~Miss Avy~ Freestyle
 

This is some quick shit... not my best but it is a drop.


~Miss Avy~

Avy that bitch who kills and no one sees
At my decree beheading pricks slaughtered at my feet
With no trick-or-treat I leave em breathless like I'm god
Shit be named a fraud from ripping mods to defensless broads
No one can stop this "Royal Highness" from marking dem clowns
From Lil'Kims' to Foxy Browns' I be stealing all dem crowns!
And no it's not the kind ya cap on ya tooth, here's the proof
The truth is I knock too many bitches, I'm the female Babe Ruth!
Yo To all these crews who be talking shit on this diamond piece
I'll scratch a "crease" in ya skills and make yall bleed for reals
From Poppin pills to dick enlargement thrills what a joke
Just cuz ya broke in rhymes and ya ghostwriters write for dimes
In the prime it's a crime and now it's time for some punishment
From the "Heaven Sent" ones bitches get down and repent
While bowing down to me then rap this bitch rap up with a bang
The "Muderess" had disordained bitches and left them critically insane!!

hahaha that my girl..

^lol tru tru.

uppin this shit.

so so so so violent....lol, i lyke that....this was pretty n.y.c.e. for a key...you incorporated all tha elements and flowed it well...keep this shit upZ gurl....

-holla

^Thanks for the love and feedback. It was appreciated :)

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Good shit gurl,,some fya lines in there, for a quick drop this was dope...keep at it..1

^Thanks for the positive feedback mami. Much Appreciated.

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miss avy, a connfessions part 4 remix?? itll be nice to have a lady on it

^sure that be cool. PM me with what you have in mind about it.

This str8 i was feeling the middle more than anything kind of fell off in the rhyme scheme to me toward the end and then it picked up with in the last couple lines..but the opener and middle part of this was nice. props better than i expected.

^Aiight thanks for the feedback ma. As I said before, It is much appreciated.

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damn! u got some mad talent Miss.......dis almost made me crawl under my desk lol....luv da wordplay n erything....keep up da positive work girl..10/10

feelin it miss avy.u got skillz 4sho.wuz feelin da whole thing no complaints.keep em comin'.

Good Shit Ma Some Tight Lines This Piece Was Fresh 9.5/10 Do ya Thing

Thanks for the love everyone. It makes a person feel good when people are scared of it or some shit like that lol... but the feedback was very much appreciated. :)

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hey miss a, how bout me you and epic make a remix to when we were lovers?

^Alright cool. Sounds good to me :)

ill pm you toommorow with the info cool?

^coolcool. I will get on later today to check my pms.

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towards the end, the rhyme scheme tried to fall off, but sum nice content overall, nice freestyle, too..