Notorious Verses vs warrior
 

Battle Rules:

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-23-04 at 10:40 PM

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Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 10:29 PM.

warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 10:33 PM.

let me kick some knowledge

notorious verses' verse is notorious heres warriors explaination/
the definition of notorious means to have a bad reputation/(his verse is known to be bad)

ima fuck up "verses" so bad u gon have to edit~ya~self/
cause we all know ya wack man u even said~it~ya~self/


this bitches chances of "beatin me" is worst~then~an~armless~chick/
its like i tatooed my rhymes to my penis the way "verses"~be~on~my~dick/

im leavin verse~lost ya words~soft talkin shit will get this herb~tossed/
he found out "greatness cant be taught".....right after he got his third~loss/

my losses will neva go~to~three but ull get a vote hopefully/
id tell u to vote wit an alias but then again ull prolly vote~for~me/

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Yo Despite Da Hype I Gotta Short Fuse Like Black Jews
Anotha Check Of My List Of Emcees Like NIKE Shoes
Dawg Ur Flo Gets Credits Like Visa Cards Dats Stepped On
I Would Battle Cuz Even My Elevated Status Couldnt Stop Dis Match From Gettin Slept On
I Give Pleasure To Voters Cuz Dawg I Lyrically Grope
U Need To Note, Dat Lyricist Focus Like Bloods On Da East Coast
Dawg Da Flow Is Rediculous, Yes Understand Dat U AInt Da Sickest
Dis Win Im Obtainin Is A Good Addition Like Da Rap Olympics
Dawg I Slaughter Emcees, I Don Mean To Mingle
Dawg Worst Of All U Got Ur Name Of Lloyd Banks Single(Warrior)

anyway good drop dawg, good battle overall, uppin fo votes

Voted For: warrior


N.V.
yo u had some nice wordplay
but u had alot of self glory
your flow was good except for one area where it
got streched,jus next time don't use so much self glory and shit,I was saddened at this

Warrior
was wack and basic but punches when battles
your vocab and rhyme scheme was terrible,
no hate,but you only win this due to more
punches
then self glory


~most explained vote EVA~

peace niggas

BLA!

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

my vote goes to --notorious
He jus had a better verse, even though both were pretty good. I also like notorious's structure better, it made it easyer to read. Warrior word play was really good but i still have to give him a 8.8/10 and notorious a 9/10!

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Voted For: warrior

whoaaaaa....can u say LANDSLIDE ?????...heres da breakdown

punches - EASILY...warrior...punches were definately harder hittin n more direct...notorious had more of an open mic verse cuz he really wasnt tryin to get at Warrior 2 hard....warrior was eatin !!...simple n plain

personals - easily...warrior...nigga got him uglyyyy wen he sed U EVEN SAID IT YOURSELF...hahah dat shyt had me dyin !!!!...notorious wasnt really gettin at him as hard

meta4s - warrior...simply becuz he was more consistent wit his metas...he tied the metas into a punch which made em even better...notorious wasnt really competin wit that...like i sed b4...notorious had more of an open mic verse...wasnt really tryin to get at warrior

wordplay - definately warrior...edit-ya-self N said-it-ya-self...killin em...dat shyt wasnt hard but it was fuckin HALARIOUS...dat takes the cake in this catagory

enjoyment - must i go on...warrior...smashed em...punches were harder...had some good metas...wordplay was halarious...did his thing... CHEYA

Vote - Warrior


wud be apreciated if yall would hit me wit an honest vote on the battle in my sig...good look...

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This was feedback posted for Notorious Verses
 

Sorry to say but Warrior beat u.... u say Dawg to much mayun

uppin this..........................................

Voted For: Notorious Verses

weak battle all around
warrior had 6 lines wich were whack
and i cant even read the other dudes name is but he came a lil bit harder with a few meats and aight flow n rhyming but it was a still weak battle but keep tryin

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This was feedback posted for warrior
 

ha ha ha.....yo warrior that verse was sick with personals. keep it up and keep reppin that Wisemen Comittee...

