, you aint neer my game,
When I try to find where you at ,I look on the wall of shame.
Your lame, Your record might be good but your punches are not,
When Im done with this verse,Consider your chances shot!
I spitt out 10 linez, yet some how, i make 50 rhymes
The answer to you battlin me, is losing another time.
8 dash 2 , is the record for you, You know its true,
Well I am ready for a win, now that im done merkin you.

Somethin little..... hmm... i guess its good......

Peace~

Destiny's coming with played lines...Like over used football formations...
Cause my punches leave more black circles over ya eyes than dalmations!...
Damn...ya whack bitch....and the fact is...Your never gonna get a win!...
Losses keep coming back to you ....like when you spit into the wind!...
Damn newb...having so many battles at once...no wonder you cant rap nice...
Cause stepping to me leaves you sliding into defeat..like stepping on black ice!...
Your chances are slim...cause Destiny's future is looking very grim...
Cause Im spitting so hard, she's drowing in punches and she cant swim!...
Fucking newb, Im ripping ya too..cause I'm FINALLY giving her a chance...
I asked her to spit, she dropped to her knees and started unzipping my pants!...

Nice verse.... I like it....... Creative.... and some good wordplay....

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I dont know who you were spittin that verse to..... was it Lady fiya?..... .. Im a man you retard.. ha ha ... You fuck ed up your whole verse..~!

Peace~

This was feedback posted for Menik
 

cheking polls, cant vote!! not enough posts o well menik you had a nice flow

I actually did think you were a girl with that kind of name lol..Oh Well.

Voted For: Menik

Im goona win this battle you know that Menik? Word.
Ha ha ha, flip my bird, your unrhyming lines are so ubsurde,
^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK PUNCH HOMIE GOOD FLOW


When you battle your style is plain, you aint neer my game,
When I try to find where you at ,I look on the wall of shame.
Your lame, Your record might be good but your punches are not,
When Im done with this verse,Consider your chances shot!
I spitt out 10 linez, yet some how, i make 50 rhymes
The answer to you battlin me, is losing another time.
8 dash 2 , is the record for you, You know its true,
Well I am ready for a win, now that im done merkin you.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" PUNCHES GOOD FLOW NICE WORD-CHOOSIN BUT DA PUNCHES IS DA WEAKIST LINK HERE



Destiny's coming with played lines...Like over used football formations...
Cause my punches leave more black circles over ya eyes than dalmations!...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE NICE GOOD OPENER



Damn...ya whack bitch....and the fact is...Your never gonna get a win!...
Losses keep coming back to you ....like when you spit into the wind!...
Damn newb...having so many battles at once...no wonder you cant rap nice...
Cause stepping to me leaves you sliding into defeat..like stepping on black ice!...
^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCHES DECENT GOOD FLOW



Your chances are slim...cause Destiny's future is looking very grim...
Cause Im spitting so hard, she's drowing in punches and she cant swim!...
Fucking newb, Im ripping ya too..cause I'm FINALLY giving her a chance...
I asked her to spit, she dropped to her knees and started unzipping my pants!...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD CLOSA NICE SHIT

MEN-HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES GOOD FLOW NICE PERSONALS
DA PUNCHES WERE DA HARDEST HERE DA PERSONALS WERE "OK" DA FLOW WAS GOOD

OVERALL-THIS BATTLE IS AN "OK" BATTLE BUT I THINK MENIK GOT DIS CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES
DESTINY VERSE WAS TOO BASIC NOT GOOD CREATIVE PUNCHES

V-MENIK CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES GOOD WORDPLAYS NICE FLOW

NOT DESTINE CAUSE-U DIDNT HAD HARDER PUNCHES NOT CREATIVE TOO BASIC GOOD FLOW THOUGHT BUT ELEVATE USIN HARDER PUNCHES CREATIVE ONES TOO

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Voted For: ~DESTINY~

destiny won this 1 because of she had
a better structure actually both was good
verse overall was good
punchlines were hitten hard
wordplay hmm didn't see any

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Voted For: Menik

this verse was tight had nice flow rhymes meats timing flow good verse
destiney had baisc rhymes and not a very good flow its was aight i gues but ya lostby a far i vote for menik
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Voted For: Menik

Menik came harder in every category...better wordplay and punches... destiny urs was a bit basic...good shit from both tho

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Voted For: Menik

Menik-your puchlines were dope man!, and i liked your flow, the structure of it woz gud
Destiny-your verse woz gud, u definetely got skillz, but your verse had a slight sense of simplicity to it. it flowed well though.

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When you battle your style is plain, you aint neer my game,
When I try to find where you at ,I look on the wall of shame.
^^^Best line. No good metas or multis. a lot of self glorification. Shot line was whack, so was the 50 rhyme line. No real landed punches. 4/10

Destiny's coming with played lines...Like over used football formations...
Cause my punches leave more black circles over ya eyes than dalmations!...
^^^Best opening i heard in a while. Got better from there, cpet the grim line, little weak but all good punches and some great metas. Definetly a better drop. Closer was good too.6/10

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