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Parallel 10-23-04 09:48 PM

...Xclusive... vs Banks
 
Battle Rules:

8-12
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Due Tomorrow on Sunday...After checks

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 10-24-04 at 09:48 PM

Must drop verse in 1500 minutes after check in.

Parallel 10-23-04 09:52 PM

check your ass in biatch....

System 10-23-04 09:53 PM

...Xclusive... has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 09:53 PM.

System 10-23-04 11:15 PM

Banks has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 11:15 PM.

Capital Punishment 10-24-04 01:34 AM

discussing dick sizes with men, i knew something was wrong with ya
kid say's look i got a mustache, that's probably the wrong picture
x's is all about self glorification and trying his very best to fit in
kid's fourteen, his mom still has to wipe his ass when he's shitting
he's a gemini, he exaggerates the truth and really enjoys dick riding
stretches the truth a bit much, 80 push ups in 5 minutes, quit lieing
banned for cheating and also nuts in his pants, this boys a wreck *
unable to get girls so this nigga has to put hickies on his own neck
said he was man enough to post his own pic but carson jetx2 did it
merking him fuck his alias, i'm showing no mercy on x, do ya get it *
i guess u like when boys think u hot and judging them is ya reflex
u still a little kid so go join the rest of the special ed kids in recess




-most personals are on the same
page so scroll and read for proof
*he was banned for cheating
under an alias
*his alias is no mercy, lol

Parallel 10-24-04 02:23 AM

Banks, this wack bitch comes to rv changes his name 4 times…
When hes runnin his mouth he sounds like the "Beastie-Boys" spiten rhymes…
Hes gone threw the names Banks aka Myth aka “Quick-Witted”…
But still aint “fast” enough…to run his mouth when hes not “permitted”…
Your punchlines are wack why don’t you walk up the stairs for elevation…
Cause Obviously this “cat” just sits there “lazy” jeering his operation…
You’re an 18 year old freak that’s drunk “dead” from drinking booze…
You think your gonna sound good on a “lifeless” batteries fuse…
When Hes not fronting me on AOL he actually sounds more of a “fag”…
I realized that he “loves” Lloyd Banks what a “queer”, that’s why he don’t brag…

Parallel 10-24-04 02:24 AM

you better understand wordplay and punches to vote...:



Banks, this wack bitch comes to rv changes his name 4 times…
When hes runnin his mouth he sounds like the "Beastie-Boys" spiten rhymes…
Hes gone threw the names Banks aka Myth aka “Quick-Witted”…
But still aint “fast” enough…to run his mouth when hes not “permitted”…
Your punchlines are wack why don’t you walk up the stairs for elevation…
Cause Obviously this “cat” just sits there “lazy” jeering his operation…
You’re an 18 year old freak that’s drunk “dead” from drinking booze…
You think your gonna sound good on a “lifeless” batteries fuse…
When Hes not fronting me on AOL he actually sounds more of a “fag”…
I realized that he “loves” Lloyd Banks what a “queer”, that’s why he don’t brag…

Capital Punishment 10-24-04 02:36 AM

uppin for votes peeps, saw a few played lines but it's nothing new, not swaying trust me peeps, yea i hate this muthfucka but he spit some good shit but we'll see if it's good enough, we uppin for votes

Parallel 10-24-04 02:41 AM

word ya man i agree with yours you had some dope shit aswell not real punches but there personals like nuts im full of that shit but lets see...this is a close muthafucka i ahte this mof to but lets get votes and feed

The Militant 10-24-04 02:50 AM

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

ok BANKS ya go tmurdered haly ya flow didnt rhyme example :discussing dick sizes with men, i knew something was wrong with ya
kid say's look i got a mustache, that's probably the wrong picture:
x got this shit by a far ya cant win good floww structre n punces for x
x's is all about self glorification and trying his very best to fit in
kid's fourteen, his mom still has to wipe his ass when he's shitting

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Parallel 10-24-04 02:54 AM

^unexplained what you think banks? and banks you think this battle will shut are mouths and Cool this beef?

Capital Punishment 10-24-04 03:16 AM

probably but willa peer told me on aim that u told her to vote? but maybe regardless this might cool the beef, i didn't like how u said i was unloyal to me for leaving D2R when we were on AIM and u didn't even know u were talking to me until i told u and then u tried to apologize, u have already been banned once for cheating under another alias, let's not get banned again

