Triple_N vs AutoMATIK™
 

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AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 01:00 AM.

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 01:05 AM.

Ah'ight son here's my spit...............Good luck to ya


You are the apparent spokesman for all net-thugs and I despise your sight
Cuz Only way u bust slugs is not watchin' ya step in moist folliage at night
U try tirelessly to give off this thoruoghbred thug pimp persona in ya rhymes
When only time u "clockin' hose" is trying to beat your previous lawn time
I spent 15 minutes peepin' ya tracks & your alicia keys parody was booty
Now....I want my "quarterback" to "audible" his "plays" into silent movies
You wack, and I'm a make u "see the light" like albinos lookin' in the mirror
Punches quake gon "shake dat shit" like dance lessons by a showerless shakira
So don't waste time & money droppin a CD...seriously dawg whats the use?
Cuz it wouldn't be rotational by itself playing a game of duck, duck goose

uppin for some honest votes>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

wooooooooorrrrdddd

Voted For: Triple_N

first off Automatik:
normally u come harder than you did.. the opener was str8 self-glorification, keep in mind this is a battle.. i was disappointed with;
It's a Known Fact Clowns Like This Will 'Never Be Nice'
I Spit In All Angles Quick ... So I Should Of Been Named A 'Veteran Twice'
My Rhymes Are Too Blazin To ‘Hold It’ Imma Rip Ya Face Till ‘It’s Folded’
^u should stop puttin' apostrophes thru ur verse, it's easy to see ur wordplay and etc... BUT
after the beginning portion, u did have some hard-hittin' punches like the baseball line with the bases loaded, not bad :), u had sum aight couple of lines UNTIL the last bar another self-glorification:
It’s nothing … This Battles Over,Either You In Or You 'Out Son' ...
I Spit illness So I'll Probably Be Too Sick To Remember the 'Out Come'
^no good, nice flow, aight structure but quit mentionin' urself throughout keep attackin' him like he stole a million dollars from ya ass.. not bad but i'd say 6/10 :(

next, Triple N:
better metas in urs.. kinda funny too.. u had the better opener and closer- using rotation and duck, duck goose lol... original, u didn't need the quote (") marks either, ur wordplay was also very clear.. ur best lines were the quaterback and the lawn time with- clockin' hose.. ha ha, not bad, ur flow was alright ur structure was mo' stretched than usual but u delivered harder punches and had better vocab.. 7/10 :)

u both did a good job, g'luck with this and hit up my open battle.. :)

Voted For: Triple_N

Personals Personals Personals. Automatik shit was aite punches here and there but i could find a decent personal.... and i found 2 on triple's

I spent 15 minutes peepin' ya tracks & your alicia keys parody was booty
Now....I want my "quarterback" to "audible" his "plays" into silent movies

^^This one was the nicest but played on some ways..but made me laugh and the other one about the cd at the end....

V/T

why: personals + Punches = Win

Simple math.

Uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>can We Get Some Votes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 

just checking polls....................................

Uppin for some votes on this.......................

Voted For: Triple_N

yo one sided battle

automatik
i expected more from you kid,your punches were wack,but u did have some nice wordplay and flow,and your structure was coo....but man u did not have any punches at all in this battle man...what happened?:(

triple N
you however had some nice and witty punches i liked that man,you had okay wordplay,and your flow plus your structure were decent,i think you won this man you came creative...

overall-triple n won this with better punches,creativity,and flow and structure,auto u did ok with the wordplay,and flow etc....but you didnt have hard hitting punches....and i seen better battles from you man....but yeah triple gets this

v/triple n

yeh yeh ... Triple took this one . i had like 5min to key up some shit ... it would of been alot more interesting if i had more time ...

but good battle ...

Voted For: Triple_N

good battle right here...real close...
Auto, ya verse was straight...the structure was on point so the it had a nice flow to it...punches were coo, the concepts behind them were good, but they it seemed like they coulda hit harder...but i didnt like your opener/closer cuz they were both self-glorification...

Triple, i liked ya verse too...structure was decent, but the lines were a lil stretched so the flow was hurtin a bit...but your punches were good...i was lmao @ some of them like the 'hose' line...some punches werent entirely original, but they had a different twist to 'em like the shakira line...which was coo i guess...overall, u had better consistency cuz u hit Auto in everyline...anyways,

V/ Triple N, for more consistency...

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 

Uppin for a well explained honest vote PLZZZZZZZZZZZ

Voted For: Triple_N

Yo seriously this battle wasn't that great. Automatik you spent to much time self glorifying, instead of throwing punches. No really hard hitting punches at all. Triple your lines were way stretched. Some good wordplay, punches were okay, not your best by any means. Definitely enough to take this battle. some advice to automatik work on your punches and personals, no hate. peace.