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Ike vs king~~dipset
Battle Rules:
15-20 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting TOPIC: love for hip hop Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-27-04 at 09:34 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Ike has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-26-04 09:16 PM.
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King~~Dipset has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-26-04 09:20 PM.
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Ayo Letz Talk Bout My love Jus for this Hip~hop
U See These verses Show ove Right To the Tip~top See ive been Doin This for A While Since b4 Flip~Flopz I Love This life this hip Hop Culture I "sir (Sure) rap Alot" So My mouth Run Like A Motor I Like The culture But The Love Give me Cold Shoulders I Wake Wit Rap Like Lawyerz Wit Folgers My love 4 da Game is Ova Da limit of Boulderz Deez Suckaz claim To Love The Game But all They Want is The Fame I Came to bring Shame on Niggaz Dat Lame See I Heard it all B4 Jus like India Aurie I Cheated the Game Once B4 but im So sorry the Game Took Me BAc in When i Was at my Worst Stealin From the crackhouse And sellin Liverwurst Sometimez i Jus ryme till my liverburst U C i Can Spit A Whole Love verse Witout one Curse For Da love of Hip Hop Id Leave Ya Head in Bedrock If U Disrespect The Game the U gets In Headlocks All love for Every rapper Even Lilwayne N Derdlockz And This IS An Example Why Im Goin Str8 to The Top And Guess Wat?.....i Did It All for the Love Of Hip Hop |
its how the kid uses an accent, the way that he talks fly
imitates a pimp with a limp when he struts as he walks by its how he releases anger with a pen and some paper releases venemous vapor, with his sinister nature its how you always see the kid with his headphones blaring nodding his head and vibing, aint no parents gon' tell him nothin different, dont oppose his style, he knows he's wild, he'll just blow you off if you hate he just go's ahead to brush his shoulder off its how he's his own person, how he writes his raps its how he's so certain of how he's right for rap its how theres no doubt in his mind that he's destined to blow its how the more shit he goes through, the better his flow its how he gets a new record and you wont see him for a month cause he's locked in his room listenin, learning every single punch its how he flows, how he learns, how he rips,and how he rocks its the only things he knows, its his love for hip hop |
aright....looks like it could be a pretty close battle....good luck.....uppin for some votes
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uppin for votes......lets get the votes goin........
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uppin again for votes.......someone vote on this....its a good battle
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uppin for votes again....lets get some votes in here...its a good battle
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vote people!!!!!!!!! lets get some votes in here........
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dayum can we get some honest votes in the bitch........uppin
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damn we cant even get one vote on this.........uppin
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uppin for vote yet again........lets get some votes in here
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Voted For: King~~Dipset
king dipset- had punches came kindda hard had a copual of personals it all good there son he didn thave much stuckture but he had punches n stuff so he did good hardly nything wrong with his verse but his stuckture so all good mayne :thumbup: ike- had some punches n persnals didnt land very well came weak but the worsed thing was he always repeated him self Quote:
overall- my votes going to king~~d he came harded didnt repeat himself a 10000 times just he get my vote coming hard n not repeating himself its clear going to him |
OPPPS or well..............................................
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wtf are u talkin about? this wasnt a battle....this was a topical......punches and personals? did u even read it?
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Voted For: Ike
very nice, smooth verse... heres how i broke it down: its how the kid uses an accent, the way that he talks fly imitates a pimp with a limp when he struts as he walks by -haha... wannabe pimp its how he releases anger with a pen and some paper releases venemous vapor, with his sinister nature -nice use of multis its how you always see the kid with his headphones blaring nodding his head and vibing, aint no parents gon' tell him -didnt catch a rhyme there at all nothin different, dont oppose his style, he knows he's wild, he'll just blow you off if you hate he just go's ahead to brush his shoulder off -nice its how he's his own person, how he writes his raps its how he's so certain of how he's right for rap - rhymes rap and rap, but still flows smoothly its how theres no doubt in his mind that he's destined to blow its how the more shit he goes through, the better his flow -very nice its how he gets a new record and you wont see him for a month cause he's locked in his room listenin, learning every single punch -good, i like it its how he flows, how he learns, how he rips,and how he rocks its the only things he knows, its his love for hip hop -nice but, sounds more like a song or poem than a battle.. didnt really git any real punches.... but it was pretty dope, so ill give it 2 u. it was also much easier 2 read |
lol well we both got a crappy vote against us so i guess we just keep it at 1-1 and not worry about disqualifying the votes....uppin
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Voted For: Ike
ike got this easily but i did like both but king just didnt keep me as interested as ikes.ike had an old school style to it but both do need elevation on topics,u have to have the knowledge of hip hop history in your head if you wanna maek this topical perfect but none of u showed that.well keep it up ya;ll but ike gets it for being more on my style.good multis from king dipset tho but not a good flow from him so there. ps.return the favor ya'll in my sig thx -1- |
aright thanks for the votes....uppin again lets get this battle over with
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Voted For: King~~Dipset
... aight this was a decent topical. i liked the topic and ya both did ya thing so this is my breakdown King- great wordplay and creativity... structure was hit and miss tho so keep elevatin on that aspect of it.. over all i liked ya verse, it was powerful and had a lot of meaning to it...7/10 Ike- wordplay was...aight. creativity was good and structure was ok. i liked ya verse all except when you said its how over and over and over and over again... WAY to repetative... no hate hommie. overall verse 5/10 not a bad battle but King won this one... no hate to Ike cause you came and did ya thing and i respect that... good battle and stay up...keep elevatin both of you.. good battle VOTE-King |
uppin on this battle yet again......lets get some votes
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uppin this battle yet again.....someone vote on this shit and get it over with
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uppin for votes again....lets get some votes in here
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uppin for votes again.....lets get this over with...
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uppin on this.....somebody vote..............................
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Voted For: Ike
king-dipsett: ima be real, i wasnt really feeln yo flow dawg(but no hate) u had some nice stuff in there, but i think thruout yo whole verse u were kinda repeating urself...yo structure was not good to me, because u had too mnay stretched line, but u did stay on topic. ur rhyming words were too simple also...i rate yo verse 4/10 ike: i wasnt really feeln urs either, but it was better in my opinion, slightly because yo structure was better, and because this is text, i could understand it better. yo rhymin words were good, and un-predictable, and u came consistent thru yo entire verse. u also stayed on topic, and had more creativitie overall-i voted for ike because he had better structure and explained the topic better...he also spread his verse around(which kinda falls in structure)...just an all around better verse...but good drop, both yall... 1 |
aright thanks for the vote ...........lets get this shit over with already....been up too long
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lets get this shit over with already.................
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ok let get this shit over with already dammit......taking to long
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dammit can we get this over with........................somebody vote
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This was feedback posted for Ike
increase your vocab..... checking polls
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Voted For: Ike
King decent punches...kinda connected hardly saw any persona's..but thats aight structure lack'd..for that 1 line tho... vocab was aight... overall decent drop...elevate more on yo punches & persona's tho... Ike decent drop...everything was on point nice punches...they connected a little.. ya structure was ur only flaw there..... okay persona's up in there...decent vocab too...overall u had a decent drop too...elevate more also.. |
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Voted For: Ike
Bit of a weak battle by both and the Topic is really played. King didn't really impress me in this battle, I thought that his whole verse was pretty basic and precitable... Flow was ok, vocab ok, a below avrage topical verse I would say. U need to up your game no hate... Ike Kind of the same thing really didn't impress me with your verse but you had better flow and better vocab thats about it an avrage topical verse.. Both need to up your game. Vote Ike |
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