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uppin fo votes, come on yall start votin......................

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come on uppin on dis battle lets go hurry up....................

Voted For: Notorious Verses

Eh... Notorious wins for being a lil more creative. Both didn't do good. The other guy relied to much on external metyhods to get his point across, links and quotes are archaic and won't get u anyplace much anymore. Just diss him and gewt creative, lke some wordplay or some shit. Notorious had multis, weren't very good, but they were there.

Vote: Notorious Verses

Voted For: warrior

i'ma vote for warrior

notorious verses was dope but i liked warrior's punches

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Voted For: warrior

Yo this one goes to Warrior mayne...

Punchlines-Warrior
Flow-Warrior
Structure-Notorious

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Voted For: warrior

Yo Despite Da Hype I Gotta Short Fuse Like Black Jews
Anotha Check Of My List Of Emcees Like NIKE Shoes
Dawg Ur Flo Gets Credits Like Visa Cards Dats Stepped On
I Would Battle Cuz Even My Elevated Status Couldnt Stop Dis Match From Gettin Slept On
I Give Pleasure To Voters Cuz Dawg I Lyrically Grope
U Need To Note, Dat Lyricist Focus Like Bloods On Da East Coast
Dawg Da Flow Is Rediculous, Yes Understand Dat U AInt Da Sickest
Dis Win Im Obtainin Is A Good Addition Like Da Rap Olympics
Dawg I Slaughter Emcees, I Don Mean To Mingle
Dawg Worst Of All U Got Ur Name Of Lloyd Banks Single(Warrior)
^^^^^^^^ REALLY U AINT PUT DOWN NO PUNCHES ALL FLOW U WAS TALKIN TO YA SELF NO PUNCHES ALL FLOW




notorious verses' verse is notorious heres warriors explaination/
the definition of notorious means to have a bad reputation/(his verse is known to be bad)

ima fuck up "verses" so bad u gon have to edit~ya~self/
cause we all know ya wack man u even said~it~ya~self/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Notorious Verses
ill battle either one of yall, im whack truss me.....



this bitches chances of "beatin me" is worst~then~an~armless~chick/
its like i tatooed my rhymes to my penis the way "verses"~be~on~my~dick/
^ WHOA NICE GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND FLOW I LIKE THA WAY U USE THAT QUOTE NICE FAM




im leavin verse~lost ya words~soft talkin shit will get this herb~tossed/
he found out "greatness cant be taught".....right after he got his third~loss/

my losses will neva go~to~three but ull get a vote hopefully/
id tell u to vote wit an alias but then again ull prolly vote~for~me/
^^^^^^ EH OK CLOSA NOT AN GOOD CLOSA BUT DA PUNCHES WAS EH OK


OVERALL= DIS BATTLE IS KIND ONE-SIDED WARRIOR HAD PUNCHES AND DID AN GOOD JOB BY USING THEM PERSONALS............BUT NOR.VERSUS HE DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES HE WAS BASICALLY TALKIN ABOUT HIMSELF AND NOT DISSING WARRIOR

SO VOTE WARRIRO HANDS DOWN

Voted For: warrior

hahahahahahahhahahahahahahaha
my losses will neva go~to~three but ull get a vote hopefully/
id tell u to vote wit an alias but then again ull prolly vote~for~me/

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^6 watta krak line gud punch man lol.....u had flow punches and awesome personals.had sum hard punches thre////// gud structure

notorious verses drop the DAWG u reallly need 2 wrk on flow punches and the bag u pretty much need 2 get off rv and wrk on ur rhymes and wrdplay ur best line wuz
I Give Pleasure To Voters Cuz Dawg I Lyrically Grope
U Need To Note, Dat Lyricist Focus Like Bloods On Da East Coast
Dawg Da Flow Is Rediculous, Yes Understand Dat U AInt Da Sickest
^^^^^^^ that wuz ok otha wize ur pretty krap wrk dawg no beeeef /////
return the favor wit my battles against hawk.........peace.....