The Militant 10-24-04 03:38 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Banks
probably but willa peer told me on aim that u told her to vote? but maybe regardless this might cool the beef, i didn't like how u said i was unloyal to me for leaving D2R when we were on AIM and u didn't even know u were talking to me until i told u and then u tried to apologize, u have already been banned once for cheating under another alias, let's not get banned again

did ya call me a girl ya fuckin chump punk pussy

Implicit 10-24-04 04:02 AM

Voted For: Banks

damn nice battle. both had some nice lines in their verses

Banks - sick verse. you hit him with a personal every line. it was tight. some funny stuff. flow was on point. your structure was good. ur lines were even and everything. you had an okay opener but finished it off better. i liked the line aout his mom wiping him. that was funny. and the line about his alias. that was clever. overall 9/10


xclusive - u had an ok verse. not really any punches or personals that stood out. your flow was ok and so was your structure but u didnt have any good punches. you tried a couple of personals but they didnt work out. overall 6/10


banks won this battle based on his personals and punches and the fact that xclusive lacked hard hitting punches or personals

Capital Punishment 10-24-04 04:05 AM

to the dumb fuck named illusion who would get owned by me, as u see it says he pmed will a peer u stupid faggot, is ya name will a peer no, so shut the fuck up before i deliver u l number 17

Red Stroke 10-24-04 05:51 AM

Voted For: Banks

nice battle good flows both yall came at each others throats Banks came harder tho with tha personals and vocab punches was hittin his target looks like his targets bin damaged good flow structures was neat both yall was cool GOOD BATLLE

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Capital Punishment 10-24-04 11:40 AM

Explain ya fucking votes people, we uppin for more honest votes

Capital Punishment 10-25-04 03:57 AM

uppin for honest explained votes peeps

Capital Punishment 10-25-04 12:07 PM

we uppin for honest explained votes peeps

Capital Punishment 10-25-04 04:25 PM

uppin for this shit, let's get some honest explained votes in here

Paris Hilton666 10-25-04 04:27 PM

This was feedback posted for Banks
 
loose the links

Capital Punishment 10-25-04 10:40 PM

kiss my ass and stop following my threads, uppin for honest explained votes peeps

Capital Punishment 10-26-04 02:09 PM

uppin for honest explained votes peeps

Parallel 10-27-04 02:21 AM

stop upping for votes or i will pm about it you do it way to much...maybe 3 times a weak thats good enough...

Capital Punishment 10-27-04 02:24 PM

there is no limit to uppin, it says u can up every three hours so i do that so peeps will vote, so ya gonna fucking puss out and get me dq'd for the win, fucking pussy, WE UPPIN FOR HONEST EXPLAINED VOTES PEEPS

Capital Punishment 10-27-04 11:06 PM

uppin for some fucking honest explained votes peeps

Kawn Flixx 10-27-04 11:16 PM

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

iight this jus feedback

sicei can't vot for various reasons

I say Banks ad some good punchlines
and better structure
but some of his punches were played
like that shittin line

only played like X had was the closer
and his pucnhes were more complex in a way
its a close battle but
i say X win------can't vote though :(

Removed

Kawn Flixx 10-27-04 11:17 PM

oops I Voted

the mods will remove this...

Banks you know I tweak alot :(

Capital Punishment 10-28-04 03:11 PM

uppin this for honest explained votes peeps

Triple_N 10-28-04 11:43 PM

Voted For: ...Xclusive...

goos battle

Banks........your structure was good, flow was good but too many links it made your verse wack....the persoanls were there but u didn't deliver them right...your punches coulda been better.

Xclu.......your verse wasn't much better just less played...its a tough decision cuz ya punches was weak too but more original...tough vote but gave it to u.

vote: xclu

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Capital Punishment 10-29-04 02:54 PM

uppin for honest explained votes peeps

Parallel 10-29-04 09:25 PM

wheres the votes come on wiggas....................

Parallel 10-30-04 02:42 AM

wtf...vote, vote, vote..................................

New Meth0d 10-30-04 03:54 PM

This was feedback posted for ...Xclusive...
 
this was a close battle..........both had good structure and punches were pretty even

eye-way too many link punches and they didnt really hit hard.....and i hate having to search to find the post youre talking about next time link your punches so that only one post shows.......punches were aight flow was off at points
i could see where you were going withya shit but the links threw it off..........basically all the links killed it for ya

ex-punches were also aight flow was better.......strucutre was good.....you had better wordplay.........wordplay basically got this for you and the facto eye had all those links
basically ex got this for haveing a slightly better verse the links just killed it for eye

just realized i cant vote so this really doesnt mean anything

New Meth0d 10-30-04 03:55 PM

wow didnt know eye was in my crew............my bad

Capital Punishment 10-31-04 01:28 AM

uppin for honest explained votes peeps

Parallel 10-31-04 03:59 PM

uppin...come on vote...come on vote....................o and banks sry for saying you cant up shit i read soomething from justify or w/e and he said your not allowed to up lots but who cares up lots..

Capital Punishment 11-01-04 10:28 PM

uppin for honest explained votes, come on peeps

Parallel 11-01-04 10:42 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Capital Punishment
uppin for honest explained votes, come on peeps


i think all of your d/r's have voted now:D

Capital Punishment 11-02-04 04:18 PM

we uppin for honest explained votes, come on peeps


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